Chapter 468 - The Extinguisher of Legends
Added 2023-08-30 08:33:35 +0000 UTCThe old year had ended, the new year was in. Night and Arachne were busy, busy people, and while I’d gotten a number of invitations to fancy functions and various parties, without Iona to push me and provide a strong incentive to go, I’d declined almost all of them. The only one I’d accepted was a party the War Sentinels were throwing, which had felt a little out of my league. It wasn’t that I felt I didn’t belong or anything like that, just that their idea of entertainment was founded on most of them being over level 1000, which allowed for some niche, extreme stuff.
However, in the end, I did get to arrange a nice little sit-down dinner with Night, Arachne, and Clotho, her bonded black widow spider. Julius and Artemis joined us, and my heart had a little crack in it when Iona failed to miraculously appear out of the sky at the last second to join us.
I knew she was out and busy. I knew she’d be back in just a few months, if not weeks, and that the time wasn’t so long as to be worth making a ton of trips. I knew she hadn’t been gone long.
But all those were logical arguments, and I missed her something fierce.
Auri had baked, Julius had scrounged up some relatively old bottles of blood wine, Artemis had acquired enough different food to feed an army, and I’d gone ham on enchanting every last square inch of the villa. We all pitched in on the cooking.
Auri was very particular on the difference, and with me around, she was a little better at telling Artemis where to stick it.
We didn’t have a proper arcanite core yet, but I could run the enchantments myself for now.
One moment our doorway was clear, the next Night, Arachne - Susan, here at an informal event - and Clotho, Arachne’s bonded spider, were at my door. Gods, they were so fast I didn’t even see them approaching.
“Hello!” Susan stepped inside.
“Hey! Come on in!” I shouted, hurrying over to properly greet them like a good hostess. “Thanks for coming!”
“Oh no, thank you for inviting us! Your place is simply marvelous!” Susan gushed over my home, while Clotho, sitting on her shoulder, waved a jaunty leg at Auri. The little phoenix puffed herself up importantly.
“Remember.” I muttered out of the side of my mouth, well aware that everyone could hear me anyway. It was about the appearance of the thing, not the actuality. “They’re guests. Be nice.”
“Brrrpt.” Auri tried to be quiet with her protest, but it was merely tolerably loud instead of her usual high powered blast. She wanted to let me know that she had a store, plenty of customers, and knew how to be polite.
She ended her reminder with a buffet of her wing to the back of my head. I loved immunity to fire. It included immunity to being smacked by solid flames!
Night smiled as he entered, holding a wrapped gift in his hands. I could see through the waxed paper easily enough, and lifted an eyebrow.
That was an excellent housewarming present. Night knew me well.
“Night! How are you? Come in, come in, don’t let the cold get you!” ‘Cold’ was a relative term, and part of me wanted to go on a dizzying analysis on how temperature was relative. Our ‘cold’ here in Exterreri was someone else’s ‘warm spring day’, but at the same time, we were all used to our warm and cold, so our cold felt cold… until stats and skills kicked in, which…
Thank the System for [Parallel Thoughts].
“Elaine. I must concur with Susan, your home is most wonderful. I get a strong sense of behaaglijk from it.”
I tilted my head in confusion, not knowing the word. Night understood.
“It is a word from Frisian with no good equivalent in High Elvish or Creation.” He said. “It exemplifies the idea of cozy. Comfortable. Warm. Snug. Agreeable. Everything a home should be. It is the crackling log in the fireplace. The hot mug of milk. The warm embrace of a loved one.”
I looked around with Night’s words in mind.
“Behaaglijk. Yes.” His description was accurate.
We made more polite small talk as we made our way over to the garden, where I was hosting dinner. A fancy set of spells had snow drifting through the air, only to vanish once they hit the ground.
“Brilliantly done.” Susan praised as she saw the snowfall. “It’s not an illusion at all. Such a clever application of Ice, Wind, Fire, and Dark.”
I coughed awkwardly.
Shit! That would’ve been a much neater way of doing it! Ah well, live and learn. The more practice I got, the better I’d be.
Hey!
Wait!
There’s no way Susan didn’t know how I’d actually done it! I wasn’t trying to hide it at all, the runes were glowing all around the edges of the garden. She was trying to subtly steer me down a better path!
My shocked look must’ve made it to my face, because the rainbow-haired woman sent me a cheeky wink.
Everyone sat down and made various greetings as Auri and I bustled around, getting food served for everyone.
The idea of getting a few apprentices to do the gruntwork was starting to become appealing. I could see the benefits of such an arrangement! Heck, I could even pay someone to do all this.
