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Chapter 58 of Convergence of Fates (CoF) is out for Squires!

I'm late again(far more late than I should be). But thankfully, BT edits are done, so I can finally take a few days off next week and recharge. Anyway, a nice medium-sized chapter.

Lemme know what you think in the comments below.

You can read the previous chapters here.

Chapter 58 of Convergence of Fates (CoF) is out for Squires!

Comments

Well Tom is not mad dog now and be more sane once he combines his soul pieces. I am glad Harry and Juno finally kissed. I wonder how will fawks treat Harry

Garri Sarkisov

Overall good, I like that the romance wasn't dragged out or overly dramatic. I was kinda hoping for the other girl but they're both cool. Sane Voldemort and him believing that Harry is irrelevant are both good story elements. I look forward to how the TWT arc will turn out without someone to force Harry into it, that book or OoTP are my favourite plotwise, so I do hope he takes part in the tasks. The 'phoenix animagus' thingy kinda comes across as a very Gary Stu, tropish thing. I like the story because he's getting somewhere slowly but surely with a lot of hard work. An animagus form is entirely random, so with this and the snake armor thing it kind of just feels like he's being given advantages for free? I guess he needs them, but being unable to die is busted no matter what it does to him. I'm going to assume the belief in his squib state by the healer is just ignorance due to this being a unique situation. I do hope it's resolved quickly though, I don't think I've ever read a story about a squib MC in Harry Potter and that doesn't sound great. Again it's overall great and one of my favourite HP stories. Looking forward to more and hoping the story keeps it pace.

gigamans

I don't think we know what all the advantages are yet. Remember Voldemort from Harry's head triggered all of this in the ritual he started. It could be that being a Phoenix animagus, a magical creature of power and fire, is going to boost Harry's already incredible gains in magic. A Phoenix takes time to recover to full after a burning day, Harry might need that same amount of time too. Also being able to be a Phoenix means Harry can't be kept from anyone he wants to appear to and might have better intuition.

natio

Can't say I like the phoenix animagus form so far. There's not enough advantages for the consequences shown yet. I really do hope that the advantages outweigh the negatives and it isn't some sort of balance where he'll have to be self-sacrificing to win in the end.

Zai


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