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The Fluffer - Pg. 16 [Ink]
Added 2019-02-19 18:45:51 +0000 UTCThings are about to get real messy.
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I attemped to address these issues as best I could in the finished version, hopefully it turned out okay. That said, you can always point these things out in the sketch version, it'd be a lot easier to fix 'em then you know. :P
Ruaidri
2019-02-22 03:33:37 +0000 UTCHe may be a pro, but I don't think his mouth is big enough for that! :P
Ruaidri
2019-02-22 03:32:37 +0000 UTCI'm not sure the fox would survive if he did that. x3
Ruaidri
2019-02-22 03:31:31 +0000 UTCYES! FOX EAR HANDLEBARS!!!! I dont think it'll get too messy, I mean he IS a professional after all! I bet he doesn't spill a drop! :P
Matsi
2019-02-20 20:14:23 +0000 UTCThatβs the muzzle humping Iβve been waiting for π hope he goes balls deep~
Samt517
2019-02-20 05:29:01 +0000 UTCGreat page as always, but I love the progression of events that are happening in the panels as they move forward. "GLCK" seems like a very accurate sound for suddenly having multiple inches of stallion shoved down your throat! Also, who knew that fennec ears could make such good handlebars, too! A few things here and there that I'd like to point out and just draw some attention towards. The first would be the stallion's posture as we transition from panels #1/2 into the rest of them. The first two have him standing straight up and the rest of the panels on the page has his left leg up and bent 90 degrees, hoof planted on the bed to the right of Kyle. I think the position works great and really adds to the aggressive leverage the stallion grabs him with in the last two panels, but it just doesn't seem like very much transition between where we see him in panel #1 and where he is in panel #3. Color should help with that a bunch, though! Just making sure it doesn't break continuity. Secondly there seems to be this awesome muscle definition in panels #3/4 that doesn't get carried over into panels #5/6? Like with the stallion's thigh. Maybe it's just how you've penciled and lined them out for now and color will alleviate all those little differences, but just wanted to bring it up for consideration!
Bloudin Ruo
2019-02-19 21:07:49 +0000 UTCDon't worry, the stallion is also a professional!
Bloudin Ruo
2019-02-19 20:58:55 +0000 UTCMOVE YOUR HAND, DON'T RUIN THE CAMERA SHOT!
sonicmega
2019-02-19 18:51:33 +0000 UTC
