Chapter 623 - Bloodhound
Added 2025-01-22 15:00:07 +0000 UTCNight held everyone’s captivated attention. His grisly display, along with the casual ease in which he’d managed to slip by everyone and kill so many powerful Classers without anyone noticing, then managing to set everything up, sent a powerful message.
The way so many people flinched when they saw him was another message, namely one for the younger Immortals here.
‘This man is powerful.’ ‘This vampire is dangerous.’
My lessons with Arachne were really paying off. Night held all of us captive with the display and force of personality, and nobody said a word during his speech. Not a whisper, not a murmur, heck, some people weren’t even breathing!
I knew I wasn’t the target of his presence, but even I was standing up straight, listening, and more than a little intimidated - and I knew he was on my side! Or, err… let’s be real, I was on his side. Arachne’s threads started to worm their way into the room, spreading out all over. I’d seen how she could fight at a distance. If anyone tried to move on Night, they’d be in for a nasty surprise.
Four of Night’s teammates peeled themselves away from the crowd, and stood next to him.
“Today, we have overthrown the New Remus Empire, those who would dominate the entire world. Elves who would claim dominion over each of us. I would like to say that tomorrow, we will make a better world, but I have not come here to lie to you all. Instead, I would like to invite you all to join me a year and a day from now in Ginza, to help forge a treaty to shape the new era.”
Halfway through Night’s speech, Arachne’s threads rearranged themselves next to me. For emphasis, she tapped me a few times on my toes. Which… fair enough, I had done my fair share of ignoring her messages earlier.
Dawn. The coalition is going to ask for your head on a pike, next to my dear husband’s handiwork. I’m going to try and spin a story about your [Loremaster] training coming into play to prevent a Guardian coming down on us all, but I doubt it’ll work. Casualty percentages are too low. We can’t properly protect you. There are too many of them, and not enough of us, and trying armed resistance will just end with all of us dead. Night can only stall them so much. I strongly recommend you quietly and brisky get out of there NOW. We will have a debrief later, if you’re willing and able to attend. It’d be fairly risky for you. I’ll let you decide if you want to come or not, we can do a private debrief later if you don’t want to.
I didn’t want to run away. I didn’t want to leave people’s fates to the sacking army. At the same time, Night’s speech was turning to the rules we’d agreed on, and making a strong case that it was time we all left the city. A good number of the people here seem inclined to follow his suggestion. A solid third of the elves wanted to step into the rulership vacuum that had recently emerged in Ithil and the rest of the Tympestshard Council. A number of Immortals were satisfied that the job was done, and they could go home and stop being bothered by the New Remus Empire. There was still a sizable fraction of people who probably wanted to continue sacking the city, but the elves who wanted to live in this place now would probably object, and the tides were shifting.
Mission over. I immediately shifted my healing to everyone, no longer excluding certain elves. I couldn’t see the impact immediately in the room I was in - I’d been healing elves I’d seen with injuries for as long as I’d been in Ithil. The impact would ripple through the city. From broken bones to slowly bleeding injuries, from blunt force trauma to sword slashes, from the smallest stubbed toe to elves breathing their last, everyone was instantly healed.
I also popped my [Greater Invisibility] rune and immediately chained several dozen [Teleports] together, most of them moving in random directions. There were enough powerful Classers here that I didn’t want to risk them being able to trace the ripples my teleportation left, or something like that. Classes and skills could start to get really funky at higher levels. It was far more likely that I’d be tracked or found via some esoteric method I’d never heard of or could imagine. Like, I’d been offered a diagnostic spell that involved reading the stars. It could be anything!
It would be easy to just leave. I didn’t.
I found a semi-abandoned building, [Teleported] into a dark closet, then threw up a few privacy spells from my spellbook. I then opened [Portcullis], and stepped into my [Manor].
I loved being a Spatial mage. The skills were life changing.
I didn’t immediately pop up in front of Sara. The poor girl was having a difficult enough day as is, she didn’t need jumpscares to get added in. I [Teleported] right outside her door, knocked, and waited an eternity for an answer. I could see her inside, a little scared, startled, and terribly uncertain.
