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Rachael’s Ascension: Director’s Cut - Chapter 5

CHAPTER 5: UPGRADES ON UPGRADES

Confused, Chad found himself opening the door for Caley for the second time that day, only this time, it was significantly harder to breathe in her presence. For the first—well, second—time in his life, he understood where the term breathtaking came from. Instead of facing a shy, petite schoolgirl as he had earlier, he faced one of the most beautiful women on the planet., her raven tresses swirling in the afternoon breeze.

“Chad…” Caley said urgently before pausing momentarily, starting again, this time in her sexiest, sultriest voice. “Chad. My incredibly handsome and devastatingly brilliant Chad,” she said, her eyes intense as they gazed into his. “I want more potion.”

The statuesque stunner leaned in, whispering into his ear. “And I want you inside me when I drink it.”

Chad was floored, listing precariously to the right as he heard Caley’s final words. Then, it hit him. She was joking.

Chad smiled, wagging a finger at his sister’s friend. “You almost had me there for a minute.”

A flicker of annoyance crossed Caley’s exquisite features. For the second time in under an hour, a man was blowing off her best attempts at seduction. Her! As beautiful as she was, shouldn’t they be eating out of her hand from the word go?

Caley’s eyes narrowed for a moment before she closed them, calming her rising heart rate and slowing her frustrated breath before continuing. She didn’t need to take her frustration out on Chad. That wouldn’t be fair. He was helping her after all, even asking nothing in return. She should be rewarding his efforts, not being a bitch to the poor guy.

“I’m not joking, Chad,” she said, pushing past him into the house. “I’m serious.”

“Bw’uh…” Chad stammered, staring uncertainly at Caley. He was clearly attempting to gauge whether she was actually serious or simply continuing some attempt to mess with him. “...okay…” He drew out the word as if using it to buy time to think.

Caley didn’t give him any more. The protracted word of acquiescence was enough for her. She smiled, grabbed him by the hand, and marched the two of them up the stairs and into his room, closing the door behind them.

Caley’s eyes glimmered as the reflection of a full flask of blue liquid shone in her dilating pupils. She smiled hungrily as she turned to face her benefactor once again.

“I’ve been thinking, Chad. Since hormone pills seem to have an effect on the potion, maybe other things involving hormones could help, too.” Caley’s expressive eyes found Chad’s urging his thoughts to follow hers, his desires to follow hers.

“Things like sex.” Caley’s doe eyes smoldered as her luscious lips formed the word with such dark enthusiasm that it gave Chad goosebumps. The boy shifted his hips uncomfortably as an erection began to tent his increasingly tight jeans.

“Besides,” Caley said. “I still have half a bottle of estrogen pills in my system…” Her voice dropped to a husky rasp. The idea of another round of improvements even more substantial than the last made her shiver in anticipation.

“What do you think, Chad? Would you maybe like to make love to the most beautiful girl that you’ve ever seen while she becomes even sexier?” Caley’s eyes took on a dark, sultry look as she tilted her chin slightly downward, making them seem to loom even larger as she looked down on him.

Chad gulped audibly, the image she created in his mind rendering him unable to speak. Caley sauntered around Chad’s rigid form, trailing a manicured nail along his shoulder to the center of his taut, quivering back.

“A girl who becomes something more than human! A sexy angel in your arms…” she whispered into his ear from behind, emphasizing the word “angel.”

“I would be your greatest creation… the perfect lover,” she promised huskily, eyes flashing with sensual hunger.

Chad’s body quivered at the thought, the muscles of his hips tightening under the tantalizing spell of her words. My God, she is sexy, he thought. At the moment, it was the only thought he could seem to get his brilliant mind to muster.

Caley continued to circle him, her rounded hips brushing against his as the more-than-willing girl returned to her original position before him. Just when Chad thought his straining cock couldn’t get any harder, she pressed her body to his. His erect member pressed into her upper thighs, feeling just how firm her muscles were, pushing into her barely covered upper thighs.

Chad gasped at the feel of her body against his, his last thoughts of resistance melting away, lost in a sea of molten desire for the luscious creature towering over him.

Caley’s lips parted in a languid smile, the girl clearly pleased that her second attempt at seduction was proving far more successful. She peeled her mesh top off with a slow, graceful movement of her willowy arms, tossing it to the side with a sexy smirk. The stunning brunette thrust out her prodigious chest as her arms moved back deliberately, reaching behind her to unclasp her bikini top, letting the tiny bits of cloth and string fall to the floor.

Her body naked before Chad’s hungry eyes, Caley slithered her slim fingers through Chad’s thick hair, pulling his head to her succulent breast, smiling as she felt his hot, saliva-laden breath coat its upper slopes in a light sheen of glistening moisture.

Chad’s starving lips pressed together in a purposefully sensual kiss, Caley’s left breast sparking with erotic sensation as she let out a long, shuddering exhale. His fingers rose, drifting up the lower slopes of her perfect spheres, a smoldering trail of tingles left in their wake.

