Biology Project 2nd Poll
Added 2024-02-24 02:04:07 +0000 UTCalright everyone, so it looks like accidental digestion won! for this next poll, I want to know what you guys want them to do while inside her stomach.
Personally I like doing these polls. Really let’s you guys get involved :)
Comments
First about Tidal: Yes, that was one of my thoughts. It would probably be a little tight in the stomach, but sooner or later the girls would probably make it further into Angelica's bowels. Maybe even that they keep crawling because they are still there even after hours in the stomach and Angelica's body cannot carry them on alone. Which of course could have led to some concerns about their original plan... 🤔 But from the first pages, the two girls seem very confident in their idea and definitely very "happy". And we all know people who always look at the positive. As cruel as it sounds, this could be one of the reasons why they keep going despite the initial obstacles. Not just to get out, but because “everything will be fine anyway…” 🤭 However, the fact is that the human body is not designed to transport “objects that are too large” through it. Especially not quickly... 🤷 It would therefore be very likely that the time spent in the intestines would be extended many times over. I'm not sure what's behind the statement that the two can't be digested quickly enough - a likely skin resistance to the acids perhaps? (on page 1 to convince Angelica of this plan). 🤔 Quite conceivable and useful for a story like this. 👍 But even some resistance would diminish over time. 😉 And Angelica's stomach has certainly done so much work after a while (even though it may not be visible to either of them) that at some point everything in the intestines ends badly for both of them. J3DGTS, thank you very much for the quick answer and the explanation about the cell Phone. ❤️ I didn't know she now carries her phone like a headlamp. Of course it makes more sense than constantly holding it in your hand... I hadn't thought about that. 😅 And please forgive me for thinking so much about this story and the girls' situation, but I really like this story about the three friends and their potentially fatal mistake. At this age you often act a bit rashly and have an overly positive attitude... 🤭 Somehow very tragic, but in a beautiful way. 🥰 This really stimulates my creativity and the excitement of how this story continues. I thank you very much for that. ❤️ I'm really looking forward to the next pages.
Xigbar
2024-02-24 15:48:15 +0000 UTCWow thanks for the kind words! I love your idea. I’ll actually be using parts of it in the upcoming pages, so thank you! As for your suggestion about the camera/phone, the reason I didn’t use a camera was because now in the comic, she has the phone strapped to her head to film everything (which wouldn’t make sense with a full sized camera) also in my head, it just makes more sense for someone her age to only own a phone, as for your emergency call concern, my logic was when the phone is shrunken down, it’s cellular range also shrinks, and because of that, they have no service and can’t make phone calls. Hope that clears it up :)
J3DGTS
2024-02-24 14:33:55 +0000 UTChope to see some struggle beyond her stomach, they won't survive but must not die too early, too. ;)
Tidal
2024-02-24 13:57:03 +0000 UTCI find the story interesting and really charming. 🙂 I also voted for "random" and "combat" as I think that's the most likely given current developments. The girls were convinced that everything would turn out well. Just a little adventure with her friend... But maybe there was a small, unnoticed mistake? Angelica had already mentioned that they were both a bit big and obviously it wasn't that easy to swallow them. So maybe this is where the story goes wrong and they can't penetrate Angelica's body fast enough to survive? 🤔 Maybe after a few hours they will realize that Angelica's body is taking them far too slowly. And that's why their reasoning doesn't work. Of course, this leads to panic (I guess that's how anyone would feel in this situation - it was only planned as an experimental trip). And Angelica could misunderstand the fight (depending on where the two are by then) and think everything is fine. Because of their size, they may also only be able to scream and wriggle a little in certain parts of their body. What Angelica would feel, but wouldn't have to understand as a struggle. She probably won't notice anything strange until a day or two since her friends don't show up. The only sticking point in this fantasy is the cell phone problem that one of them has with her. 🤔 What prevents you from making an emergency call? Personally, I probably would have included a camera in the story instead of a cell phone. This doesn't help in an emergency and at best records everything that happens. And the purpose of the recording is also interesting... For example, this could be the only thing that Angelica finds afterwards and thereby learns what exactly happened in her. I think your reaction to these pictures would be interesting too. 🤭 Finally two points: Firstly, English is not my language, so I use a translator for that. I hope that everything is still understandable. Secondly, kudos for your work. Although I realized I liked this type of content over a decade ago, I find the search for good content very frustrating. And her work really has a lot of potential. That's why I'm hoping for a lot more content. 👍 And I also hope that my statements on this point are not misleading. I just wanted to show in short words how this story would currently develop for me. But you probably already have your own thoughts on this. However, you are free to use what is said if there is something you like about it. A great job. And I am very excited to see what our researchers will experience and see on their exciting Journey. 😉
Xigbar
2024-02-24 13:04:31 +0000 UTCLooks like the votes are going full evil route 😈
Hozomat
2024-02-24 07:17:13 +0000 UTC
