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Patreon Exclusive: WIP Official Brickcraft Trailer Preview

Me and many many others are working on cutting a brilliant first official Brickcraft trailer for YouTube!
Here is an exclusive preview before its release in a work in progress state!
Do you think we could hit 500.000 views?

Is there anything I can improve on my first draft? Please let me know in comments!

Comments

It is more better! DH, Nostalgia VX Latest Extreme Pack....

JH

It is Better! I used Kappa PT shaders with the Latest Extreme Pack... I am glad u made this Pack!

JH

Hey it was insane! i used PTGI E12 shaders with the Extreme Pack. I am happy to be your patron. <3

JH

It was good enough to get me to grab it! Only one quick comment, you might want to fix your landing page that you end up on after setting up patreon.

FamilyCraft

Looking nice to me!

KevysNotHeavy

he balls once again

beaco64

I really love this trailer, keep up the good work 👍

5h1ba

First of all: awesome work to everyone involved! Love it I think the voice really sounds like an AI voice. Idk if it is, but maybe it should be changed? At the start, in the first scene, when the camera moves forward: There would be a great spot for a big 3D "BRICKCRAFT" logo (including a "subtitle"-ish credit "by Alex Testria"). And the cam goes through that logo, revealing your minifigure saying "Hey!" In the end-city scene, your name tag is visible, but in all others it isn't. Is that intended? I think I rather would like consistency. Sometimes, I feel like, the white text listing features, isn't that readable for someone having already trouble reading or having a bad sight. (Because of the background being sometimes to bright for a good contrast to read) Maybe a black border around the letters could help drastically? Sowing on the very end on the black would be good too, I guess. Like the "Brickcraft" logo as well as your name again. So (interested) people get the name remembered easier. Also stuff like website/patreon/download link. At least like "Visit brickcraft.de to download" would be helpful. (Yes, even when you put these Infos in the description (which you should do too, btw 😉)) Idk, some special thanks on screen to maybe? Thinking of "Fishysalmon" for the minifig-pack, patreons, and so on. ❤️

Kesuaheli

Is there anything I can improve?? Make it more watchable? Do you think we can hit 500.000 views on YouTube? I have a good feeling!

AlexTestria


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