The Fluffer - Pg. 13
Added 2019-01-31 20:18:29 +0000 UTCAlright, we're getting to the good stuff finally!
This page is fairly similar to the first page in terms of action, so I tried to spice it up with a few more interesting angles this time around. Hope it's alright!
Comments
Well, I mean, you're not far off. x3
Ruaidri
2019-02-01 15:33:06 +0000 UTCAw, well thanks! It doesn't come up often honestly, even in my normal work I usually have to zoom out relatively far so a good shot at the eyes doesn't come up often. Not sure what makes them stand out though, I just did them the same way I always do!
Ruaidri
2019-02-01 15:32:54 +0000 UTCthe director will just shrug and go "fuck it, just film them and print it"
Shadewing
2019-02-01 11:04:17 +0000 UTCMmmph! Balls! Big 'uns! Thank you, Ru <3 <3 <3 Edit: also, I *really* love the eyes in the first panel. Sooooo well-drawn! In fact- when was the last time you did a close-up of a character's eyes? I don't recall noticing a shot like that before. How'd you get them to look so good here?
Summer Vixen
2019-02-01 03:49:36 +0000 UTCThanks man! Honestly one of the things I've most been looking forward to about getting to the smut is that I could stop drawing such zoomed-out views of everything so often. When you're doing a page your sort of need to hit certain story beats by the end of it because splitting a joke or action or sentence over the page break feels really jarring. It forced me to cram a bunch of stuff into the pages to hit a good stopping point sometimes. With smut that's much less of a concern and a lot easier to account for, so I can finally zoom in a bit more, put fewer panels on the pages and make things just look better in general. The next few pages are going to be fun to make I think, 'cause not only smut, but also they'll just be so much easier now, haha.
Ruaidri
2019-01-31 20:54:02 +0000 UTCMan what a page! As I said in the lines, I think the progression in this page is just superb. The last two panels specifically just get me, with that much stallion just so close to a waiting muzzle. Then that cliffhanger! You sure know how to keep us on edge :) As for the technical conposition, I love that everything in the background is just abstract. Being able to focus solely on the foreground, and drift into the kind of 'pink fuzz' I'm sure Kyle is well and truly immersed in right now is a great move. Additionally, this page is so close in on the characters after getting farther out shots of them for so many pages that it's nice to see their details again! Great work Ru, a simply fabulous page, really :) p.s., fennec markings all present and accounted for!
Bloudin Ruo
2019-01-31 20:31:42 +0000 UTC
