Chapter 8 of Broken Dreams is out for Squires!
Added 2025-08-19 02:56:40 +0000 UTCThat took me longer than I thought it would. Thankfully, the evening came with a pleasant cool that allowed my mind to think. Chapter is longer in turn. Longer than I expected for sure.
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Comments
Fiquei impressionado, mas não muito surpreso. Seu trabalho é excelente, primeira vez que vejo um um ponto de vista de Aerys, e tão bem elaborado. Muito bom esse desfecho do capítulo, me pergunto o que vão tentar fazer, quase certeza que vão tentar fazer de tudo pra salvar o casamento dos dois. Curioso também pra saber de jon, o que está acontecendo com ele? Como os dois vão se encontrar? Quase certeza que a nossa assassina é a Melony ajkakaka.
Guylherme Rhuan
2025-08-22 18:45:53 +0000 UTCCan we just get google docs still? The website is much less convenient.
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2025-08-21 05:05:13 +0000 UTCI like the new site. I can finally play with the settings to get the best appearance for me, depending on the device I use. The plan worked. Aerys will be forced to marry Genna. There is simply no other way out. Too many witnesses, her family is too important, her brother is a friend ... he is boxed in with just one way out. How can Rhaella and Jon meet when they are about 2000 miles away is going to be a challenge. White Harbor is a decent half point, but it's difficult to find a solid reason for the princess to go there. The best way would be for her to go around the 7 kingdoms to find a match, that would make things easier, but I don't think of a good reason to do it.
Cristi R
2025-08-20 13:34:37 +0000 UTCIt wasn't overly explicit, so I wouldn't worry about that. And frankly, I don't care about their ages. Aerys is what, 16? Which would make Genna 15? 15 and 16 year olds have been doing explicit things with each other since the dawn of humanity. And the notion that you are still a "child" at 15 is an invention of the modern world anyway, not a thing that reflects reality in any meaningful way. In the pre-modern world, 15 year olds were regularly fighting in wars, working in trades, building homes and starting families. They had earned the right to call themselves men and women in pretty much every way that counts. It is only in the modern world that people at that age are so coddled and useless that they could be considered actual children. So for a brutal Medieval setting like Westeros? Yeah, I view them through the lens of their time, place, and life experience, so I consider them functionally adults in a way that most modern teenagers simply wouldn't be.
Loki's Brand
2025-08-20 04:41:37 +0000 UTCI can't help but feel sorry for Genna, I'm probably just hypersensitive to it, but friends using friends hits hard for me.
Michael Rojas
2025-08-20 02:19:18 +0000 UTC