“Hi Sara, it’s me, Elaine.” I said, wanting to facepalm. I was mildly amused how my name meant ‘healer’, but right now, I did NOT need the confusion. “Can I come in?”
“...yes.” Sara answered meekly. I opened the door and slowly, even by System-locked child metrics, walked over to her and knelt down next to her.
“I’m going to go look for your parents now, alright? Can I get a bit of your hair to help me find them?”
My stomach clenched as I noticed the utter lack of tears in her eyes. On one hand, it was good, on the other… she had no idea what was going on. Her life was probably ruined beyond repair.
She hesitated, running a nervous finger along her brown strands. Her horns had barely started to come in.
“I just need a little snip. Think of it like a trim at the hairdresser!” I said, taking a blind guess why she was hesitating. It was possibly really dumb, but I wasn’t going to credit small children in a crisis with many critical thinking skills. Most adults lacked critical thinking skills in bad situations, unless they’d been specifically trained otherwise.
“Oh! Then yes!” She said.
A quick flicker of a knife into my hands, a quick sweep, and I had a small amount of her hair, and more importantly, her scent.
“I’ll be as quick as I can!” I promised the girl, then sped back out of [Portcullis].
I was sticking to my promise, and pushing myself to my limits. I was flying as fast as I could, moving as quickly as I could push myself, using every sense and every thought process I had available. Ithil was one of the old elven cities, predating the Immortal War, and its unique enchantments had let it skip through the entire war unmolested. A part of me ached that it had returned to reality too early, caught up in the last little ripple of the great war. I disregarded that part of me for now - the important thing was I knew how to read the layout of the city and the street signs - planted trees, marking the roads.
Children lived in the central, heavily-protected district, which made my starting search area tiny. The wards had been thoroughly breached in the city’s invasion. I zipped through Ithil, finding willow trees easily enough. A quick check later, and I found Sara’s apartment. I sniffed her hair and sniffed the apartment, managing to pick apart all the various scents. Four very strong scents, and dozens of weaker ones. The usual members of the household, and guests. They’d been fairly social. Three women, one man. One was Sara, one was probably her mother, and the last one was probably related. They smelled vaguely of pine sap, fresh dandelions, and the first snowfall of winter. Hard to describe, and they all had slightly different ratios. Sara’s mom liked to use a perfume that smelled like honey and vanilla… and I could tell that Sara had tried it at one point, using way too much. A trail went from her room to the kitchen, then straight to the bathroom. It still lingered, to the point I thought even normal noses could tell. It had happened… roughly last week.
I felt like an intruder. The apartment hadn’t been touched, and the apartment was a perfect snapshot of their life. A few toys on the floor, a shelf of children’s books. Bread was proofing for baking later, and the laundry basket was half full.
I’d apologize if I was wrong and put things back, but I had a bad feeling about it all. I grabbed all of Sara’s things, and placed them into her room in [Manor]. I felt terrible grabbing most of the family heirlooms and putting them in my treasure room… but I had a steadily growing sense that none of the original owners were coming back.
I followed the scent trail down the stairs and out the door, then flew up and started to sniff around, trying to ignore how many fearful voices I was hearing, how many terrified children were being soothed by helpless parents. Mostly in - people running back to shelter at home. I spent a full three minutes there teasing through the various smells. Hundreds of people went through the door every day, their scents overlapping each other. Then skills were fading them out, and the harsh coppery scent of blood, gore, released bowels, and a million other brutal smells of a city being sacked were overwhelming. I could pick up Sara and her parent’s scents, but there were dozens of them, a new trail every time they walked out of the apartment complex. Finding THE freshest one was tricky, but I was able to find the strongest mix of pine, dandelions, and snow, and started to follow the trail.
It took me about a second from picking up the scent to finding the bodies. Part of me had idly started to wonder how I’d do a funeral. Could I store the bodies somewhere in [Manor] before burying them? Would it give Sara any sort of closure to see them and say goodbye? How ghoulish would it be to store the bodies in the same place as their kid?
