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Naruto: Rogue - Chapter 1 - Prologue - COMPLETE [a TWF Productions Rewrite]

Revised, rewritten, and adopted by TWF Productions

Original story by TheWriteFiction

After TheWriteFiction lost his account, he handed off a couple of projects to me, namely his Naruto one, since I like drawing Naruto.

I liked his script and decided to adopt it and rewrite it, combining ideas from both him and his other lesser known stories to make a more interesting Naruto alternate timeline.

I'll be keeping the best pages of his original prologue, but adding my own after the fact. He had a fantastic setup, and there's a guaranteed great epic behind it.

He'll be working with me as an advisor, while I do the chief rewrite of it.

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CHAPTER LIST:

Chapter 1 - Prologue - https://www.patreon.com/posts/98583415

Chapter 2 - A New Ninja Way - https://www.patreon.com/posts/113365312

Chapter 3 - The Fox and the Lonely Flute - https://www.patreon.com/posts/114420295

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Comments

Can I be able to download them as PDF if thats ok

Jesus

The pages should be loading. I can always respond as pdf as well.

TWF

I am trying to re read the 1st chapter but it won't load any of the pages at all.

Jesus

Also I got to say it but Sakura was really cute too!

Silverstrike

Happy to have you along friend. Please enjoy the multiple works as I update as regularly as I can. This is but a start.

TWF

What a wonderful chapter. I love it, naruto.Finally have's a Friend family figure and his life That will take care of him. Guide him and love him.I Love ❤️ 😍 💖 This chapter, thank you for making it. Hello.I'm new to the site, and I hope to read more great stories you make.

Joseph c guillory

I loved that Old man Sarutobi gave his seal of approval to her!

Silverstrike

Awww this is such a nice story. Love the ending of this chapter, hope to see the sequel real soon! :)

MDD

Yeah I can tell…..😎 this’s gonna be another Fun Ride

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 27* 😁 good for you Naruto “Kon Kon” 😳……🙂 Kon?……..😆 OMG THATS SO FRIGGIN ADORABLE!!!

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 26* **Top 3 Panels** 😯😮‍💨 **Middle Panel** 😊 beautiful **Bottom 2 Panels** 😌 I personally would like to think most Spirits are too determined than to ever go back on their word

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 25* **Top Right Panel** ☺️ the attention to Detail even in a panel this small’s impressive **Top middle, Top Left, Middle, & Bottom Right Panels** 😗 I’m surprised he didn’t wake up from being put on the cold floor from a warm and soft comfortable Tail…😅 heee is a pretty heavy sleeper though **Bottom Left Panel** 😐no 😶nono 👎🏻✋🏻🚫 don’t bring yourself back there again!!

GamerLegend09

This I can also understand. The Clan was wiped out before Kushina's time, so it was a couple generations ago, and there were only a handful left scattered across the continent. This was enough for other clans everywhere to rise to prominence, while the Uzumaki and their name fell into obscurity, to the point only Orochimaru had knowledge enough to see any value in an Uzumaki.

TWF

I can somewhat understand that, the problem is giving him the Uzumaki name as they were so feared, they were wiped by a coalition army. So WTF on that one.

Calvin Morris

Well that answers that question, and no one will think twice considering most Shinobi have talking animal summons anyway

DarkTitan5010

Yep

DarkTitan5010

I'm assuming it'd giving the Third the reason why he never got more involved with Narutos life. A Hokage showing an orphan in their village favour would really raise some eyebrows and get people talking, which would compromise Naruto if someone started digging into his history.

TWF

What?…🤔 did I miss something?

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 24* 😌 aw man…😉 what I wouldn’t give to be as comfortable as him right now (🧐 in a non perverse way obviously)

GamerLegend09

On that note conflicted though I may feel, 😆 i’m overall excited to see more pages again

GamerLegend09

*Edited* 😐……🫤……😤 alright alright fair enough……👿 but I refuse to like it…

GamerLegend09

When your father is this legendary Hokage who is the only shinobi in history to be so dangerous he had a flee on sight order issued to anyone who came across him, you can understand this comes with a big consequence. Obviously he earned this claim to fame by killing an enormous amount of people- which very likely means he will have a lot of enemies seeking to gain their pound of flesh- which they will look to take from his family and relatives. With him and Kushina dead, Naruto essentially had no clan or family to protect him, thus the Third not only had to keep him buried to the point he couldn't give Naruto his father's clan name, but he had to isolate and ostracize him to the point he wouldn't have a big target put on his back.

