Chapter 02 of Broken Dreams is out for Squires!
Added 2025-07-07 21:27:27 +0000 UTCA very... late chapter. But it's here. Probably not what most of you expected. On a side note, the prologue has been edited, smoothened out, and is now a good 700-800 words larger, and should read better. Writing Rhaella is hard to pin.
Anyway, this is probably the last Harrenhal chapter, and next we'll move to KL. Do let me know what you think in the comments.
Comments
"The steward's daughter was struck for implicating the princess." I'm not sure that "implicating" makes sense here, depending on what you meant.
AJ
2025-08-23 10:30:10 +0000 UTCAmazing chapter! Are we going to see canon go off the rails soon?
Grateful Bread
2025-07-08 18:40:57 +0000 UTCThe crack was fun, but I missed your more serious storytelling. Great chapter, looking forward to the next one.
Perraup
2025-07-08 16:12:06 +0000 UTCCool chapter. Rhaella is doing the best she can for her age. Her idea to get Aerys caught with a highborn lady is actually a decent plan. Aegon V wouldn’t want the scandal. He seems terrified of offending nobles. I have to say the Targs have collectively lost their minds. Aegon needs an incestous marriage for dragons? What dragons? He’s going senile. He’d be better off marrying Rhaella to a Tyrelll, Tully, Arryn or Stark. Ditto Aerys. The queen being an obvious exception, she still seems to have her wits, but she’s a Blackwood. Still, even she isn’t fighting the sibling marriage despite her daughter’s doubts. Aerys is surprisingly decent. Though possibly beating the maid an obvious clue that will not hold. Jon’s scene raises more questions than answers. Thanks for the chapter .
stevem1
2025-07-08 01:03:01 +0000 UTCThank you, and it seems like Jon is still killing White Walkers, which is excellent. I am curious if what Rhaella gave him will help. Let's see if Rhaella will be able to change fate. I enjoy how the Old Gods having that sense of unknown power asleep was great. I'm eager to see what happens next.
FallenMetalGod
2025-07-07 23:41:10 +0000 UTC
