Chapters 58-61 of Breaker's Tale are out!
Added 2025-07-16 16:37:36 +0000 UTCWhew. Four final chapters. Some of it is entirely new (and all of it reworked), so enjoy.
Without further ado:
58-The Sundering
59-The Prince of Winter
60-The Builder's Rise
61-A Tale of Snow and Storm
Comments
Thanks for the story but gonna be honest it feels kinda rushed, everything leading up to the white walkers and how they were felt with as well as the Queen of ice etc. Just felt super rushed like you just wanted to quickly finish the story, and the quick excerpts finishing up every loose end you could think of didn’t help. What I would recommended would be maybe expanding upon and spending more time on the white walkers-defending the realms of man then as well the Queen of Ice and everything to deal with that Metaphysical/her relation to Sirius. Then spend a bit more time on the smaller ‘issues’ when people try to cause problems for the north as it got pretty repetitive in the end with Jon just flying over and threatening people… Nice story just very rushed in the end
Killer Pickle
2025-08-24 10:48:35 +0000 UTCTook me a day but finally finished reading this epic series 🥰 thank you for taking the time to write this amazing story
Yanni
2025-08-03 03:22:08 +0000 UTCThis entire story was excellent, thank you. Any chance we could see more about what happened to Sirius in this universe? Also, did Melisandre never use the favor Jon offered her? I was really curious what she might have asked for.
David
2025-07-19 01:56:28 +0000 UTC
