Change the post title "Doujin Sketch" to "Half-finish Doujin"
I need to establish the plot in the first chapter. No for a deep story but at least you know the main plot or the flow. Need it to fit the page limit but it took three pages, so the story's pacing may be a bit too quick.
I wanted to make it ten pages, for more room for story details. More pages mean more action.
the page above is not 100%, there are some edits in the future.
Doujin finished on 28 Jan.
Varniskarnis
2025-01-13 20:23:28 +0000 UTC