Cuckquean Conundrum
Added 2023-03-25 08:20:02 +0000 UTCJust sent out the January poll winner - Cuckquean Conundrum! It went longer than I had planned, big surprise there. I will be starting a new comm this weekend (that should be fairly short, so I might be able to get it out before the end of the month) and then it will be Futa Family ch2! Look out for a poll in the upcoming days as well!
Kristin, a cis woman, is married to Nia, a futanari. There life is perfect in every way - they have a nice house, a happy marriage, and they are totally in love with each other. Except there's one problem: they've never successfully had sex. Kristin is too tight and Nia is too big, and love-making between them only ends in pain and blue-balls. This also means they can't have kids, the one thing missing in their relationship. Running out of options, Kristin comes up with the perfect solution, one that will change her life forever...
Contains: Hyper and cum ridiculous/inflation, futa on female, threesome, romance, cuckquean/NTR, light-pregnancy stuff, guys this one is really emotionally devastating maybe the most brutal story I've ever written.
In addition to being rough with the NTR stuff, I also sort of tried something new? Maybe it just felt new, but I really attempted to maintain (for the bulk of the story at least) one POV instead of sort of jumping around as much. It might just have felt new because of whose POV it is. Lemme know what you think about that if its noticeable at all!
Feel free to comment and leave any questions below :)
Happy reading!
Comments
It's stated pretty clearly why this isn't the route they go to be fair.
MisterretsiM
2023-06-07 19:20:33 +0000 UTCIt's more like she wouldn't want that. She only wants her wife, but now her actions have trapped her into this kind of polyamory that she doesn't necessarily want to be a part of. The whole point is that it would be there child, and she didn't want to blame her wife for her own incompetence.
MisterretsiM
2023-06-07 19:19:08 +0000 UTCFor this story to NOT fall into the “Yeah the cucked spouse turns into a mere maid” trope, they would have needed to have explored the “Female-wife also seeks a surrogate father to impregnate HER too” — Unless Kait is just to tight even a pencil-dick won’t fit inside her? 😅
David W.
2023-06-07 19:16:06 +0000 UTCThe obvious “Because the plot says so” conceit that I found is the fact that somehow it has to be the futa-wife getting a surrogate to be impregnated, instead of the female-wife finding a man to be impregnated herself. — Unless she’s just that tight, even pencil-dicks won’t fit? 😅❤️
David W.
2023-06-07 19:13:56 +0000 UTCI guess it makes sense if you're in a low-futa world - or definitely low hyper-to-this-extent futa world - that maybe you ignore how blatantly awful a sexual partner is in the name of "Holy shit this is the only person I've met who I can fuck" but man, no-one comes out of this great. Which again, GJ if intended, but man this makes me want something rainbowy but no less cum filled to help rinse this out.
HeraldBFC
2023-03-30 01:11:25 +0000 UTCWow. WOW. I wish I'd read the warning before because jesus - I'll admit sometimes the "super dominant futa / somewhat submissive partner" thing can get repetitive, or keep stirring thoughts of "Surely at some point you leave" when you're not applying porn logic to it, but man, if you were looking to make me hate at least two of the characters involved in this and make me go on a rollercoaster of both supporting and saying fuck you to both the non-futa characters in this, mission succeeded. Kinda went from "MMM, fetish I enjoy" to "Gosh do I hate everyone" once the threesome started. Which, I know, porn - well written porn - but yikes, wow.
HeraldBFC
2023-03-30 01:08:51 +0000 UTCYour English was totally fine!
MisterretsiM
2023-03-28 20:58:07 +0000 UTCIts like the difference between an action movie and a drama tragedy, in a way
MisterretsiM
2023-03-28 20:57:56 +0000 UTCThat's what I was going for, and I'm glad (and not glad it made you so upset) that I was able to accomplish that
MisterretsiM
2023-03-28 20:57:27 +0000 UTCHaha nothing to be ashamed of - if anything, those of us who do enjoy this should have some shame!
MisterretsiM
2023-03-28 20:56:48 +0000 UTCMy bitch ass is too sensitive for this 😅
florgenstow420
2023-03-28 20:52:45 +0000 UTC(i am from Brazil, my english is a little rusty🙈 sorry)
Rick Sanchez
2023-03-27 21:01:25 +0000 UTCDont get me wrong, it was a superb story, its just gotten on my empatic side for kristi...
Rick Sanchez
2023-03-27 21:00:14 +0000 UTCWhen you said it was brutal, i was expecting another type of brutal, like on other tales of yours, but this time, after the end i was like in tears...
Rick Sanchez
2023-03-27 20:59:19 +0000 UTCI dont know how to describe the feeling that i had while reading it, it was like a pain/constriction in my heart, at some point i felt very sorry for kristi....
Rick Sanchez
2023-03-27 20:57:37 +0000 UTCYou might be the first people to cry because of one of my stories. I'm sorry? I'm not sure how to even respond!
MisterretsiM
2023-03-27 04:44:23 +0000 UTCI never lie about the contents of my story! It wasn't something I'd even thought of it till I finished the story and I was like "damn that was fucking depressing!" Glad you liked it and thank you for the compliments - though I don't know if I should be worried about that last comment! haha
MisterretsiM
2023-03-27 04:43:54 +0000 UTCI cried reading it.
Rick Sanchez
2023-03-27 03:45:24 +0000 UTCWhen you said that this might be your most brutal story yet, I thought you were just trying to hype the story up. After reading it? Yeah, it’s probably true. This one kinda hurt to read. Loved it though. Smut is great as always but I think I’m starting to read your stories for the actual plot rather than the smut at this point lol
Null805
2023-03-26 07:36:06 +0000 UTC