BD - POBee 54.1 - Failure and Victor-Bee (Removed for KU)
Added 2023-12-07 20:05:01 +0000 UTCAuthor’s Note:
Noooooo! Firstborn, you’re doing a great job! Don’t give up! Look, First of the Fifth is fine and she doesn’t even have an army! You got this!
Anyways!
Can the Firstborn make up for her failures? Will the new soldiers save the day? What will result from the First of the Fifth’s collaboration with the King? Tune in next time, to find out!
Comments
Cuz it's missing a word lol. I may or may not be slightly sleep deprived this week haha.
AEgamer1
2023-12-08 01:41:50 +0000 UTCIt's hopeless, "king is best king" and that's it :p
nicolas
2023-12-07 21:18:26 +0000 UTC" She would not even of the abject failures that had put the King" -> "would not even of the abject " seems a wird formulation ?
nicolas
2023-12-07 20:51:51 +0000 UTCThe Firstborn is my favorite bee queen ^^ Working for the greater good and not to increase her status. Always learning from her mistake and improving
nicolas
2023-12-07 20:50:28 +0000 UTCI think he should sometime have a chat with them and explain he is not flawless. it causing quite a few issues here that they believe so.
phantom
2023-12-07 20:43:36 +0000 UTC"So, it would be only right that a queen who had failed as egregiously as she had?" I think in this sentence that should be replaced with for. Really interested to see how the hive grows now that they have time to do so.
Finn Ryan
2023-12-07 20:17:24 +0000 UTC
