Disintegrity 98 remade !
Added 2021-04-16 13:55:05 +0000 UTCI included page 99 cos I touched it up as well but the changes are not so significant that I'll mention them. You can still read the old post and it'll still detail it all fine enough ( https://www.patreon.com/posts/disintegrity-24225534 )
Now, 98 is not a page where there's much to say either. Cos it's about as straightforward an upgrade as it gets. I didn't fancy it up, reshape the page, it's just the same but prettier. The big problem of the old page was how thick the linework was. Basically, it's just hard to understand what is even being drawn, so that added to the silly faces is overkill levels of whatever the fuck is going on.
The only other change that's worth mentioning is the last panel having its outline removed. Now it's not contained within a neat typical rectangle at the bottom which I thought was just a little too cleanin the old version. I thought Larsen and his text in that panel should stick out a little more than they did cos it's the one part of the page that sets up the new few coming up, it's the one that has a pay off whereas the first panels are mostly just flavoring, they're there for pacing.
Comments
It wasn't too obvious that it even was a kiss in the old 99...
RodVonBoche
2021-04-17 23:27:49 +0000 UTCMy pleasure ! It's the whole point of the remake to make things better
RodVonBoche
2021-04-17 23:26:40 +0000 UTCIt's because most of my characters are bitches so of course most of them would be exasperated
RodVonBoche
2021-04-17 23:26:17 +0000 UTCThanks !
RodVonBoche
2021-04-17 23:20:45 +0000 UTCI couldn't leave it behind
RodVonBoche
2021-04-17 23:20:40 +0000 UTCIM SO GLAD TO SEE THAT FACE REMADE LOL
Vertspy
2021-04-17 02:06:30 +0000 UTCyeah 98 needed an upgrade. You say it's straightforward but what you've done is elevate it exponentially. Way better.
Jarrod
2021-04-16 23:51:24 +0000 UTCthese ones are so good I love his fish face, then the pull kiss is perfect
tegirvaru
2021-04-16 20:28:44 +0000 UTCgod you're so good at doing 'exasperated' expressions for characters, I love it.
matt
2021-04-16 18:02:56 +0000 UTCOne of those pages where I visually understand what's going on, finally, in the new version 😄 Thank you!
Eldkatten
2021-04-16 16:33:39 +0000 UTCThis is adorable
Diego P
2021-04-16 16:26:22 +0000 UTCI think it's a little clearer that Larsen is initiating that kiss.
Erik Fair
2021-04-16 15:18:51 +0000 UTC