Be helpful to Nina as well. The place was big, and I was starting to feel like I was rattling around in it a bit.
“Auri, I do believe that your current accommodations are lacking a certain flair, one I seem to recall a much younger Elaine gushing over once upon a time.” Night said as he presented his gift to Auri.
“Brrrpt!!” Auri’s estimation of Night went way up, mostly for bringing her gifts.
In a surprise, she didn’t just burn the paper off. She fluttered around it, her wings buzzing at the speed they flapped at, carefully ripping the paper apart with her beak. One spot than another, she artfully shredded the paper.
I already knew what was inside it. Auri’s scream of birdy approval when she finally unwrapped enough of it to see what was inside was a thing of beauty. Night smiled as she burned away the rest of the paper in her excitement to see her new arcanite perch.
Auri twisted and turned to see herself in her new perch, then hopped up.
“BrrPTT!!” She declared it perfect and marvelous.
“I am most pleased that it meets your approval, young one.” Night said with a smile, and Susan shot him a loving look.
I refocused on the conversations going back and forth, moving quickly from appetizers - a charcuterie board, with artful drizzles of basilisk blood for the vampires - onto the main course. Tasty, tasty agnolotti, stuffed with rapini and king salmon! Pork loin on the side, a small dish of curry imported from Ralakar - a day of flying there, a day of flying back - and a beautiful set of freshly cut garden greens in a salad.
For the vampires we had ethically sourced silvery unicorn blood, warmed and spiced. The seller was the seventh person I’d tried claiming to sell unicorn blood, and the first one I believed. I knew what it smelled like thanks to Varuna, my roommate Skye’s bonded companion back at the School. I’d dropped an idle word about it to Auri, who’d dutifully passed the message along to Atlas. I figured that was good enough.
The ethical part I had no way of confirming, but I couldn’t imagine a steady supply without some willingness on the unicorn’s part.
Night leaned back, swirling his glass of blood wine and bringing it up to his nose. He breathed in deeply.
“Ahhh, a most wonderful find. Elaine, I have been looking for interesting tales recently, and I have one from my past which I believe you would find most fascinating.”
I straightened up, although Julius and Susan were still deep in discussion on the nature of command. Susan was delighted to hear how Julius viewed things in Remus times, considering it a valuable source on how thought, philosophy, and command had evolved over time.
“Too far back for anyone to remember, too long after you were cruelly torn from Pallos, a powerful Spatial mage appeared.” Night began to recount. “At the highest levels, fights become interesting, to say the least, and blows can come from any direction, from any element. Yet, one thing remains true the world around - the vitality defense.”
Night was slowly weaving his spell of words, drawing all of us into his story.
“Two individuals of even vaguely the same level can not directly impact one another. They must find another way to visit violence. This one mage, however, found something of a workaround. An arguable loophole, in the time before the Divine Decree banning tearing the very fabric of space was enacted. Indeed, I have good cause to believe that this nameless mage was the cause of said Decree, due to it coming ‘round near the end of his lifespan. But I digress. The mage, you see, was a master of portals, Spatial magic only available at the highest levels. Not only did he have the power to rapidly create small portals, but he worked out a way to move them through space, ‘scooping’ up anything that went through.”
Night paused for a moment, letting us imagine such a thing. I immediately saw the connection.
“He could ignore people’s vitality when teleporting them.” I gasped, imagining all the horrible things that could be done with such a power. Into an active volcano, into the depths of the planet, and a thousand other possibilities sprang to mind.
Auri’s eyes went wide, and Artemis had an evil grin on her face.
“Ooooh, I’d love to do that to some people.” She said. “Just throw someone into the bottom of the ocean, and let them drown.”
Night nodded.
“Indeed he could. But he was more clever than that. See, many powerful Immortals could survive being taken to the bottom of the ocean, and such widespread slaughter would draw unpleasant attention. Instead, he simply sent people on a trip. The other thing he’d worked out was how to make portals to other worlds. What does it matter if your opponent is alive, if they have been stranded on another plane of existence entirely? For all practical purposes, they are dead.”
Night swirled his glass of wine around again, taking a delicate drink.
“That is the background to this tale. The story, proper, is how I found myself trapped on a world called Aetherion, a world entirely lacking in the System but rich in a different type of magic, and how I found my way back home, to Pallos proper. This is a tale that requires three days and three nights to properly regale, but alas, I shall have to cut it short.”
Night paused for a moment, and I didn’t even care that sauce was dripping off my ribs, onto my nice tunic.
