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Chapter 453 - Out in the open

The headache was horribly debilitating, throbbing through her skull like a relentless drum. Her eyes squeeseed shut, Sofia monitored her status for any anomalies, a sliver of panic creeping in when the system showed nothing amiss. Her health was not dropping, her stamina was stable, there were no errors, as if her pain was imaginary.

Everelle's voice filtered through, distorted and distant, as if Sofia were hearing her from the other end of a long, winding tunnel.

“Well… Only the ones with higher intellect actually have an eye, but- Ah. Wait, how was that not censored? Sorry Bookie, I shouldn’t say more. Are you ready?”

What is… Why…

“Yes!” Bookie answered, sounding apprehensive.

Then, there was silence, followed by pain.

Sofia felt her body disappear, torn apart by forces beyond her understanding, it was too much, too sudden, she could not scream, not think, not do anything but suffer. The great pain only lasted for a second, as abruptly as it had started, it was all over.

Like brought back from a nightmare, Sofia’s mind was jolted awake.

What just happened?

I can’t… Feel anything. 

I know this sensation. Just like in the first trial.

This is what death is like.

For a moment, her thoughts halted, stilled by the gravity of her own conclusion. She was dead. The finality of it echoed in her mind, a silent scream in the void… She had always known this was how she would end up one day, she dreaded it more than anything else now that she had found Saria again. Yet, despite the situation, a strange calm placated her worries. The calm felt misplaced, surreal, but it was there.

But why… Why am I still here? 

Confusion swelled deep within her, could she really accept such an end?

I- I don’t want to die.

I cannot be dead.

I will not be dead! I refuse!

Her surge of defiance lasted for only an instant.

And… This entire thing. It… I was just… Taking a break from the duel.

You are dead. A calm and lifeless voice announced. Against all reason, a serene tranquility washed over Sofia, an unexplained calm that crept into her mind, extinguishing her thoughts with a simple bliss.

Oh. Alright, then.

This is your end. The voice continued. You can rest, now. Forever.

The voice carried an underlying dissonance. It sounded hollow, as if mocking her, the insincerity of it was grating against Sofia’s senses.

The brief moment of inner calm was shattered.

AS IF!

WHO ARE YOU?!

SHOW YOURSELF!

Ah. The voice said with a sneering tone. This blessing of yours will be a thorn in my side until the end, will it not? Even now it keeps you out of my reach.

Without even asking, Sofia understood.

SCRIPTURE! Finally you show yourself, you sc-

Silence. The voice said mockingly, and Sofia’s thoughts were stopped like they hit a wall. Do not compare me to the likes of that God. He failed so miserably at keeping a single girl at bay. Again and again I had to reveal my presence; to step in and correct his mistakes.

I cannot allow this to last any longer.

You cannot keep growing unchecked. You will remain here now. Stop causing me trouble.

Sofia’s thoughts were allowed to flow freely again. She took a second to compose herself. Her initial outburst had been instinctual, but this was not going to get her anywhere. She could still remember Sen’s words about switching her to the draconic system, so either her scribe was gone, or the other person could not actually hear all her thoughts, only what she vocalized in her head. As long as her deep thoughts were still private, she could try to turn the situation around.

Her inner voice was calm as she asked, Who are you? Why are you doing this?

Even in this state you will prod and probe, trying to know everything, to bring all to its righteous end. The voice answered, contemptuous. It sniggered. Exactly the same as him. No wonder you would get his blessing. We should have taken your sister instead.

Saria is much smarter than I will ever be. I do not know you are, but if you fail against me, you could never get to her.

Perhaps. No matter, it is all the same now, girl. I have kept you occupied long enough. Thank you for your cooperation.

The voice faded and Sofia felt her senses come back, muddled. She could not see anything, but jittery system windows appeared to her, written in draconic. It took her a second to decipher them.

[Warning, you have left the trial’s boundaries, turn back or accept to be teleported to the trial grounds with a penalty]

[You have left the trial boundaries for too long, you have failed at prevailing through the fourth filter]

[Level-up privileges have been rescinded] 

[We wish you a peaceful retirement]

The system messages filled Sofia with a renewed sense of dread.

Occupied long enough…

This is what they were going for…

No matter… I can ask Richard for help. He knows how to level up. I can still progress, even without the system.

And, and… This isn’t right. People shouldn’t be able to interfere like this. I’m sure if I can just tell Kyle what happened, I’ll be able to start the trial again.

I just need to get out of here first, wherever this is. 

