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A regular day at the nakano bath

It will be a pretty foamy bath for sure

Nino,Itsuki,Miku from quintessential quintuplets

Yeah.. I need to improve that title, here you have the [original drawing] Did i make progress?

well here it is finally the winners of the poll of the explicit version of last month, if I delayed is because I wanted to do something more special for this occasion, so I hope you like this improved version of the original drawing! :D

A regular day at the nakano bath A regular day at the nakano bath

Comments

Beautifully done! Especially loving the Eatsuki! It’s insane how much your art and your skill has grown since the original piece.

Fallfallen

50/50 yeah... sorry I had to rush the text, because today I wasn't going to have much time, I improved it, thanks for letting me know <3

SauteedSimon

Oh my god! This looks amazing 😍 All 3 girls look big, hot and lovely. And yes my friend, you improved. Your art is now more refined. Can't wait to see more art from you (and more Quintuplets art from you) P.S. But I think something is not right with the dialogue here. Miku says that because of Nino's stomach (belly, I think, would be the appropriate word to use here), she can't see the scale. And then Miku says that if she presses HER own stomach then she'll be able to see the scale? I think you mean if she presses Nino's stomach, not her own. And "Futaro could enjoy massaging a belly that big or sleep IN it" is a bit wrong. The right version of this sentence would be: "Futaro could enjoy massaging a belly that big or sleep ON it" Then the dialogue between Nino and Itsuki. "The other day I had to pull you out of the chair so those love handles out", I have some trouble understanding what Nino said there. Specifically the part about love handles. There are probably some words missing. And what does Nino mean that she swallowed one of the buttons? They speak about popping buttons and also eating them? There is definitely something not right in the dialogue (or I'm in the wrong here and didn't understand the dialogue correctly)πŸ˜…

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