“I have stolen from sleeping barrow kings, thrown tyrants off the highest peaks, and survived a single night with Morgana Moonwhisper. I have navigated the labyrinth of souls, recovered the heart of the forest, and sung so beautifully that the Siren of Sylvara wept and tore out her voice.”
He paused, letting his words soak in and ignite our imagination.
“I am Nyx Shadowbane, Warden of the Dark, Sovereign of Shadows, and Guardian of the Dreamrealm. You might have heard of me.”
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Susan and Julius rapidly finished their conversation as Night started to get into the meat of the story, all of us engrossed at every word coming from his mouth. He spoke rapidly, every single one of us here Classers and able to keep up with his furious pace. Still, it was clear that he was dramatically abbreviating portions of the story.
Him getting caught. The portal closing over him. The new world. New rules.
New magic.
Bit after bit, word after word, Night wove the most fantastical tale. A finger poking Auri got her to get the desserts - her pride as a [Chef] overriding her desire to hear the next part.
It was slowly becoming clear that all of Night’s titles and achievements that he’d just mentioned were purely from his time on Aetherion.
Night was detailing how they’d weakened a dam, preparing to flood out a town that a shape shifter of vicious power and seeming true immortality had taken over.
“The beams split with an almighty crack,-”
Right as Night said crack, a vicious Lightning bolt cracked through the sky, landing just outside the villa. Artemis was on her feet in an instant, knife in hand as stones began to spin around her.
“Excellent instincts.” Susan praised, manipulating threads that Clotho was furiously spinning. “Single human male. I don’t recognize him.”
If looks could kill, whoever was interrupting our dinner party would’ve been struck down by Night.
“Bird! I know you’re in there! You ruined my life! Come out!” The dude shouted in Trader Tongue from outside. Susan quickly relayed and translated the words to those of us with poorer senses. I was tempted to put my hands on my hips and glare at Auri, but restrained myself.
All eyes were drawn to the phoenix.
For all that it looked like Auri was continuously getting into trouble, she wasn’t. The last few times I’d tried to save the situation I’d been completely wrong, and misread both her and the situation. From the builders, to as early as this evening, Auri had been doing the right thing, and it’d be wrong of me to prematurely scold her, or even accusingly ask what she’d done.
“What do you think is going on?” I asked Auri.
She made a shrugging motion with her wings.
“Brrrpt?”
“Would you like me to intervene, dear?” Susan asked. “We are as inconvenienced as you are.”
“Give us a few minutes to try and resolve it ourselves. You’re guests, you shouldn’t need to be involved.” I said.
I got up with Auri, and started to head out. Julius and Artemis joined me.
“We live here, we’re not exactly guests.” Artemis explained. I nodded my understanding.
I made sure my [Persistent Casting] was on, both for myself, a small area of effect for Julius and Artemis - we’d be in moonlight once we were outside - and two casts for Auri. Whoever it was seemed to have a beef with her, and while she was a phoenix who could revive, why take any risks?
I assumed my enemies were competent. If someone was explicitly going after Auri, I assumed they had something prepared. Like a bucket of water.
We got outside.
[Ranger - 340] was the dude’s level, and it was like he came out of the jungle or something. Quetzalcoatl feathers made a cape, jackalope horns were shaped onto a crude helmet, a rabbit’s foot was at his waist and he had a glorious hoof-shaped bruise on his chest. A necklace filled with various carnivore’s teeth was around his neck - megalodon teeth and medusa fangs were distinctive - and he had a bearskin loincloth. He wasn’t quite steady on his feet, and he was armed with a pair of scimitars, but lacking in armor. He looked enraged at seeing us.
“You destroyed my life!” He screamed at Auri, starting to flourish his blades in a complex dance. “It was all going perfectly, I was going to be great! Then YOU came along!”
It clicked.
Suen. Osengard. The plague town we’d been driven out of, after fixing their problem. I crossed my arms.
“You already tried to murder us once, now you’ve chased us all the way down here?”
Julius made a pacifying motion.
“Let’s see if we can talk this out.”
The dude snarled, his blades increasing in speed. He took a step towards us.
“Yes! No! I -”
That had been enough for Artemis. With a dozen sharp overlapping cracks, two dozen small sharp rocks leapt from around her, crossing the distance in an instant and pulverizing the man. Blood, brain, and gore arced across the ground, and he dropped dead like a puppet with its strings cut.
[*ding!* Your party has slain an [Extinguisher of Legends] (Lightning, 340)//[Pursuer of Myth] (Mantle, 314)]
“Sorry love.” Artemis apologized to Julius. “I didn’t see that ending peacefully, and it’s better we get his notification than him ours, or poor Auri’s. Especially with that class.”