“That feels amazing,” Caley breathed, her head rolling backward as Chad’s hands moved to cup her incredible breasts, the nipples that capped their full swells tensing with rising desire.

Chad moaned as his lips descended to Caley’s aroused nipple, his tongue snaking out to give it a hedonistic swirl, all of his faculties focused on a single thought.

Pleasing her.

Caley’s hands slid over the elegant line of her hips until they found the tie of her sarong and worked it loose. The thin fabric fell away with a flowing caress of her breathtaking ass and succulent thighs. Her fingertips caught on the tight fabric of her bikini bottoms, and slowly, one side at a time, one inch at a time, pushed them over the smooth swells of her lower body until they, too, fell to the floor.

Caley raised her hand, pressing her palm to Chad’s chest, walking him backward. When the backs of his legs touched his chair, she gave him a slight shove, unbalancing him. He fell into the chair with a startled release of breath.

The statuesque highschool stunner gave the boy a Cheshire smile as she watched him land, eyes wide, paralyzed in a dizzying emotional cocktail of desire, fear, and anticipation. A lifetime of insignificance caused the now-gorgeous girl to savor every second of this sensual domination of her best friend’s brother, her sly smile broadening with every one of his squirming, desire-addled heartbeats.

After a long moment standing proudly above her conquered prey with considering eyes, Caley stepped forward, long legs bending at the knee to straddle him. Silky skin slid over either side of his skinny thighs, her nude hips and breathtaking ass descending to hover over his urgent erection. She surrounded his smaller body with hers. Nimble fingers reached forward, ripping his pants apart with a single, quick tug. The nubile brunette pushed her hips forward, grazing Chad’s engorged member with her glistening sex as it was freed from its denim confinement.

Both teens gasped as Caley undulated her toned abdomen, touching her flushed folds to his trembling tip. Slowly, tantalizingly, the beautiful girl lowered herself onto him, her flesh parting before the hardness of his desire.

Chad shivered as the taut muscles inside Caley’s body ground into every side of him, the sensation more succulent than he had ever imagined as she surrounded him with hot, carnal ecstasy.

Groaning in pleasure as Caley’s hips met his, Chad’s quivering erection seemed to pulse into a level of hardness that he had never before known, inspired by the delicious depths of the girl’s voluptuous body.

Caley’s lips parted in a lustful moan of her own, even as the alluring brunette’s head turned to the side, eyes flashing darkly as she reached to his nearby desk for the flask of blue liquid.

Her body began to move sensually, both her rhythm and heartbeat quickening as her creamy thighs tensed, her hips beginning to rise. She reached for the flask, bringing it slowly to her lips, her luminous eyes locked on Chad’s as she drank every drop.

Nothing happened for a moment, just like last time. But now, Caley knew what was coming, her eyes fluttering shut as the moment finally arrived.

“Oh, God, I can feel it everywhere now. All over my body… So much stronger than last time...” she murmured throatily, letting out a shaking, languorous breath. Caley paused, time seeming to slow as ripples began to shake her body.

She rolled back her shoulders, extending her arms to either side as she began to pant, continuing to ride Chad’s bucking hips. Caley’s breasts rose dramatically before her, their impressive slopes quivering as they began to grow once again. The gorgeous girl shook, her lengthening legs spasming as the first orgasmic wave of pleasure crashed over her.

Chad gritted his teeth, the sensations delivered by the clenching interior of her body so rapturous that they bordered on painful. His fingers began to spread, pulled apart by the rising, expanding magnificence of Caley’s unbelievable breasts. He was mesmerized, lost in pleasure for seconds that felt like hours, feeling the girl’s already breathtaking body becoming so much more as his hands continued to squeeze her.

His ensorcelled eyes blinked awake, however, as the sound of heavy breathing gave way to something louder—a scream of inconceivable pleasure.

“Time… to become… a fucking... Angel!” Caley cried in short, staccato bursts of air, all that she could manage with the intensity of the feelings coursing through her ever-more-seductive curves. The girl’s eyes were squeezed shut, her lush, fragrant mane of shimmering blackness shifting as it poured ever further down her naked back, her chin tilting further backward to point her parted lips toward the sky. Crying her heavenly desires upward, it was as if the ravishing girl were announcing her arrival as something more than merely human to the heavens.

Caley couldn’t think, could scarcely breathe as another tsunami of pleasure crashed through her ever-more-divine body. Chad was in absolute awe, unable to comprehend what he was witnessing. His body was convulsing, his hips launching forward, his ass clenching as he climaxed, but he was too transfixed by her beauty to even notice.

“Hhnnnn…” Caley cried, her taut body tensing from the pain/pleasure, her muscles clenching even as they grew firmer. Chad felt incredible inside her, his cock crashing into her womb as he bucked and thrashed against the girl’s increasingly luscious form. She reached out to clutch his hips, jerking him even harder into her.