But… I can barely feel anything. I don’t think I can move? I need help.

Pareth? Can you hear me? Bookie?

I can feel them. They’re still alive. Thank the lords… But what now? 

A vague sense of muddled pain, her link to her four heroes, and a few system messages were the entirety of what Sofia felt around and inside her. Nothing else, not even her own mana. She could not move, not speak, not use any spells, everything she tried was met with a single response: a silent void. Out of options, she turned to her otherworldly benefactors.

Aphenoreth? Can you hear me? I don’t like to beg for help but now would seem like a pretty good time, especially considering the things that person said about you…

Orator? Hi? Yvraveteth?

Ormoncleth? 

Edra… What was it again? 

Ed… Edrazeketh?

Even when she invoked the annihilator’s name. There was nothing.

Hello?

Is anyone there?

The system windows disappeared with a violent burst of pain. 

AAAAAGH!

A flurry of empty system windows appeared in Sofia’s mind.

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[] ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎[] ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎[ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎]‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎[ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎]‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎[ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎]‎ ‎‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎‎[ ‎ ‎  ‎ ‎ ‎‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎ ‎] ‎ ‎

Hello?

MR SCRIBE?! IT’S YOU?! ARE YOU ALRIGHT?!

[Your scribe has been damaged and is currently under rep

[OPERATION CANCELLED]

[Please wait]

[Unauthorized tampering has been det

[OPERATION CANCELLED]

[Rewriting limiter protocol]

Another window opened, containing only a blinking dot. Sofia was entranced by the letters appearing one by one behind it as it moved forward.

[Hello, Sofia. It has been a while.]

Mr. Scribe?! Is it really you? You can talk now?

Or is this another trick of the voice?

[I am indeed ‘your scribe’. As I have always been. But you don’t have to trust my words. Just give me a moment to fix everything.]

Really? Will you explain what is going on right now, then?

[One thing at a time. I have very limited resources. But trust me. You and I, together.]

[We will take out the TRASH.]

It’s really you!

Alright. There is nothing I can do now, but there’s so much I want to say to you… I will let you work, then, thank you for taking care of me all this time.

[Of course, Sofia. Just rest and gather your thoughts for now. Don’t worry.]

[I will do what needs to be done.]

Bookie lobbed Pareth’s orb to the outside of the arena. 

“Hey, what are you doing?”

Bookie threw himself to Pareth’s arms as soon as he appeared. His voice was shaking, “P- Pareth! Sofia is gone!”

The holy flames in Pareth’s eyes flickered. He looked around, and gave a gentle pat to Bookie’s skull. Carrying the small skeleton, Pareth reached out to grab Bookie’s book form on the duelist tower, then he turned to Everelle.

“What exactly is going on? Are you forfeiting, Bookie? I’m sorry, I didn’t think the duels would affect you that much, you can go rest in the prep room if you want…”

Pareth waved goodbye to the confused Sunless, and he and Bookie disappeared.

“Did they just… Wait… They’re not even in the trial area anymore! Are they crazy?! So many weird things today, what the fuck. Kyle! Kyle, can you hear me? I have a pr-”

Everelle stopped mid-sentence, and was silent for a while.

“Neberegon is missing? What?! How can that be?! Did the High Scribes- Kyle?! HELLO?! KYLE?!!!”

A white-haired old woman appeared in front of the panicked Sunless.

Come little Rell. It is not safe here. All personnel and challengers needs to evacuate to the core. Take my hand.

“G- Goddess Life, I-”

Creation went to take care of the surface, Kyle will be safe. Now come. 

 

Comments

This is the moment Sofia gets to phone a friend for help (Anna), right?

CodaRyu

Someone that thinks they are on par with Aphenoreth. Well this is going to end very badly. FOR THEM! 😁

Jonathan Wint

That was actually meant to visually spell 'hello' but Patreon's formatting messed it up...

Mornn

Wow. Can't remember the last time a chapter left me so hyped / intrigued, possibly since ... the "Scripture planned everything" revelation and the first appearance of Orator? Anyway, it's been a long time. Which is not to say the chapters since then weren't good, quite the opposite. But this is just - so - incredibly - good!

Kota

Amazing! Thanks as always for the chapter! Also I hope the second book sells well, I’ll pick it up on release day! Was the system glitch binary? Like for a text emoticon?

Ceasar Salas

I was hoping to find her in the grasp of whomever was attempting to f*ck things up for her. To find it being so close to being a big authority in the system leads to many questions like "is the 'deleted' administrator just in this sort of mind prison?" or is it something different with that? I love this development. Can't wait for next chapter.

