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Ch: 122.3

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“I’ll go to, I’m more familiar with the more commonly explored eastern reaches of The Endless Forest, but I bet I could track them down quicker than this old fart,” -> “I would go too. I’m more familiar with the more commonly explored eastern reaches of The Endless Forest, and I bet I could track them down quicker than this old fart,” Not sure if our humble accommodations can match either of your stasis,” Stasis -> status When I returned to my tent, Returned -> return Thanks for the chapter! I hope a lesser dragon is good enough reason to be late

Eliel Taskinen

Same for me. No reason to pay for nothing.

M. Lampi

Don't worry guys I'm sure they are just making sure the chapter is perfect 😭🙏🏻🙏🏻

Laurent Catudal

Welp.... my sub is due to renew in a week's time. The day before, if we've heard nothing, I guess this'll get dropped from my list, again.

TooOldForThisShit

I am, too. However I am going to keep checking.

Mortal_Tormenta

I'm tired of constantly checking: Kosnik4 could we please get an update?

Straven

I want to see Padcore and Pitz reactions as a GD DRAGON head comes into town. Then the levels.

Justin

Is the next chapter going to be another character point of view or Aaliyah & Tabitha return the village before or after Pacore return deadline?

Mortal_Tormenta

Oh I'm very much hoping to see that next chapter.

Straven

Wouldn't bother me if we simply had "something" of an update letting us know. If things went bad, please I'll even pray that's not what happened, but nothing but silence with past history of just vanishing......honestly I'm hating this.

Straven

I wonder if the surgery had complications, causing the delay. I can fully understand if this is the case, having personally experienced such issues.

M. Lampi

Love this series, excited to see the reactions to the lesser dragon slaying, it's worth the wait

down south

Or he is having trouble where to go cause he is stuck writing the next chapter. Just give him time.

Mortal_Tormenta

So.... it's been 2 weeks, rather than the estimated 2 days, and not a word from the author. Add to not, not counting the rewrite of ch 9, the last new chap before this one was march 3rd. This is feeling awfully similar to the previous 2 random hiatuses, where release rate would slow to a crawl and the author would simply vanish without a trace for months. At this point, I can only guess he put up the poll for the rewrite, didn't get the response he wanted/hoped for, and hit a wall again.

TooOldForThisShit

I'm not sure whether or not you want typo corrections here but I figured that I might as well. Though it technically might not a typo. oversite -> oversight

IceCold

Pitz should write to her steward and/or family and/or connections about the great investment opportunities at this far-off village. Could be the new go-to place for brave souls to explore the mana-dense region, or a source of timber from the edges of it. To be honest, a village with good farmland, plentiful timber, a quarry, an iron mine AND a thingy mine... you know, the magical stuff. Crap, i forgot what it's called and am too lazy to look it up. Anyway, all those natural resources in one area is quite the location. I can only imagine it was never developed further because it was too far away from the protection of the established kingdom(s). That makes me wonder. Do the other villages in the area have their own small scale mining operations? Otherwise it wouldn't be strange if Spotted Creek traded metal works like nails and farm tools locally. They'd probably rather take a trip of one or two days than buy it from Kervin, since it'd be cheaper. I think I've seen it put like this: The price of an item can be seen as a value in both time and money. Spend more time, and it will cost less money. Spend more money, and it will take less time. In this example - spend four days (two days to get there, two days back) to get the cheaper ironwares, or spend more money so you can spend your time on other things. Most villages tend to have more time to spend and less money.

Oskatat

This is also the chapter Tabitha confirms following Aaliyah into the mana forest, and the chapter after Richard and Sandra got married.

Orange Thistle

Currently rereading and reached chapter 108. Aaliyah is creating Reel's poison dagger, after Master Del spiked most the village and Tabitha in the prior chapter. Tabitha doesn't seem to fussed but promised to remember. Now she and Pacore are meeting up again, and Del is in proximity, I could see her getting revenge by having him try some of Pacore's alcohol.

Orange Thistle

Exactly. You have this event that been built up to for most of the story (her eventually leaving the village and presumably going to School), and you want to make sure that resolution is satisfactory. We likely wouldn't return to the village for the foreseeable future.

Ember

I'm well past withdraw symptoms setting in.

Straven

Same. Sigh.

Straven

The author didn't exactly say which Wednesday the next chapter would be released, but I had hopes it was earlier than later.

M. Lampi

I need another fix💉💉💉

Laurent Catudal

I think the chapters get easier when they leave. He said he was worried about continuity and the leaving the village chapter is like THE callback chapter.

mechajlaw

Was re reading chapter 87 and it pops up just before Pacore's talk with no.1.

Orange Thistle

Was wondering if Jason (Pacore's aid in Drey) ended up being recruited as Pacore wanted. As we approach the end of village life, it would be good to have someone whose also new to Scholl.

