House Sitting - Pg. 10 (Starcross Ch. 5)
Added 2024-09-26 21:00:55 +0000 UTCHard to blame Max for her incredulity, thankfully she seems to find it more amusing than anything. At least Ash is there to vouch for Sarah's story!
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If there was ever a story that facilitated a "close call" it's this one. Stay tuned. :)
Starcross
2024-09-27 03:55:54 +0000 UTCYesss, it's been a few months since we'd last seen her in the story so I figured it was time for a more interesting hairstyle!
Starcross
2024-09-27 03:54:07 +0000 UTCI know this is gonna end up being endo and ash is completely safe but I do sorta hope for a close call where Star has to eat antacids or push him out of her stomach or something among those lines.
ArtTheGreat
2024-09-27 03:48:12 +0000 UTCMaybe, maybe not! Whatever ideas you don’t get to do, you could always make some fun one shot pics. Just do what feels best! No pressure~
PrivateXimmy
2024-09-27 03:03:12 +0000 UTCoh i LOVE Max's redesign!!
Jetstream Jackie wants you to know that her cat Goggles is both fluffy and gay
2024-09-27 00:08:18 +0000 UTCGlad you're enjoying the tone! Once I settled on this concept for Chapter 5 I realized just how many fun challenges a situation like this could present for the characters. Frankly I'm not sure I'll even get to all of the fun happenstance I want to explore about this dynamic given how long that might make the chapter, but I'm excited to continue exploring and deciding on what elements I want to focus in on with Sarah and Ash. Always appreciate your thoughtful commentary! :)
Starcross
2024-09-26 23:48:55 +0000 UTCUhoh. That stomach noise isn’t sounding too good
AvantelWings
2024-09-26 22:01:37 +0000 UTCAlso that angle on the first shot, waking up to a grumbling plunky passenger belly, *love it*. Like: oh yeah, this is still a thing.
PrivateXimmy
2024-09-26 21:49:14 +0000 UTCI love the tone of this, it feels very happenstance. Almost like those “retro” vore animations, where some accident occurs and now they need to navigate the situation. It’s really fun! And I’m excited to see how they navigate increasingly convoluted obstacles over the coming days to fix it. Like, how will they handle whatever responsibilities ash has? Or traveling in public? What if they get there and the clip isn’t home? Is this gonna be a whole week? Lots of exciting story and character opportunities! And you’ve already shown you’ve got great framing composition for this in mind! Every shot that features both Ash and Sarah talking takes care to place her belly into center view, his dialogue accompanied by faint minutia of pressure in her gut. Clearly, he’s a very “active” speaker. It really goes a long way to showcase this unique “shared circumstance” they find themselves in.
PrivateXimmy
2024-09-26 21:48:12 +0000 UTC"Day 1"!?, this is going to be fun!~
ImKike19
2024-09-26 21:41:23 +0000 UTCyknow what fair point ^^;
pl0nt
2024-09-26 21:10:11 +0000 UTCFor this group it practically *is* casual gossip.
Starcross
2024-09-26 21:09:27 +0000 UTC;)
Starcross
2024-09-26 21:07:30 +0000 UTClmao max just going like "omg so crazyyy" like she just heard some casual gossip
pl0nt
2024-09-26 21:07:20 +0000 UTC"Day 1" 👀
TA
2024-09-26 21:06:22 +0000 UTC