“No one… deserves to… feel this… but me,” she crooned, her eyes fluttering open only to clench shut once more as another powerful orgasm rocked her.

“Fuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuck!!!!” Caley screamed, her back arching as her fingers dug into Chad’s flesh, her orgasm only intensifying, coaxing Chad into a second climax of his own, mere seconds after his first.

“Uuuuunnnngawd,” Chad groaned, watching Caley’s features contort with the violence of her final climax even as they become more exquisite.

A moment later, Caley’s eyes snapped open, their viridian irises swirling as they grew, their moving patterns as hypnotic as they were magnificent.

Chad eyes glazed over as he stared, open mouth at what Caley had become.

She was beyond human. Her beauty? Transcendent.

She was unimaginably perfect, every millimeter of her skin flawless, her eyes dazzling, so bright green as to be virtually iridescent.

How could anyone be this beautiful?

Chad swallowed hard, feeling suddenly honored. He was the only one who would ever feel her flesh at the moment Caley’s already perfect body was touched by the divine. He drew his hands downward gliding them over the lower slopes of her smooth, voluminous breasts to find deep grooves chiseled into her stomach below.

Chad gasped as he felt the sinuous movements of her muscles under his touch, her strength clearly far greater than his as her body virtually hummed with power.

Caley ripped the arms off his desk chair with an errant shrug. She pressed her breasts into his chest until his ribs creaked and the back of the chair snapped from the pressure. Finding his member unable to soften in the iron grip of her inner core, Caley laughed, delighting in her newfound power.

Chad’s vision began to dim, blackness closing in from the edges of his vision. She’s too much for me now, he thought. Her evolution! Her hyper-fitness! He suddenly realized that she could do whatever she wanted to him now…

...and as he gazed into her gorgeous eyes, felt her perfect body against his, he also knew that he would never resist even if he could.

“Oh Caley, No… Caley... no. Caley!” pain and pleasure blurred together as Caley’s thighs surged anew with superhuman strength. Her legs had grown longer, their sleek curves even more pronounced, iron hardness within the fibers of dense, feminine muscle. Striations appeared and disappeared as she gripped him almost more tightly than he could bear.

She rose to her feet, the crunch of wood sounding beneath her feet. The orgasmic clenching of her delicious toes had torn through his carpet and then shattered the heavy boards beneath. Chad felt her body pull away from his, releasing his still-hard member as she backed slowly away.

The boy sighed the dizzying mix of pain and pleasure finally came to an end, his exhausted body falling limp over the mangled remnants of the chair as he lost consciousness.

A glistening sheen of sweat covered her divine body, her damp hair hanging in damp, shining tendrils over her shoulders as she ran her long fingers through it.

As she looked into the mirror, she gave her reflection a predatory smile, animal lust visible in her wild eyes.

She was an angel, alright.

The Angel of Seduction.

The Angel of Lust.

The Angel of Fucking.

Looking down at Chad’s limp form, she cocked her head to the side, puzzled that he was no longer worshipping her body until she realized that he was no longer conscious.

She turned back to her reflection, her breath catching at the sight before her once again. She was glad she’d given Chad the fuck of a liftetime. He deserved it. His present to her had been perfection. Beyond perfection, really. Every part of her was superhumanly beautiful. She had the perfect hourglass shape. The perfect toned physique. Perfect milky skin. Perfect raven hair. Perfect legs. Perfect ass. Perfect breasts.

Perfect.

Caley twirled on her toes, the movement a heart-wrenching display of surreal grace. In any position, her body was an utter masterpiece of carnal art. She trailed a fingernail along Chad’s naked leg as she silently thanked him again. She lifted him, hardly noticing his weight at all as she tossed his spent form onto his bed.

Graced with a body now specifically evolved for relentless sexual conquest, Caley immediately felt up for another round, her libido undiminished despite the multiple orgasms she’d already achieved. But her easily seduced little nerd-toy had earned his rest. It was time to conquer her real prize.

Mr. Matthews.

Whisking her garments from the floor with the elegant sweep of her toned arm, the sexy amazon attempted to clothe herself once more. She struggled into the bikini top, it’s DD-cups insufficient to the task of containing her massive breasts, making its cups look like those of a too-small push-up bra. She discarded the mesh crop. No way that was going to fit – it had been tight before!

She inched the bikini bottoms up her legs to her hips, their threads straining to nearly bursting before she managed to snap them over her tiny waist.

She walked over the mirror again, admiring herself again, a darkly satisfied expression gracing her hauntingly exquisite face. No man can resist me now, she thought, knowing it with certainty. Perhaps, no woman either...

Destiny seemed eager to settle the latter question. At that exact moment, her friends came in downstairs, cheerfully calling out. “We’re back!”

Comments

So glad you’re liking the rewrite. :)

HikerAngel

An absolutely breathtakingly amazing chapter! Just incredible!!!

Legfan71


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