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Outline - Moonlight Dance Part 7 (the finale)

Here's my bullet points for part seven of the comic and how they break down into pages. It'll focus on MitsuruxYukari, and lots of breast stuff. The last two pages may change a little once Jessie and I iron out the details. If you guys have any thoughts or suggestions you're welcome to share. The next step will be collaging and rough panel layout for these pages, as well as some concept art for Mitsuru in part 7. The comic is nearly finished ^^

Outline - Moonlight Dance Part 7 (the finale)

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I thought about it. I guess my concern with that is the stories feeling too ‘samey.’ Like I want the consequences here to be Aigis’s scheme being uncovered by Yukari, and possibly them being werewolves going forward. One thing I see a lot is stories from a creator that all follow the same beats, which I want to avoid if I can. I'll keep it in mind tho, experiment with it.

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I think it'd be kinda fun if there were signs that Fuuka's and Mitsuru's additions didn't go away from when everyone turned back to normal, like with Esther and Beth from Pothead Adventures.

Carl Endres


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