Orange Thistle

He maybe having trouble writing the next chapter like this one. Just give him time. ( I am hypocrite and wondering when the next one, too.)

Mortal_Tormenta

Bro is edging us!!!

Laurent Catudal

She should also know if their nobles are going to give her trouble.

Michael Weis

I think aaliyah should ask Pitz, Pacore, and Tabitha how the elites/nobles are in the two kingdoms. How are her peers (the youth) and how powerful they are, how do they grow, how are they educated?

Michael Weis

I kinda hope the next chapter or 2 is split between Aaliyah/padcore/Pitz/Tabitha

Justin

An update would be nice. I'm not asking for specifics on their personal circumstances, just something from the author to let us know where we stand on the next chapter.

TooOldForThisShit

Yeah, I love plot twist!

Mortal_Tormenta

Plot twist that we are feared of: this release was an April Fools' joke

Fortuner

Good catch. Though it might be Emily lied for whatever reason, the high-leveled like to keep as many secrets as possible.

Tjark

I look about on Chapter 22.5 has Emily Pitz first point of view and her character says her age was 87.

Mortal_Tormenta

Agreed and taking the villagers support for there plight I see them standing more with scholl then there original rulers...who never cared for them but always taxed them.

Straven

>Plus, it'll allow me to familiarize myself with Spotted Creek Village further. At the rate it was improving, I could see it one day growing into a city that would rival any other. Just reread and this passage stood out to me. I was thinking something similar at some point. Though maybe not actual city but more a fortress/frontier-town given its proximity to the mana dense region. The region was neglected by Olebert because they have access to the forest from other places but Scholl will only now have access to it. So the Village will make the perfect trading post/staging point for any groups of hunters and explorers from Scholl's side, making its growth almost inevitable.

Tjark

Es la tercera vez que lo leo, me gusta mucho este capitulo.

Lilimu u.u

Me encantó, este capitulo es algo inesperado, me pareció perfecto. Mis mejores deseos a tu mamá en su operación.

Lilimu u.u

So far as the wall is concerned, the people in the village could have sped up the construction due to increasing levels. This being a non-Earth world, it could be possible that pregnancies run a different length of time.

M. Lampi

I thought that Aaliyah knew that Tabitha was going with her into Endless Forest high mana dense region. I don't want to know what punishment is being late from Pacore is. Along reason they maybe it at village with they are on the way making some distance, break, and make sure they take the least mount trouble getting back to the Village.

Mortal_Tormenta

Thanks for the chapter! I know you said you needed a refresher on some recent events due to the long hiatus. I started about 2 weeks ago so most everything is still fresh for me. There were a few minor inconsistencies I caught. The wall was supposed to take 1.5-2 years and it has only been about 8-9 months. Sandra was mentioned to be just entering her second trimester 3 days before Aaliyah and Tabitha left making he just over half way through now. Idk if it was intentional, but the mayor's name is Camden. It was Darrius not Darrious. Please feel free to reach out if there is anything else you are unsure about. I'm absolutely loving the book and I'd be happy to help in any way I can.

Alex Rosen

I think she should get Pitz negotiate with her merchant friends a cooperative deal.

Michael Weis

Ending up as a relatively neutral asset/entity is the ideal thing, I think. At least neutral towards political factions, for whom she would onl work on commision. Unfortunately she's lacking a few dozen levels for that to be feasible and she still needs a few years of combat training at least, so going with Tabitha seems like the best solution for now.

Tjark

I think Aaliyah best bet is to let them fight over her to increase her benefits if she does decide to pick one, or she uses both kingdoms resources, trading materials for masterpieces through commissions.

James Everhart

I wish your mom the best with her surgery! I also wish to thank you for the chapter. It was excellent! Here are some edit suggestions: Walls or no walls, there’s no one here ==> "Walls or no walls, there’s no one here trying to get into their good grasses in some misguided ==> trying to get into their good graces in some misguided Lots of the following: magic-dense region ==> mana-dense region magic region ==> high mana region “I’ll go to, I’m more familiar with ==> “I’ll go, too. I’m more familiar with Not sure what is meant by "stasis". "Status" perhaps? Not sure if our humble accommodations can match either of your stasis,

M. Lampi

Very good turn out and I dont expect anything else this week, not with your mom having spinal surgery of all things. Hope she's well and more so after it. And thank you so much for the delightful meal!

Straven

Thanks for the chapter, I like the way it played out

Ken

Thanks for the chapter! Best wishes for your mom! My guess is Aaliyah and Tabitha make it back to village in between those 2 week's.

Mortal_Tormenta

Thanks for the chapter! Great thought to make a conflict about Aaliyah for crowd, a little bit of mind games was fun Best wishes for your mom! (at that moment i understood that internet has worsened me)

Fortuner

Thanks for the chapter!!

