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The Perfect Match - (Pg. 1-4)

Kyle gains his special power and sets his sights on his shy friend, Michelle, but stumbles over on his way.

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Kylie is already such a pretty thing. Such potential with those soft androgynous features. Michelle looks like the girl from the "Cheer Camp" short series.

bouncybubbly

I think there's validity to that. It can be common for two individuals who "like like" each other to circle around the friendzone because neither can pick up on the signals being sent by the other.

Dynamoob

time will tell

Dynamoob

Weekly is probably not going to happen. I'm currently juggling three projects (four if you want to include the calendar). So, I can't just focus primarily on one over the others - they all need attention.

Dynamoob

Thank you

Dynamoob

Such a nice introduction for the story! I think Kyle failed to realize that maybe he didn't need to change for Michelle to like him for who he is. But he'll realize soon enough.

Master-TF

This is great. Really hoping this continues to update weekly.

Bravocado44

Yaaassss LOVE Back to the Future

Lucky Dragon

Don't have a full page count yet.

Dynamoob

Bletcher is a good pull. I picture more of a Biff Tannen

Dynamoob

woopsie doosie

Dynamoob

One thing I’m intrigued by is what you do with the sweet nerdy friend. I could see it being a sort of “lovers to enemies” sorta thing (obviously they aren’t lovers but you get what i mean lol)

TommyTheDude

Gotta say his crush you made her look absolutely whole and sweet, good job on that

Annon

Gotta love magical mishaps.

Marquis Green

Also, how many pages are you planning on this being?

CameronB123

Ooh it's going to be nice and gradual. When do you think the big realisation that he's not turning into a jock will come?

CameronB123

Jokes aside, that spell works fast. Kyle’s quickly sweetening on the idea of becoming friends with his bully. The very fact that his thoughts are already dwelling on him rather than Michelle shows that the mind-shift is happening swiftly

Lucky Dragon

Twerp? Scram? Oh no Kyle you’re about to fall in love with some 1940’s bruiser type. Now in my head the jock is voiced by Billy Bletcher XD

Lucky Dragon

Nice first post. Love it. Looking forward to this story 💖

Chris

Oopsie daisy

Thomas Tolliver


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