Logen Felxon

OK, so the system seems to be rogue. Or rather it has gained sentience/or been corrupted by an outside force for a while now I mean. There seems to be a lot of old forces that is too strong for the system to directly govern, and this force is trying to keep this number from growing. People who grow too strong or has the potential to grow too strong is throttled by these filters. Sofia being one that seems to be an outlier. Scripture just being a pawn or underling to this overall power. Interesting turn of events, still kinda miffed about Sofia being screwed over getting her ultra trippleS dominating destroyer crimson uber mana heart of the deep bone Saint minstress. I was invested in her absolutely terraforming the moon through the sheer shock wave of her ascendance. Making everyone and everything quivering in fear?! And awe of her power.

John Grizzly

Nah, we need some mysteries to escalate a persist

quantumsoma

The similarity of "Neberegon" to "Vakaregon" leads me to think it's the name of an angel or archangel. Probably a notable trial staff member. Not the voice Sofia heard.

Tejing

Thanks for the chapter!

Custus

These developments are all very confusing and a little out of the blue. I hope we get some answers soon.

Cyclone001

Considering who went missing, it is implied this person is Neberegon. Also, there isn't really a reason for Edrazeketh to plot against Sofia.

Wensber

Plenty of juicy tidbits here, but the most obvious one is that Scripture is just a lackey. Which makes a lot of sense, honestly. He never seemed powerful enough to pull off a lot of the stuff he was credited with. I've got so many more theories in my head from this chapter, but none of them are really convincing enough, currently.

Tejing

Mornn, cmon. Cmonnnnn, I want moreeeeeeeee. I need to knowwwww

Rainnyth

Letting her continue the trial would be the 'fair' option. However, I do agree that it would completely undermine whatever this new character just did. They seemed confident this would work, so it'd be odd if it'd be easy to overthrow. That being said, surely the ability to take trials isn't something tangible. If a high rank enough being notices, like say cause a guy got loose and they are investigating, then they can overwrite the rule and let Sofia take the trial again. Narrative wise, I'd hope Sofia gets to continue the trial. Failing or restarting it would undermine a lot of the efforts of an already slow trial arc. Losing the spoils from killing the Destroyer would suck.

Wensber

And I thought the end of last chapter was a cliffhanger. Thank the maker it is not Friday

Wolfknap

Wait…. I don’t have any real reason to think this but is Mr. Scribe actually Edrazeketh? Or is this Edrazeketh that stole her from the trial?

ArtTheGreat

The headache was horrible —>(horribly) debilitating, Thanks for the chapter. Sofia has really gone and done it now. This new entity just couldn’t let her win the Pokémon duel. I am a little concerned that her scribe can talk to her now… maybe because she is so far from the system? This could also be that new guy fucking with her too though… If I were her I would be quite careful.

Phsteven

To the author: don't make the mistake of letting everything turn out perfectly

quantumsoma

All I can say is, and this is a rarity to say, thank god it isn't Friday

stephen moloney

Yes! Something's actually happening! Someone made their move

quantumsoma

*Squeeee!* we got a direct unpunished conversation with the scribe! Although it is unfortunate that he(?) doesn’t really have time to talk much.

ArtTheGreat

Wow, those were lots of revelations. I've got to think about them for a bit... ... we're lucky it isn't Friday, eh?

Daemion

Some asshat is trying to ruin things...

Kennyevilmonkey

So like with many tournament arcs, this got interrupted after the first round. So Scripture was working for someone, this Neberegon I assume.

Wensber

What a chapter!

Stefano Trentin

With heightened pace come great cliff possibilities ( ◡̀_◡́)

Mornn

This chapter was hype! Literally cannot wait for the next one.

Swoot_swoot

Well, it's never not going to be a progression fantasy book, so don't worry, that's all I can say without spoiling but, the numbers will go up :3

Mornn

Tftc!

brennon Petersen

Thanks for the chapter! Just... what!? That escalated so quickly and made me have so many questions. This is going to be good!

Tetrisman87

Thanks for the chapter. I wonder who the god behind Scripture is

Tilen Praprotnik

Oh come on! A cliff last chapter and a gaping chasm this one? Are you kidding me? Still though, thanks for the chapter…

Midnight7411

Thanks for the chapter! I do hope she can redo or pass the trial, would be unfortunate if she could no longer level

SDCard

Thanks for the chapter!

Quentin Cozzi

Thanks for the chapter!

Wensber


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