Julius sighed and rubbed his eyes.
“You made the right decision.” He easily admitted. “Just wish that people weren’t so stupid.”
Susan’s threads had already neatly grabbed every single bone shard and shredded artery, neatly wrapping everything up into a tidy package. In moments, it was like the [Extinguisher of Legends] hadn’t even darkened our doorstep, every inch cleaned up and removed.
I patted his back.
“That’s what we admire about you.”
“We all know you’re more than willing to give the execute order.” Artemis chimed in, slipping her arm around his waist. “One of us has to be the reasonable one, otherwise we’d both be rotting in jail!”
Julius hugged his wife.
We went back inside and settled down again. Susan and Night had clearly helped a little with the dishes, subtly making our lives easier while not stepping on our toes.
I started a new book inside my [Astral Archives] - clever social moves by Susan and Night, and started taking notes. When in doubt, they were the masters.
“I am dying to know what class he had that got you all so interested.” Susan prompted us as we sat down.
“[Extinguisher of Legends] and [Pursuer of Myth].” I answered before Artemis could, throwing her a smug look.
Susan’s eyes went wide, and Night whistled.
“The class sounds most potent. A concern one must always hold is the ability for an individual with the proper skills and classes to punch far, far above their weight. Elaine, Auri, he might have even held a threat to you and your lives! Such a class could be explicitly designed to slay those who are out of myth and legend, which the two of you most assuredly qualify as. You might have found your healing deserting you, or the legendary phoenix’s resurrection failing. Indeed, a few more levels and I would be wary of engaging such a person.”
Artemis looked smug. I pointed a knife at her.
“I’m pretty sure you also qualify as legendary, Miss Founded-the-School.” I pointed out.
“Yeah, but I didn’t wait for his speech. Now he’s dead, and I’m feasting!”
I didn’t have a second knife to point at Artemis. Drat.
“No feet on the table!” I quickly said before she could put her sandals up. She mimed horror.
“Me?”
“Yes, you!”
“Brrrpt?” Auri wanted to hear more of Night’s story.
“What happened after the dam broke?” I asked, quickly redirecting the conversation to Night’s story.
“Well! I hopped onto one of the largest logs with my boon companions, and we rode down the flood together, hoping to strike in the chaos and confusion. However, we hadn’t considered that…”
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The dawn was arriving as Night wrapped up the abridged version of his story.
“... as much as I wish to say that the Enorian assassins found me at the height of the ritual, alas, reality occasionally lacks the dramatic flair of a story.”
Julius and I traded disbelieving looks. His entire adventure had been something out of a story! Night had a tiny little quirk in the corner of his lips, clearly aware of how his words were received.
“The ritual completed, and a portal was ripped clean open from Aetherion to Pallos. I had already said my goodbyes to those who would be staying behind, and quickly stepped through with those who wished to see new worlds, and explore new mountains. We found ourselves on the northern continent and that…” He paused for a dramatic moment. “Is a story of its own.”
I enthusiastically clapped and cheered at the end of Night’s story, a sentiment quickly picked up by everyone else. Auri made a whole audience’s worth of [Mage Hands] to join on in.
We started to get up and out of the garden, nobody wanting the vampires to be exposed to the sun.
“Dawn. Would you do me the privilege of walking together once again?” Night asked.
I straightened up at his request. He’d called me Dawn, not Elaine, so this was important.
“Yes.” I said.
In a twist, we stayed inside, navigating through rooms in a slow, endless loop, staying out of the garden in the center of the villa and out of the faint rays of the morning light. Wasn’t sure how the two vampires planned on getting home, but they were welcome to spend the entire day here if they wanted to.
Vampire room I mentally added to my list of things to add to the place. A deep, secure, lightless crypt for visiting vampires.
“I have had many causes to observe the workings of your [Oath] upon the tens, if not hundreds, of thousands of people who have taken it up since your time.” Night began the conversation in his typical manner, hands clasped behind his back, stepping slowly and pausing for me to absorb his words.
Some routines had been sorted out ages ago, and never changed.
“A regret I have - I shall not tell you a bald-faced lie and claim it is my deepest regret, not when that would do injustice to so many others - is that, after a time, I simply forgot that they were because of you. The memory was not important, and so I allowed it to be relegated to the annals of history, failing to give you proper credit. For that, I would like to apologize.”
I waved him off.
“You had every reason to think I was dead, and how many literal years of time have you spared yourself by not tracking my name every time it could possibly come up?”
Night nodded his thanks.