TWF

*Pg. 23* 😤😤😤 she’s got a bigger heart than me…😄 and not just physically, 😒 I get WHY the 4th did what he did it’s just to me the ends don’t justify the means from my point of view

GamerLegend09

I like this 🤩😍😍

Ludovic Tagan

Oh I see what you did with the Hokage

DarkTitan5010

*Pg. 22* **Top Right Panel** ❤️🥹❤️ I feel so warm from this panel **Top Left Panel** 😊 aww they look so cute **Bottom Right 2 Panels** 😟…..🥺 yup…right in the feels **Bottom Left Panel** 😭 I hope you’ll be in it for the long haul!!

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 21* 🥲 i’ve never seen him more Happy as a child than right now.

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 20* **Top Right Panel** ☺️ such a soothing scenario **Top Left Panel** 😳 Dayum that’s a lot to swallow…. 🙂🙃AhThankYou🙂🙃 **Bottom Panel** 😆😆😆😆😆 Oh My God She’s Just As Beautiful In This Form!!!

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 19* 🥰 mmm I love her maternal instinct in this page…😃 and is it just me or do I notice more fox spirits than in the original page?

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 18* And as the poor innocent boy reaches out from the depths of his Despair and Lonelines, the warmth and comfort from Tamamo No Mae’s soft, Beautiful Tails enveloping around him. Slowly wash away his anguish and misery and fills him with Love and Hope 🥲

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 17* 😟…🥺🥺🥺🥺 oh my gosh my heart❤️‍🩹

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 16* **Top Right Top Panel** 🤤🤤🤤 was it as good for you as it was for me? **Top Right Bottom Panel** 🙂🙃 nice to see her Chakra Senses are still sharp🙃🙂 **Top Left Panel** 😍😍😍😍 quick on the uptake and-😆😆😆😆THOSE TAILS’RE SO FLUFFYYYYY!!!! **Bottom Three Panels** 😄 she just breezed through the entire introduction while Barely lifting a tail, right after being Sealed for 3000 Years…. 🤭🤭🤭 either she’s a natural with her social skills or she has been practicing for her first introduction all those years

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 15* **Top Panel** 😳😳😳 Totemo ōkī **Bottom Right Panel** 😧 soooo slim **Bottom Left Top Panel** 😃 AH! 🤭 Ahhem, 😄would it take 7000 more to give her a crick in the neck!? (😆 HAH) **Bottom Left Bottom Panel** 🫨🫨BOYOYOYOYOING🫨🫨

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 14* 😧😮😳…..🦊 Mommy?

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 13* **Top 4 Panels** 😨……😵😵😵 **Bottom 3 Panels** 😱😱😱 WHAT DID I TELL YOU!!?

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 12* **Top 3 Panels** 🙂…😌 Sounds like a perfect Guardian for them **3 Middle Panels** 😦 Whoa waitaminute! **Bottom 2 Panels** 😧 Praying To Her Does Not Mean Touching The Incredibly Old & Fragile Rock!!

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 11* **Top Right Panel** 😗 cool pagoda lantern **Top Left Panel** 😯 o~oo 🤩🤩🤩 Festival anyone? **Middle Two Panels** Ok I’m as adventurous as the next guy (with a group) but the term curiosity killed the cat was written for a reason **Bottom Panel** 😯….😬 oh that is 20 pounds of “Do Not Touch” in a 10 pound Bag

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 10* **Top 2 Panels** …..yeah no. You wouldn’t catch me dead, near a forest environment. let alone by myself **Middle Panel** Hm… i don’t know, I’d say the current state of this Temple’s environment gives off its own unique flare to its environment **Bottom 3 Panels** Hm…normally you’d see 2 of these in front of the gate….. 😐 hm?……😏 heheh, do you feel something like an ancestral pull in your chakra coming from that Symbol Naruto?

