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Reason for the lack of wips?

Im doing bigger projects, but have this script

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1v4zmLwCNlCAYPSJ8IFJ4cUFwqeP3iucrHZh8aR6e2g4/edit?usp=sharing

Give it a look, tell me what you think. feedback and suggestions are welcome.

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cheers!

Coot27

The dialogue looks good to me. The premise is succinctly established and easily understood. I'd just change your use of "Demandive" to demanding or commanding if that's what you meant.

vml

hi, I'm not a fan of lol, but still I wish you good luck with this project

David Minnocci


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