Unfortunately, the state I found them in rendered nearly all of the questions moot.
I went back to the entrance of the apartment building, and teased through the hundreds of scents again, finding the possible-aunt’s smell and following it.
Fuck.
It was time for the worst conversation of my life.
I flew up to one of the remaining standing buildings, and cracked open [Portcullis]. When it was open only a hair, I [Teleported] in before slamming it shut. New idea of mine - no need to completely expose the entrance. I’d trade the idea for Sara’s parents in a heartbeat.
I didn’t flash right over to her room. I wandered over to where I’d stored her toys, grabbed a well-loved stuffed dinosaur before heading off to Sara’s room. I knocked on the door.
“Sara, can I come in?” I asked, giving the illusion of privacy.
“Yes.” Sara’s voice was small and scared. I came in with the stuffed dinosaur.
“Toothy!” She shouted, emotionally whiplashing from frightened to gleeful in the way only a kid can manage. The elf jumped down off the chair and ran across the room, hugging Toothy so tightly I was afraid his head was going to pop right off.
“Did you find my home? Did you find mom? Can we go there now?” Sara rambled off a dozen questions before pausing, her eyes widening comically. “Oh! Where are my manners?” Her cadence was clearly copied off her mother, or someone else close. “Thank you very much for helping me.” Sara did an awkward half-bow.
Oh fuck. Oh fuck oh fuck OH FUCK. A thousand and twenty four wishes flitted through my mind, before I steeled myself and took a deep breath. I wasn’t going to be a coward, I wasn’t going to run away from the task, no matter how unpleasant.
Where to start, where to start… did she even know what death was? There was no reason to explain it to kids too early, and I hadn’t detected any traces of pets. Which didn’t say tons. But it wasn’t like an elderly relative would’ve passed, immortality was nice like that. She was after the war… but Ithil had been safe from it. The low number of people who’d been in the apartment was concerning… maybe they usually went to visit relatives?
Oh gods and goddesses, I hoped she had relatives somewhere.
Fine. Death. I could do this. It was only the conversation that was going to define Sara’s entire existence. I was going to make it gentle and pleasant. Fuck spying, Arachne’s training was equally good for this sort of thing.
I squatted down next to Sara, and looked her in the eyes. I took a ragged breath, and started.
“Sara, I’m sorry.”
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It was beyond the ability of even the gods above for the conversation to go well. The best I could say was it didn’t go terribly.
Unfortunately, Sara didn’t have any other relatives here. The Urwa-style name should’ve given me a hint, but I hadn’t quite put it all together until I talked with her.
“Do you have any other family, friends?” I asked her. There was no light in Sara’s eyes to twinkle, no excitement possible with the news I’d told.
“Aunt… aunty Jasmine.” Sara tearfully said. “But you said she’s also dead.”
“Any other relatives anywhere? Maybe another city?”
Sara shook her head.
“We came from Ur-wa. It was just… just us.”
She looked up at me with huge, tear-filled eyes, and asked the question that broke my heart.
“Can I stay with you? Please?”
I sped my mind all the way up, a thousand thoughts flashing through dozens of parallel minds as I weighed the various pros and cons, my ability to look after a kid, what Iona would say. How important it was to give an answer with no visible hesitation to Sara. How she’d latched onto me, no matter how brief our time together, and what a blow it would be to get torn away again, after I’d so carefully handled things. How Ithil was about to have a gigantic, unnaturally large influx of orphans. I was responsible, in a way. They were alive.
I couldn’t save every starfish, but I could save this one.
“Okay.”
Comments
I have tears in my eyes.
Sondrex76
2025-03-08 09:20:51 +0000 UTCOkay first off, fuck you for making me cry like that. Second, absolutely amazing chapter. Elaine's panic while trying to keep from destroying this child's entire life with the wrong word, the wrong phrasing was so masterfully written. 14/10 as usual Selkie. <3
MadKingMidas
2025-02-04 03:37:00 +0000 UTCThanks!