“Over time, I have seen many, many healers engage on the front lines. Those who choose to pursue the path of both sorcery and healing remain rare, for obvious, self-selecting reasons, but there are a few every generation who make a name for themselves. I have also seen a number of people struggle with their vow to heal all who come, when just moments before their patient was attempting to end their life. When people across the battlefield are not directly choosing to try and harm the healer. I was concerned when Arachne settled on the role of War Sentinel, although you seemed to go into it with both eyes open. Nonetheless. I believe a conversation on the topic of ethics would be fruitful, in the light of your imminent deployment to foreign fields. A deployment that, if I recall correctly, you explicitly asked not to have happen as part of your regular duties, and yet, which you find yourself now wrapped up in. Come, tell me of your thoughts.”
I grinned.
“I’d wanted to have this exact conversation with you Night, thank you.” I said. “Last things first, the Han Empire. I’ve been wanting to go for a while. In fact, Iona and I almost went there after we graduated instead of going to Exterreri, both of us having a good reason to be there. My starting thoughts are fairly simple, and I know they’re going to evolve over time. Before a battle, after a battle, everyone is fair game. Everyone deserves aid. There’s an argument that I’m making a tactically poor choice to ensure my enemy is in fighting shape before an engagement, but I feel fairly secure in after the battle. During the fight is where I anticipate problems. My initial thoughts are fairly simplistic. They’re trying to kill me and harm my patients, so I’m going to defend myself and my patients first. However, I can anticipate several situations where it might not be so clear cut…”
Night knew what he was doing with the time and the sun. Dusk came and went before we even began to wrap our conversation up.
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I wasn't originally going for this, but it ended up so close to it that I tweaked a few tiny details...
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kQKrmDLvijo
Comments
Love the Kvothe reference
Kalle
2023-09-20 20:06:32 +0000 UTCHonestly I really liked this ignoble, mid monologue, Artemis one-shot end to him. Equally it was nice to have the tension of him being "floating around" resolved, given the amount of foreshadowing/telegraphing that surrounded him. He seemed a little too truly nasty to want to be kept around as some kind of recurring foil to Auri. It did feel a little soon after Jake for that subversion of expectations, though, maybe, without anything more notable in-between? The feeling is almost like a stumble in cadence, with them basically back to back. Maybe that's just me :)
taswyn
2023-09-01 16:05:11 +0000 UTCNo chapter today, or just later than usual?
julian
2023-09-01 13:30:17 +0000 UTCKind of had a vision of a red pressurized cylinder, with a trigger, pressure gauge and sprayer hose, with would read, [Extinguisher, Legendary] for [ [Identify] when I first read the title.
Jonathan
2023-09-01 03:20:26 +0000 UTCLots of people disappointed by that guy dying but he was introduced so long ago I don’t even remember who he is lol.
NethanielShade
2023-08-31 20:37:00 +0000 UTCI was hoping to see Atlas and friends get some experience protecting Auri from this guy, when he showed up at her bakery. Instead it's a non-event. Oh well.
Jay Kominek
2023-08-30 23:13:36 +0000 UTCAnd just how incompetent he was. This wasn't a master mind. It was a useless drunken city guard.
Tiffany Miller
2023-08-30 23:05:16 +0000 UTCInteresting points. Some thoughts: 1) On the facts you mention, I took it another way, i.e. that the book is about her settling and looking what her new life will be. She is still in the phase of "working out how the new world works" to have already plans what to change. The thugs are a good example. She wanted them gone only to learn there was a reason why they were not already removed by the guards. 2) While I agree that it may be more interesting to read about, I don't think healing a whole army is worse for her experience than healing a Ranger team. Wrt being stuck with her second class, luckily Elaine shares experience with Auri, so will never be completely stuck. We saw it already leveling again, and I expect her to get a black class soon, allowing her to upscale quite a bit. Actually, from the start, I interpreted the book cover with her casting a wizard spell, to be referring to the class up of her second class. 4) To me it seems, she is in the process of finding out for herself, what it means to be Sentinel Dawn (of Exterri) again. Just saying.
