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Chapter 200: Kin to the Fog

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I'm a big fan of Avena. I hope nothing bad happens to her.

Rosy Bramble

I thought the same. It's kinda cute, and also descriptive, nobody has to remember who had which main trait because it's right there in the name.

Narf

Thrilling comment.

Narf

Correction: Unfortunately for them, I was immune to their toxins, which made them ideal bait to lure into the clearing. bait -> prey Bait would be applicable if she used the eels to bait in other creatures, but she's hunting the eels themselves, which means they are prey, not bait. Bait is what her clones are. That Lazy is not content being able to stay put and, well, be lazy while waiting for the others to return is also rather at odds with her main trait. Should that not be exactly what that clone would want? I could understand her needing to be bonked if she was sent out to lure in monsters.

Narf

This is an interesting way to handle this trial and makes a lot of sense. The colosseum gives them tools they need to tackle their next trial from the one prior which means that Jade will probably get something from this one as well. Also I wonder why her status is broken, I wonder if it's both her divinity clash but also the colosseum having issues with someone actually having access to it when normally the beastkin don't.

shiba

I genuinely hope that the clones keep their names. Terrorist, Lazy and Curious are perfect

Max W.

You try to scream, but terror steals the sound before you make it

Summer Coff

The insightfulness of the Ancestors who construct the trials has been greater than I could have imagined. One correction: leaving things to Fate Since you refer to Fate as a being on the next sentence, Fate should be capitalized here.

jeffh4

You're probably thinking of Avyna from Blind Chaos.

matt

Avena is the kid, right? Is it just me or does that name sound familiar for some reason? Thanks for the chapter and happy new year!

PrometheusDarkflame

It does sound like a very elven last name…

PrometheusDarkflame

I, uh... might have forgotten.

MangOwO

So does anyone else think that Reiner Everhart might actually be an elf? And that's the reason an elf form was offered to Jade when she ranked up her transformation ability? P.S. instead of a human form, for example.

Sean C Jackson

Awww, no afterwards character quips?

PhoenixDragon


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