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The Fluffer - Pg. 14 [Ink]

The bottom panel isn't inked because I'm going to try for an out-of-focus effect, and start black ink doesn't mesh well with that idea!

The Fluffer - Pg. 14 [Ink]

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Hrm, I do see that now that you mention it. I'm not sure there's much I can do about it now, we'll see how it turns out in color I suppose!

Ruaidri

And a star is born!

Eddie SanHusky

I think you got a really good expression on the horse actor in panel #2. Just enough of "Damn finally" and "This is actually good" :P Kyle has a long way to go, though! He's only just taken the tip~ Also, something I've just noticed with the lines--the diagonal transition between panels #2 and #3 seems to give the illusion of some lines crossing over, and making the horse actor look like he has a bit of a belly, because of his slouch in panel #2 and the perspective change in #3. Let me know if you see what I'm referring to, otherwise maybe it's just one of those optical illusions that I can't unsee!

Bloudin Ruo

I keep drawing them too big... but I also kinda like them too big. >.>

Ruaidri

first thought on last panel: "My gawd, those ears!"

Scarlet565


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