Zola comic- Manuscript update
Added 2023-07-31 16:32:59 +0000 UTCI didn't know Fanbox had a text viewer??
Anyway, this month I mostly spent revising the manuscript after Bastet brought up the fact that the Prologue does not seamlessly integrate with the first chapter.
So, following this, I'll be releasing the manuscript every time I update it. Please give me feedback on it so that I can improve it!
I'll be starting on chapter 1 next month since I'm only anticipating small updates.
I'm specifically just looking for feedback on whether there's any glaring issues with it and if the dialogue is cringe or stiff.
Thanks everyone for continuing to fund this project!
Again, just drop me a message if you want your name in the credits!
