Magus Cybernetica February progress report
Added 2024-02-27 20:33:01 +0000 UTCI've reworked page 2, I feel like the old dialogue was too stilted and this feels better. I also finally managed to plan out what will happen in the first arc. Originally I'd planned to have a big robot fight, meet the bad guy, etc. but that felt too fast. Now there will be a section at the beginning for you to get to grips with Zola's life and how it changes when Winter moves in with her. How her values and worldview change. Then I'll introduce the action with the fighting robots and the explosions and the kinkified science fiction and all that. And sorry it's slow, I care too much about it and keep tweaking small details of the artwork. But I really just need to get a move on and tell the story I'm trying to tell. See you all in a week for some more fan comic pages :)