bcdp
2023-08-30 21:49:56 +0000 UTCI'm a bit sad about the estinguisher of legend's end but at the same time when you think of his level and who he was facing I don't know what I was expecting
Lijwent
2023-08-30 21:12:53 +0000 UTCLet me start by saying that this has been one of my favorite stories for a long time. However, I've started noticing some things that it might be good to keep in mind moving forward. This genuinely isn't supposed to be mean spirited, but to try to be helpful for the future. 1) Elaine (and, to some extent, the story) seems to be stagnating recently. Compared to when she was younger she seems to have a distinct lack of personal goals or plans. Currently her goals seem to consist of cuddling with Iona in the short term, marrying Iona in the mid term, and... nothing really long term beyond existing. She seems to just do whatever the people around her want whether that be Iona, Night, or Arachne. Compared to the past when she wanted equality for women, compiling and spreading medical knowledge, etc. now she just seems rudderless and unmotivated. 2) Elaine seems ill-suited for her current position and responsibilities. The current iteration of Sentinels were described as the immortal level problem solvers. However, who was the last immortal that we've met and spent more than a minute with that didn't absolutely outclass Elaine in terms of level and power? Even many vampires who are cursed to level slowly have vastly more power than her. She seems to be stuck in this weird position where she's "outleveled" mortals for practical purposes, but isn't ready yet for the next level up. And while appointing her as a War Sentinel may help her first class, her second class seems doomed to stagnate much like Julius'. Appointing her as a Ranger or as a part of some other small team would suit her better for now as it would allow her to both heal and fight instead of just sitting in the back, hiding and healing. It feels like she either needs to be demoted, reassigned, or powerleveled pretty quickly. 3) Elaine hasn't shown much growth as a person or any interest in addressing personal weaknesses. For example, she's known that she's socially incompetent at best while also knowing that she's immortal. Instead of trying to improve her skills and learn from Iona who's been shown to be good at that sort of thing or even from Night or Arachne who have experience running multiple empires over history, she just shrugs her shoulders and lets someone else deal with it. Social situations aren't going to go away, the stakes and consequences are only going to get greater, and she's not limited by time. And yet, she doesn't seem to care. 4) Elaine's character seems to be getting less complex and more flanderized as time progresses. It's hard to point to specific examples, but instead of being a person with a certain personality and traits it feels like she's become a personification of those traits. These days it feels like she's just some amalgamation of social ineptness, being lovestruck, being vain, and being easily distracted. People will always behave differently in different situations, but back in Remus it felt like she truly WAS Sentinel Dawn at times and that aspect of her personality would show through at times even if she wasn't officially acting in that capacity. Now, it feels like Sentinel Dawn is nothing more than a mask that she puts on whenever it's time to "get serious". Many stories, unfortunately, have uninteresting side characters and you find yourself wishing to get back to the main character. However, these days I'm starting to dread chapters without other characters in them because that means I'm going to be stuck with Elaine and I was very sad to realize I've started to feel that way.
Matt H
2023-08-30 21:08:33 +0000 UTCThis is what I was expecting/hoping to happen. The character was a drunk borderline incompetent that suddenly got a class with a name as hard as “Extinguisher of Legends.” There was not sufficient historical/narrative buy-in to suggest a legitimate threat, unless the author was just trying to go grimdark for no real reason. I was expecting him to show up and Iona to see his class and not let him anywhere near Auri or Elaine, with Night or Arachne then quietly liquidating him after Iona mentioned him to Elaine. But this works, too.
SpiraSpira
2023-08-30 20:49:32 +0000 UTCPersonally I had anxiety knowing that guy was out there and a danger to Auri at any time. Glad he is dead but wish Auri could have killed him, herself.
StuBee3
2023-08-30 20:09:22 +0000 UTCah i do wonder what would happen with Iona at the end, the moon goddesses do expect her, Iona doesn't currently want immortality, the marriage not being "forever" , the little mention about Iona companion being immortal while Iona isn't. i kinda do love that about Iona, she wants to service her goddesses as an angel of theirs after her life with elaine. she isn't really afraid of death and kinda looks forward, of course before that she wants to spend half a century with elaine and her companion but her companion certeinly doesn't care much for the moon goddesses, and the mentality for immortality. compassion is needed for Iona but after centuries, or thousands of years would she still be herself? with her vow held as most important or would she grow tired and jaded? Iona certeinly doesn't want to reach 4096 and become a goddess, she wants to serve... and her leveling as a valkyrie would be a nightmare when she reaches the 2000+, i wonder if elaine would manage to convince her or not, the choice of not being an immortal is really good for her case.
evyatar
2023-08-30 18:18:38 +0000 UTCmaybe i am forgetting something but didn't the jailbroken ability of the portals would have also allowed him to create small portals and cut people with the "edge" of the portal, what the portal touches is sent somewhere and the other half stays so the spatial mage could actually cut things on atomical level?
evyatar
2023-08-30 18:09:38 +0000 UTCThat Kvothe reference hit hard. Patrick Rothfuss is still in a dick-measuring contest with George R. R. Martin over who has the bigger writer's block. I don't expect The Doors of Stone or The Winds of Winter to ever be released. By the way, that spatial mage scooping people up with portals and isekai-ing them into other worlds is hilarious. But how does that violate the Divine decrees? He wasn't making spatial tears in Night's story.