Trevor Mergen
2025-01-28 19:34:23 +0000 UTCGot some real October Daye vibes from this one :)
TeaGeek
2025-01-24 01:13:34 +0000 UTCYes but that would be treated as divine intervention. The rules on this are pretty vague but it basically comes down to the more something would effect the world the more it costs the gods to do. The chatter they normally do with the goddesses is almost free for the goddesses because of it not being done with the intention of changing anything and has little impact. While delivering a message would have direct impact and is a mortal directly asking for a favor from a god. How close someone is with the god or how open to hearing them also has some kind of impact as well but that's even more vague. There are also things and topics the gods are not allowed to discuss with mortals and a bunch more rules that are vaguely eluded to.
DireGoat
2025-01-24 00:24:11 +0000 UTCWonder how Elaine will manage with her as she grows up and system activates. a child with the elf curse would be a hellion if due to arrogance curse they always thought they were right.
C Gillan
2025-01-23 20:07:04 +0000 UTCOne of these days would love for her to just say who she is in full The Elaine mode and watch what happens exeptionally in a situation like the start of this chapter
C Gillan
2025-01-23 20:03:19 +0000 UTCSelki said the cheaper didn't feel right so it wasn't actually part of the story. I think you are right about the mini brains because the first time she was beheaded her head just grew a new body not the body a new head I believe she had to think about it differently or something so the system was changing what was the main part of her.
Harry Hirsch
2025-01-23 14:50:02 +0000 UTCI was wondering, could Elaine or Iona ask their goddesses to deliver messages to the other one?
Harry Hirsch
2025-01-23 14:44:09 +0000 UTCOh it's one of those chapters that's trying to make you a sobbing and it's so good at it..... That starfish line really got me
Harry Hirsch
2025-01-23 14:41:42 +0000 UTCI don't think elves level like crazy. I think they have the same levelling speed as humans and other elevenoid species (vampires excluded). Its just that they live longer and thats why they have higher levels than most mortals. (can't be too sure about this tho, someone correct me if I'm wrong)
Ananya Jindal
2025-01-23 13:39:34 +0000 UTCYou forgot to mention the general concept of how raping people isn't ok. War or not. Innocents or not. Soldiers or not. Period. Arachne had to have seen it happening and Elaine stopping it. If they want to get pissy about it, to hell with the lot of them.
Rainer
2025-01-23 05:30:28 +0000 UTCWe saw how that ended with the elf who killed his bias checker.
Rainer
2025-01-23 05:27:39 +0000 UTCReally? I never heard about that retcon. Isn't her first beheading the whole reason she has 5 mini-brains in her torso? The brains are to heal her if she loses her head again.
Rainer
2025-01-23 05:24:21 +0000 UTCTo be fair, Amber was generally already grown when they arrived, so she wasn't really raised by Elaine. Racoon could be considered mid teens in goblin years and Nina was around 10, I believe. Sara is probably the youngest of Elaine's wards.
Rainer
2025-01-23 05:22:03 +0000 UTCPoor Sara. And the thousands of other brand-new orphans created that day
Roombot
2025-01-23 03:02:03 +0000 UTCPoor sara 😞
Michael Neal
2025-01-23 02:45:55 +0000 UTCRaccoon is her name
Mike Joyce
2025-01-23 02:26:56 +0000 UTCElaine doubting herself after getting her head chopped off was retconned out. It didn’t actually happen.
enderman
2025-01-23 01:37:39 +0000 UTCWell, then. New daughter, and a probable execution order. Good to know.
Stephanie Washburn
2025-01-23 00:48:01 +0000 UTCWant that a what if chapter though?
Superduck50
2025-01-22 22:51:25 +0000 UTCIts probably why they are so invested in cycling classes to improve quality.
Revel
2025-01-22 21:55:28 +0000 UTCTftc Also minor spelling error. 'briskly' "I strongly recommend you quietly and brisky get out of there NOW." Love your work btw!
Jared Moss
2025-01-22 21:27:22 +0000 UTCyou forget how unpleasent that experience was for her the first time. it caused her to doubt herself a ton. I doubt she would let people chop her head of just for kicks.
