A Helping Hand - Page 4
Added 2018-05-26 16:42:52 +0000 UTC"Boyfriend" doesn't seem quite right. They're not married or anything so "husband" definitely doesn't fit. "Fuckboy sex slave" seems a bit aggressive. What do you call him? Hrm...
This is looking a lil' bit better as a page I think. Blue is maybe a lil' dark but what can ya do.
So, GCF has got a name now! A first name, anyway. Fun side note- I debated what to have him wearing for quite a long time. He's typically depicted walking around in public in either very girly clothing, or no clothing at all, having him in relatively 'normal' clothing doesn't quite seem right for him, but at the same time it was too big a disconnect to draw him either naked or in something really slinky like a corset without the characters explaining it, and I really didn't want to add like 15 more pages of talking before the good stuff starts.... so I went with something normal for now.
It's alright, I'm sure he won't be wearing it for long.
Comments
When I was working on this, I thought about having it kind of dimly lit to match the time, but in the end I figured they'd probably have their lights on. He's not coming in from outdoors, by the way, he's coming in from a main hallway, which would be well lit, into the apartment itself, which is also well lit, so time of day lighting didn't really come into play here. That said, unrelated to the time, everything is a little -too- bright and well lit and I've been planning to move to a different room soon just so I have a good excuse to change the colours up. x3 I hope you're re-reading it so much because you're enjoying it though. ;P
Ruaidri
2018-06-07 17:25:36 +0000 UTCOkay so I'm re-reading this comic for the fourth time now, and I noticed that- well, Wolf said he'd be coming by at 8, yet, the light coming behind him as he walks in the door looks more like mid-day. I suppose it could be that the apartment faces the sun and this is the height of summer in the northern hemisphere, but it still seems incongruously bright. For the record, I am NOT saying it's wrong or bad or that it should be changed, or anything like that. I just want to know your thoughts on this?
Summer Vixen
2018-06-07 14:27:21 +0000 UTCI love how Gale is looking! He looks adorable.
LexOunce
2018-05-26 18:15:32 +0000 UTCYou're not too far off the mark I think. x3
Ruaidri
2018-05-26 17:49:28 +0000 UTCGale’s clothing could be Blue not wanting to immediately scare Deer? So Deer has a couple seconds of “Gale seems normal” before blue starts pulling his shorts down with one hand while pushing Gales head into his crotch with the other, at which point Deer can’t run away because he’ll trip on his half down shorts. Or his corset is just in the wash.
2018-05-26 17:39:22 +0000 UTCGCF looks remarkably cute in regular clothes!
Kobaj
2018-05-26 17:16:43 +0000 UTCI'm very happy these seem to be bringing you so much amusement! :3
Ruaidri
2018-05-26 17:03:13 +0000 UTCHell yeah might be stuck at work but now I get to see this!
Jeremy O Garrett
2018-05-26 16:53:05 +0000 UTC