Undead Writer

Thank you for the chapter!

Scott, just Scott

Thanks for the chapter! It was great. Really enjoyed the pace, perspective, and anticipation for the return. Hopefully its 2 weeks and 1 day. Best wishes for your family. That's rough.

Justin

Well, I didn't read the first versions but I liked this one

Constantin

Goblins are scavengers so the body of the lesser dragon will probably be a attractive to them if the girls go through their territory, just the girls gear alone got them to be attack the first time let alone a beast that could equipped the entire goblin village.

James Everhart

Thanks for chapter Are they still going to do the arch goblin hunt

Brett Ulakovic

Thanks for the chap, and welcome back

Annora D.

Thanks for the chapter, don't worry about the time, enjoy writing.

Sebastian Romero Zapata

Thanks for the chappy =)

worg

I kind of thought that was where it was going. I look forward to seeing the tussle over aaliyahs future allegiance if only on the basis that Pitz is playing by a completely different rulebook from our MC and Pacore and just refuses to accept it. Not that Pacore has a great handle on her either. I think ultimately the decider for her is going to be that she is going to go with Tabitha because she has to protect her. I'm not even joking. Scholl sounds rough as hell socially and I could see Aaliyah wanting to look out for her sister from another mister.

Valderan

Tftc!

Nick

Yeah, I think that part was pretty buttoned up. I was confused by the armory since I think the town already had an armory with basic armaments and armor for the militia (caps and spears) but it actually makes sense in that society to have a second armory inside the mayors house with nicer stuff for the higher level combatants. Anyone over level fifty gets the stuff that needs more maintenance and gussied care but its also too valuable to have in the common area.

Valderan

I think it took about two-three weeks until they got to the center, they stayed about 1 week at the center. And 1-2 weeks was the dragon fight. The return journey being 2-3 weeks again would be reasonable.

Timo Immig

I don’t think Pacore has enough alcohol for the occasion.

Timo Immig

Hope 2 weeks is enough time for the heart too settle down, because the lesser dragon might just give them a heart attack lol.

James Everhart

I think the best way to 'recap' the journey home would be to either have it in their telling of their adventure or in a chapter right before they arrive at the village.

Timo Immig

Would have been kinda funny if Aaliyah and Tabitha showed up right at the conclusion of the headmans conversation

PloofDoodle

I was confused for a second because I remember Tabitha wrote him a note about going in the Forest, but yeah the briefness could have easily lead to misunderstanding the extent of that trip. I wish your mom good luck and hope your muse graces us with another chapter soon! stasis -> status

Tjark

Since I've recently reread I can say more about this. I remember the first direction Aliyah lead them after being asked where the center of the forest is, was northeast. After that there were a bunch of other directions that (I believe) were internally consistent with each other. But they all went against the map we were once given for the cities and surroundings (assuming its top was north).

Tjark

It's good as is. Wish your mom well. Six weeks feels like a lot longer than I remember Aliyah and Tabitha were in there for... but I'm probably remembering it wrong.

The Tallest Tree

Woo woo return of our wordsmith! Hope the surgery goes well, prayers with you and yours. Lastly: I want to point out a potential typo, as I'm not sure which direction the map of the region was facing, and there wasn't much mentioned cardinal direction-wise or sun position-wise during the expedition, though I may have forgotten key bits. Regardless, Pitz says 'I’ll go to, I’m more familiar with the more commonly explored eastern reaches of The Endless Forest,' and if the map we were given earlier has north as up, I'd be given to think it's actually the western reaches she'd be familiar with. Also, wrong form of "to" it should be "too"

Paxmorgana

Pacore rides again! Happy to see you again. Don't agonize so hard. You've got a long running story and at this point we clearly trust you. Don't try to get us to witness the wheel of samsara with every stroke of the pen. Just write a story you would want to read.

Valderan

Thanks for the chapter

Alteron

Eyo, i am happy with the chapter too, great job

P Bogdan

I can't remember off the top of my head of Tabitha activated her enchantments in the final fight or if it broke due to getting smashed, but it would have been absolutely hilarious if one of the gems shattered just as Pacore was explaining that it being intact meant everything was fine, lol. Even so, great chapter, and a good way to avoid boring details during a time skip most likely involving just trudging through the woods.

Kyfe

Thank you for the chapter and the update! I hope your mom’s surgery goes well.

Aral B

I've been looking forward to the events of this chapter and they are everything I was hoping for.

Hamfist

Thank you for the chapter. The chapter was great.

Timo Immig

Another Pacore POV! That was really good!

heh

So excited for the reunion 🥳

Ember

Thanks for the chapter!

Michael McMahon


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