FaMa_Tarapax
2025-01-22 21:08:58 +0000 UTCTftc
Bryce
2025-01-22 20:02:11 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter.
Joshua Little
2025-01-22 19:50:25 +0000 UTCSo thats ... Amber, Nina, Goblin (who I forget atm) and now Sara... yep Elaine didn't dodge kids with the biomancy as good as she thought.
Tilla
2025-01-22 19:47:49 +0000 UTCArachne should have plenty of data from oathbound healers over the years, combined with her knowledge of Elaine's personality it should be pretty predictable what she will do.
Tjark
2025-01-22 19:30:26 +0000 UTCThere's probably a joke in there somewhere about Elaine and Iona finally getting a surprise kid after all the times they didn't use The Potion.
Gatling_Tech
2025-01-22 19:27:05 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter 😁
tr13ze
2025-01-22 19:17:57 +0000 UTCBecause she found Sara's familiy with her nose and by scent alone.
Tjark
2025-01-22 19:06:59 +0000 UTCPretty sure the only cure for white doves curse is death. There are work arounds, like we see with Elaine, Vampires, and Invincible. I think there is merit to enderman's idea for a workaround for elves. I think an explicit system that they force themselves to use to check their biases might be better. Because, being the best, they use the best systems.
AntiClimax she her
2025-01-22 18:54:25 +0000 UTCElves are the most favored of elvenoids, but I thought phoenixes were second overall. I think the world would be way different if elves were nearly as powerful as dragons...
AntiClimax she her
2025-01-22 18:50:48 +0000 UTCBecause she sniffed out the location of Sara’s family
Thomas Heaton
2025-01-22 18:46:54 +0000 UTCI think their class quality also gets boosted with everything else. Auri's lv 8 class was yellow, and elves are the 2nd most System favored species right after dragons.
Ervin Ughy
2025-01-22 18:42:17 +0000 UTCAt least the elves Elaine met pre-timeskip cycled through multiple classes, resetting multiple times at 768 (or other early-ish Class ups)
Simerop
2025-01-22 18:17:54 +0000 UTCWhen I read they'd be screaming for her head my first thought was she'd let her head get chopped off, grow a new one, and then be about her business. They get their head, and she's living peacefully. 😁
Jason Hardman
2025-01-22 18:08:40 +0000 UTCI can't help but wonder... Why is the chapter name "Bloodhound"...
Todor
2025-01-22 18:08:01 +0000 UTCMaybe but they can also wait for literally forever on the class up to get a bunch of achievements.
DireGoat
2025-01-22 17:29:03 +0000 UTCProbably not yet. It hasn't been that long and there isn't really a need yet for a top tier international university yet.
DireGoat
2025-01-22 17:27:54 +0000 UTCArachne knows Elaine’s personality and how she reacted to similar behavior during the Han Empire civil war, it was obvious that Elaine would do something like this.
Dragonboy Smith
2025-01-22 17:20:40 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter. Has the school of magic required to the point where Elaine could take a teaching position for a few decades and enjoy the school's protection?
Simon Hoerder
2025-01-22 17:12:36 +0000 UTCI just thought of this but wouldn’t elf’s have lower overall class quality because A). They level like crazy and have less time to accumulate achievements B). They don’t need to struggle and put in much effort comparatively so the system detects that.
enderman
2025-01-22 16:55:53 +0000 UTCI don’t think you’re entirely correct in saying that Arachne knew what Elaine would do. Arachne knows what Elaine will do when talking or calling out to her because Arachne has seen and knows what Elaine does in her day to day lives. This is a brand new scenario that Elaine has non-combatants in a war zone with no allies that she can trust that would respect regular elfanoid decency of not killing civilians. In simple terms Arachne can’t predict scenarios that she doesn’t have a basis to go off.
enderman
2025-01-22 16:42:28 +0000 UTCI think its more about how discipline can/ can’t keep the curse at bay. If Elaine puts Sara through ranger training I can imagine a grown up Sara understanding and tricking her curse to think that the average elf is superior to the average elfanoifd but training, class quality and levels matter.
enderman
2025-01-22 16:32:06 +0000 UTCYou'd like to think that once people cool off they'd quietly move her from 'fratricidal maniac' to 'lady that was dealing with war criminals in a much more efficient manner than any court system'. But people don't want reasons, they want excuses, so, yeah, she'll be in hiding.