Cirvante
2023-08-30 17:43:02 +0000 UTCHonestly expected Nina to be the one who had to do that asshole in. Great to see Artemis hasn't changed a bit though!
Hollow Marthon
2023-08-30 17:25:52 +0000 UTCWe are currently talking to NIGHT!? How is that not payoff from her entire search after coming to the future?
Markus
2023-08-30 17:12:14 +0000 UTCHad thought that as well, but realized it probably wouldn't work. He was a drunken idiot. Too fixated on killing Auri. There was no talking it out with him and he was dead the instant Artemis came to that conclusion.
Wizard Tim
2023-08-30 17:02:41 +0000 UTCI
Zernasss
2023-08-30 16:40:09 +0000 UTCSelkie has his next book series: Survival guide of a vampire in another world.
Zernasss
2023-08-30 16:39:49 +0000 UTCgood chappie
Elaine
2023-08-30 16:36:55 +0000 UTCI personally think, it enriches a story overall when not every possible plot hook plays out or pays of in a big way, life isn't like that, and even in a story it makes the emotional payout bigger for the ones that play out if there are a few duds in between.
Han Pol
2023-08-30 16:01:35 +0000 UTCFrom reading someone else’s comment, it’s the sheer quantity of these. Little plot points scattered like seeds on soil, and watching them all wilt and die
Veklov
2023-08-30 15:40:16 +0000 UTCLoved the chapter!
Sage Hallward
2023-08-30 15:13:42 +0000 UTCI don’t understand why some people are so upset with a short resolution to some parts of the story. I would much rather have a short but realistic wrap up than a long, overly complicated storyline that doesn’t add much other than Michael Bay-like explosions and graphics.
Julie
2023-08-30 13:45:54 +0000 UTCI’m a little tired of so many story lines presented in the epilogues being wrapped up in a couple of chapters, or just not explored very much. While I like that this story is not held down to having to follow the traditional story telling narratives, there should still be some payoff for plot points presented. Upon rereads, why shouldn’t I just skip the chapter about this guy’s organ story. Why should I have gotten excited for the rangers being sent after Elaine, when they are just going to turn around almost immediately after arriving. Why does the character Flora matter, if she doesn’t want to talk to Elaine after so many years, and Elaine doesn’t even put the dots together when hearing about her. Why are the Troll bullies the “arguably” most developed student characters outside of the main cast and the two’s boss. I am absolutely NOT saying that every possible story thread has to be explored. Many of the small story lines that are dealt with by other characters off screen in this series help make the world feel more real and lived in. I would just like to see some payoff to some of the plot points presented. It is getting kind of exhausting to get excited for something, only for it to be concluded quickly and/or with little consequence.
Caedmon Fowler
2023-08-30 13:33:16 +0000 UTCThe level of confidence in your myth killing skills required when four people at and above your level respond to your challenge doesn’t even have you hesitate. That or a complete lack of identify equivalent.
Shay Lewis
2023-08-30 13:06:55 +0000 UTCHehehe, extinguisher got extinguished. Sort of inevitable with such class name, I dare say.
Simon Hoerder
2023-08-30 12:28:19 +0000 UTCBehaglich
NoReTr3aT
2023-08-30 12:21:50 +0000 UTCThis is another one of those chapters where I just kept being happy with every single thing that happened in it. All of the little bits of social interaction and insights into each of the characters? Loved every word of it. Night's story time? Brilliant! The fool swiftly parted from life? I honestly couldn't see it going any other way! He was a drunk and a fool who had lucked into an amazing set of classes.... and then let them go do his head in a completely realistic way given what we knew about him. I also would have done the same thing Artemis in that situation, and I just can't see how it could have gone any other way. And then the way it closed off and wrapped up? I honestly love every bit of it. Thank you and fantastic chapter.
FeyOne
2023-08-30 12:00:34 +0000 UTCBummer, I figured the extinguisher was being set up as a futre member of Elaine's team, enemy turned ally and all that. His class seemed unique suited to support the loremaster half of her job as a wandering agent or something.
nelson corliss
2023-08-30 12:00:09 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter 😁
tr13ze
2023-08-30 11:37:41 +0000 UTCI mean he was a drunk of a town guard not the most competent of people
Tiffany Miller
2023-08-30 11:26:57 +0000 UTCWe also see here why Artemis is so FUCKING TWITCHY. Mage vs Mage? The one that shoots first wins and lives. It's a little rocket taggy, but it's part of why she's on a hairtrigger - she'd be dead otherwise. Dormin wasn't on a hair trigger...
