The Fluffer - Pg. 20 Inks
Added 2020-05-09 01:13:30 +0000 UTCAnother page inked! Should have it coloured in a day or two.
Comments
This! So much giggling X3 Poor guy has been waiting for this chance for so long X3
Axle
2020-05-09 16:55:13 +0000 UTCDid more than crack a smile, how about laugh for 10 seconds straight. You did a great job!
Bloudin Ruo
2020-05-09 05:17:35 +0000 UTCGiven what he's about to do, I can hardly blame him! :P
Ruaidri
2020-05-09 05:10:12 +0000 UTCHeh, thanks again! It's always a little scary attempting humor as it's not something I've much experience with, so I'm glad it can at least crack a smile. Thanks for the input!
Ruaidri
2020-05-09 05:08:56 +0000 UTCaww that last panel, horse so happy :)
Ztpia
2020-05-09 03:00:40 +0000 UTCLooks great and I'm excited to see this move forward! Just so many smiles from this page, I love it :3 I like how the dialogue worked out! References the impending actions between the two and sets the stage for Kyle's button explosion in panels #2 and #3. As for the art, what's there to say? Sexy bedroom eyes from a stallion, button-popping prospects, I think it sets the stage well for what's about to happen. Curious how Kyle gets out of his pants, though! I thought about maybe recommending some nodding action lines for the director, but the more I thought about it the less it seems applicable and relevant in the situation. The stallion knows from prior pages to keep going, and maybe the nodding would be redundant? I figured I'd bring it up but not as a recommendation, but just something to think about :P Can't wait! Keep up the good work!
Bloudin Ruo
2020-05-09 01:37:54 +0000 UTC
