The Fluffer - Pg. 17
Added 2019-02-28 20:06:56 +0000 UTCThar he blows!
In my first comic, the 'big event' lacked a lot of impact. I tried to give it a little more oomph this time around- how'd I do?
Comments
Aw, thanks! :D
Ruaidri
2019-03-05 06:04:54 +0000 UTCI definitely concur! :P
Ruaidri
2019-03-05 06:04:44 +0000 UTCYou did a fantastic job!
Rhewlif
2019-03-04 19:05:14 +0000 UTCMessy fox is best fox! ^^ <3
Kirien Fost
2019-03-04 16:30:52 +0000 UTCSoundtrack: "I'm so excited / I just can't hide it / I'm about to lose control / and I think I like it"
PsyMar
2019-03-01 17:51:23 +0000 UTCHe is taking it like a champ
Shadewing
2019-03-01 10:38:46 +0000 UTCLovely!
Samt517
2019-03-01 02:47:48 +0000 UTCAlso I realized I never answered your question from the description. You definitely gave it the required, expected and necessary 'oomph'! I'm now wondering if a "Fluffer 2" is in order, with Kyle having a more permanent position on the crew and maybe hiking tail for our stallion friend :D
Bloudin Ruo
2019-02-28 21:02:12 +0000 UTCHah, thanks man! For the kind words, and for the input you've given all this time. You're a big part of the reason it's been getting better!
Ruaidri
2019-02-28 20:38:29 +0000 UTCHoly moly, Ru! I know you said you were going to add mess, but this is just above and beyond my already high expectations! You already know my thoughts on the dialogue, blocking and layout, so I'll focus more on the feel of each panel. Panel #1 is just awesome, the expression in Kyle's eyes and the clear fluids you did are spot on and perfect. Panel #2 is really awesome, even for how simple it is, because it gives us such a powerful perspective from Kyle's vantage point! #3, I mean, come on. The colors, shading, definition, mess, and all the other little details just make it work so spectacularly. The mess and explosiveness of panel #4, plus Kyle's struggling expression, really sells the whole scenario for me, like it's really difficult and not just 'furry fantasy' levels. Then finally panel #5 rounds out the whole page so well with his blissful expression and the slow, stringy river of horse jizz dripping from his chin. All of Kyle's markings are accounted for, and I can't find a single thing to point out in the page for critique. You've outdone yourself here, congratulations!
Bloudin Ruo
2019-02-28 20:33:43 +0000 UTCFantastic ♥️
Carbine Cat
2019-02-28 20:12:26 +0000 UTC