Selkie
2023-08-30 11:20:32 +0000 UTCI almost teared up at the Name of the Wind reference... I have almost given up hope at the third book being released.
kotekj
2023-08-30 11:19:47 +0000 UTCYeah it was brought up and mentioned. I worked with my betas to try to find another way for the story to end, but fundamentally, the Eventide Eclipse were just going to outstrip him, and mage vs mage fights are short, fast, and brutal
Selkie
2023-08-30 11:19:26 +0000 UTCHe's dead Jim
Selkie
2023-08-30 11:18:00 +0000 UTCSorry! Artemis wouldn't let him finish his monologue or start a fight. She's not about to get into a fair fight!
Selkie
2023-08-30 11:17:49 +0000 UTCFrankly it's a miracle she let him talk that long
Selkie
2023-08-30 11:17:20 +0000 UTCSadly, all the characters I wrote dictated the arc heading and ending this way. It was supposed to be Iona initially, but all my characters had their own wants and desires and things got shuffled around by their actions
Selkie
2023-08-30 11:17:08 +0000 UTCThank you!
Andrew
2023-08-30 11:11:55 +0000 UTCI see you take your new representation of the Scandinavian tongues seriously :)
Adurna
2023-08-30 11:08:29 +0000 UTC2hr
Captdeth
2023-08-30 11:00:44 +0000 UTCI mean, Artemis wouldn't have waited when he attacked. Night would have intervined as well. While he says he could've been a threat in a few levels, sentinels wouldn't let those few levels come to pass. These are people who talk about the advantages of letting a dragon ravage a neighboring kingdom so they have their own problems. This guy should have let himself be hired as a guard and wait to get Elaine and Aurie alone. Also, remember, he took that class in a moment of anger as well so he wasn't the most inteligent to begin with. Had they dragged him out, Selkie would have seen reviews along the lines of why is this guy such a problem? This is stupid. This series has always been real life like as possible. Movies would let a guy like that last. In this reality, there are way to many powerful warriors with common sense.
Tyler Machado
2023-08-30 10:51:42 +0000 UTCSounds like that wasn't the plan initially, but events happened that way.
TroubleFait
2023-08-30 10:48:15 +0000 UTCWhat a doofus, should have at least tried with an ambush instead of monologuing
MrWheelsOfMime
2023-08-30 10:46:08 +0000 UTCDoing this immediately after the harem protag chapter, feels like an actual slap in the face.
bob semple
2023-08-30 10:35:35 +0000 UTCOn one hand, I’m disappointed that was so anticlimactic. On the other hand, good reference, lol.
CringeWorthyStudios
2023-08-30 10:34:42 +0000 UTCSo... Was the whole build-up for the Extinguisher of Legends all to subvert expectations and have him die in one shot? :D
Todor
2023-08-30 10:27:11 +0000 UTCKingkiller reference is godlike :D Curious if that is truly the last we see of the ol extinguisher or not
Alex E
2023-08-30 10:07:30 +0000 UTCChekov cries in his grave. In the movie the scene is a moment of comic relieve. Here you invested an entire chapter, then waited another 70, and ended it in a way which is admittedly taken from somewhere else. TBH, I vote for disappointment here.
gostsamo
2023-08-30 09:54:36 +0000 UTCThink she will get a better class out of it?
Xaim
2023-08-30 09:39:51 +0000 UTCLoved it. Life isn't always setups and payoffs. And Artemis sure as hell isn't the type to leave Chekov's Gun lying around.
SwitchBlaze
2023-08-30 09:28:21 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter.
Joshua Little
2023-08-30 09:26:31 +0000 UTCNah, more of a case of 'author tries to focus his creativity onto the more important parts of the story' syndrome
Hauke Sattler
2023-08-30 09:11:23 +0000 UTCWhy did he die so soon, there was so much potential with him :/
Grissly1000
2023-08-30 09:09:22 +0000 UTCFrisian? Has a Dutch person ended up on Pallos too?
Cormac
2023-08-30 09:02:01 +0000 UTCMaybe fell thru the portal
Ezekyil
2023-08-30 08:53:02 +0000 UTCThanks a bunch! ʕ•ᴥ•ʔゞ゛
Sezra_
2023-08-30 08:51:20 +0000 UTCLmfao at the Kvothe reference. God knows where that 3rd book is
Wyv
2023-08-30 08:36:15 +0000 UTC