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 09* Y’know….it’s Treatment like this that enables the creation of Villains/Terrorists

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 08* **Top 2 Panels** 😊 and more seeds of another Romantic Interest are sewn **Middle 2 Panels** 😥 oh no **Bottom Right 2 Panels** 🤨 Waitaminute wut? **Bottom Left 3 Panels** “We don’t need you here.” 😟…… 😡 oh you are officially on my shit-list bitch

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 07* **Top 3 Panels** 😎 it’s Super Effective **Bottom Right 4 Panels** 😁 Nice thinking Fox boy **Bottom Left 2 Panels** 🙂‍↕️🙂‍↕️ muuuch better

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 06* **Top 5 Panels** 😄 aww still such a caring boy **Bottom Right 2 Panels** LadyKiller Secondary ability 💥😆 Activate!!💥 **Bottom Left 2 Panels** Naruto uses “Healing Hands”

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 05* **Top 2 Panels** ☺️ proud of you **Middle 2 Panels** 😊😁😊 Still Proud! (😎 this right here is a perfect example of a rebellious phase kids, Take Notes!) **Bottom 3 Panels** 😯 oh

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 04* 👿 and these “Role Model Adults” over here aren’t any better, this “volatile, irascible, & hot-tempered" attitude is NOT well Warranted towards this innocent child. (🙂 though I do appreciate the focus of the plot being kept, 😁 it’s one of those situations that I just love to Hate)

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 03* 🤬 Screw You ya little shittards!! 😡 haven’t you heard about a rebellious phase of your life!? 😤 it never hurts to start too early at your age!

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 02* 😢 aw damnit I for got this part

GamerLegend09

*Pg. 01/Cover* 😁 I like Tayuya out of the other Soind Four (😅 not just cause she’s a girl mind you) I’m very excited to see her part in this tale (😅😅😅 hopefully a much better fate than when she got One-Shotted against Temari…..😣 both in the Manga “and” the Anime). 🙂 I like the Tomboy look for the Uchiha on the right, 🥰 and the Freckles on her face add a unique complement to it. 😊 this Fresh Cool new look on Naruto is sick, and having a Fox Demon being beside him and not just sealed “inside” of them’s sure to be interesting for the plot😏😏😏

GamerLegend09

………….🤷🏻‍♂️ meh, I’ll start over too

GamerLegend09

Oh damn, I like the fox lady's design way more now!

RandomBrit

Like this a lot can’t wait for more

SpinachGlad28

Awesome thanks for telling me

Jesus

I hope we see more of this story this time, before it cut off just as it was getting good!

RandomBrit

I'm restarting this project with new designs for the fox Naruto befriends.

TWF

This was a great Narto manga that was being created its sad we never got more new pages.

Jesus

Can't wait to see more of this loved the road to ninja movie and love the concept of the hero's going rogue or bad

Rezok 496

Yes, there will be more exclusive content for each.

TWF

Subes contenido exclusivo en cada una de tus redes o es el mismo en contenido en todas?

Stark

Oh this looks interesting. I want to see where this goes. I didn’t see this story on the old channel. Now I am interested.

Silverstrike

Mostly characters from the anime, but also one or two original characters.

TWF

Será una historia con personajes originales o todos serán del anime?

ShadowRipper

😁😁😁 NICE!!! 😁 still upset for what Patreon did to Write ✍🏻 🙂 but I’m happy to see this story brought back

GamerLegend09

Alternate timeline but still a stark reminder that man...Sarutobi really screwed the pooch on honoring Lord Fourth's wish for Naruto. Even if you wanna blame Danzo for fear mongering, that just adds more fuel to the fire of Sarutobi also letting that clown get away with constantly causing problems and undermining things for his own ends. And Sarutobi still does nothing to actually remedy the ill will and legit demonizing pushed onto a literal child for over a decade.

Mrryn


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