Keep It Together... Ver.2
Added 2019-07-21 14:30:01 +0000 UTCOh hey, I think I literally just discovered while typing this that you can add multiple images to a single post... ah well, too late now. I'll keep it in mind for the future.
Anyway, when I was drawing the original version of this, I wasn't sure I'd be able to quite capture the feeling I was aiming for with a single moment in time, so I drew it with space for a little inset picture in mind to show how she's trying to maintain her poise but just barely keeping it together. In the end I do think I got an expression that I like for the main image, but I had the separate frame drawn so I figured why not throw it in there anyway. Took very little extra time.
So here's the alternate version! I hope at least one of 'em does it for ya. :D
Comments
I'm not a writer and don't really have any skills in that area so I can't give much in the way of useful feedback, but you've certainly got some fun and interesting situations in there for sure. :P
Ruaidri
2019-07-23 16:05:39 +0000 UTC@Ruaidri That's really great work, as always. :) I have some new medication and can sleep -- at night -- again. I've finished the short fanfiction. It's here (https://bit.ly/32MKXzx) written in LibreOffice Writer. Please can you give me feedback, if it's worth your time? Thank you. :)
Arthur Heuer
2019-07-22 13:59:09 +0000 UTCI am guessing that gray spot is a floppy ear.
PsyMar
2019-07-22 01:43:48 +0000 UTCSo again I'll just comment on this one since it has the most going on. I'm actually really in love with this one. And I think the biggest reason for that is the lighting. You may have struggles, you may even hate it, but I personally think it was worth all the work. You can tell it's dark, there's no direct light source really, everything is washed out with low color saturation--And yet there's still immense detail, there's still so much visible and defined. An excellent job by an excellent artist, congrats! You can't see it in this one but I love her leg and arm stockings, and how you made the fur interact with them. Kind of gives her just a bit of a 'looking for fun' edge. I think another big thing you did great was the actual penetration. I don't know it just looks right, with the spread fur and shadows and other tidbits. Every small detail works together to make a visual representation that doesn't leave anything to be desired! While I think the insert-less version looks 'cleaner', I think this version with the insert tells more of a story, where she's trying not to crack but eventually can't hold back her pleasure any longer. Regarding the insert, I obviously love the expression with the raised eyebrows and drooping tongue, like just giving over to it all and losing all of her calm and collected facade, just reverting into lust. One thing I need just a bit of clarification on, what's on top of the male's head? That little gray spot that seems slightly transparent? Hair, hat? Just can't quite place it :) This piece definitely turned out great, and while I was a little bummed to see my preferred suggestion just barely lose the win, I'm actually really happy it did and we got to see something like this come from it! It's different and unique with the lighting and I think you knocked it out of the park. A simple idea in concept that you've turned into something that I had to sit back for a moment and say "Wow" when I saw it today. Great work, Ru!
Bloudin Ruo
2019-07-21 20:32:47 +0000 UTCThanks man! It was a tricky thing to pull off, but I think I got it there in the end. :D
Ruaidri
2019-07-21 14:56:44 +0000 UTCOoh like how the lighting turned out. Can tell it's dark but everything is shown clearly. And love the expressions in this
Kulza
2019-07-21 14:53:54 +0000 UTC