DAK
2025-01-22 16:25:04 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter
Tilen Praprotnik
2025-01-22 16:06:24 +0000 UTCBiomanse it out?
leon boudet
2025-01-22 16:05:18 +0000 UTCLuckily she has a mansion in her own dimension to hide out in and will be too busy raising a child to go out on adventures for a while.
Kurosov
2025-01-22 15:53:32 +0000 UTCIt’s very unlikely Arachne didn’t know Elaine would react that way. She probably made the calculated decision ahead of time that Elaine’s healing supporting their assault was worth the eventual drama. It’s funny she notes the claim about preventing a guardian wouldn’t hold sway because there weren’t enough casualties when Elaine’s presence is likely the reason it never happened to begin with.
Kurosov
2025-01-22 15:51:32 +0000 UTCIt will take time for them to properly rebuild anyways, before any organizations like the Sentinels would start back up again in full. Might as well take a decade or two to lay low and care for family until then.
Kennyevilmonkey
2025-01-22 15:47:17 +0000 UTCyeah the irony is palpable
Deltoren
2025-01-22 15:46:53 +0000 UTCDaughter acquired! May the gods and goddesses protect their sanity when puberty hits, and they have to deal with raising a Prideful teenage elf!
Kennyevilmonkey
2025-01-22 15:44:21 +0000 UTCThank you!
Andrew
2025-01-22 15:43:04 +0000 UTCAkfskfakfakgakgs. I’m so excited
Brynn Szczesniak
2025-01-22 15:40:18 +0000 UTCdaughter get!!! well adopted daughter ;)
darrel morris
2025-01-22 15:40:04 +0000 UTCFrom a personal point of view, Elaine is a friend. From a cold and calculating point of view, Elaine is a powerful classer. Probably the strongest healer in the world. And even in terms of combat, Elaine is elite, but her level is too low to do what she did and come out alive. She doesn't have Night's reputation, probably some still hunted her with some random excuse, but Elaine can handle some level 2000 immortals. Honestly, I hope she upgrades her 3 classes that are probably at 1536. She might get triple black. And Elaine can build a reputation with that, whoever hunts her is eliminated.
Shoto
2025-01-22 15:39:21 +0000 UTCBittersweet Chappie. Thank you.
SwitchBlaze
2025-01-22 15:39:10 +0000 UTCYay Night! Go foster mother Elaine! Thanks for the chapter in hardships and sympathy.
Khal Lee
2025-01-22 15:30:42 +0000 UTCThe woman that was so sure to never have kids that she removed those organs from her body now has a kid.... Kind of parallel to Iona raising/training up a Goblin....
Benjamin Olson
2025-01-22 15:26:30 +0000 UTCTFTC
CataFlan
2025-01-22 15:22:48 +0000 UTCWill she come up with a solution how to deal with elven pride?
Luboš Hemala
2025-01-22 15:17:56 +0000 UTCTftc
jac l
2025-01-22 15:15:50 +0000 UTCFrom a mile off
Tiffany Miller
2025-01-22 15:14:02 +0000 UTCYeah that's sad.
TroubleFait
2025-01-22 15:14:00 +0000 UTCGlad to see Arachne didn't toss Elaine to the wolves, even sticking to her principles didn't break the bond she's forged with the the Mistress of Threads and Night. Good, would have hated for that to break that relationship.
Drasoini
2025-01-22 15:10:58 +0000 UTCSaw this coming. Elaine is going to have to live low for a couple decades at least now.
TheHornedOne
2025-01-22 15:06:24 +0000 UTCnice
matt
2025-01-22 15:00:52 +0000 UTCThanks!
Mad Dessert
2025-01-22 15:00:31 +0000 UTC