Chapter 86 of Shrouded Destiny (SD) is out for Squires!
Added 2024-10-21 05:03:55 +0000 UTCCh 85 Has been properly edited, touched up a lot since last week, and I'm finally happy with how the chapter looks now. Consider giving it a reread if you wish, especially since it's over 2k words thicker since its first rendition. This is another thick chapter, and I daresay rather eventful one.
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Comments
I meant it as a catch-all term regarding FAegon and those around him at any given time.
Omar Syed
2024-10-25 18:47:10 +0000 UTCokey understandable. still one of the best fics i ve ever read.
Colin
2024-10-22 17:29:00 +0000 UTCmarried offscreen, so to speak. The deal was done (remember Doran murdering Arianne's lovers?) before Aegon even arrived, and a short ceremony was just a formality later.
Gladiusx
2024-10-22 16:23:52 +0000 UTCI love a good revenge story, and i have typically liked Garlan in the other fics ive read. Now lets see how you wrap up his threads
David C.
2024-10-22 05:40:19 +0000 UTCAre Aegon and Arianne already married? I don't remember that.
Mandy
2024-10-22 01:52:12 +0000 UTCBut it's not Aegon and his court, merely Aegon, Selmy, and his good-brother Quentyn. Aegon doesn't trust the Dornish lords as much as he trusts Selmy and his wife's brother who has all the reason to see him succeed.
Gladiusx
2024-10-22 00:21:06 +0000 UTCNice to read about Jon "Wolf-father" Snow and an Umber Umbering before being shut down. Also good to see that the fic takes into account the distances and travel times between such large landmasses and seas, so that up to date information is hard to come by. FAegon and his court was short on substance, in my opinion, but fun to read about Eddard "City-breaker" Stark finally getting back to Westeros, where he belongs. And finally, Garlan "Slaughter" Tyrell shows up again in a very fun to read part. 7/10 (But then again, I'm very partial to the parts where Jon, Eddard, or Robb are fighting large engagements.)
Omar Syed
2024-10-22 00:11:25 +0000 UTCIt can. I already wrote a story with dragons and have no desire to write another, at least not as a central plot point.
Gladiusx
2024-10-21 22:55:19 +0000 UTCJust read the whole story in 4 days. loved it. Can you not just finish the books yourself so we dont have to wait for george to move his butt. Also im really wondering, can this really be a story about the game of thrones without any dragons in it?
Colin
2024-10-21 21:56:58 +0000 UTCTyrell. It's a race to see who will reach Aegon first. Robb or Ned. I enjoy the fact that after this war win or lose everyone will remember why you don't fight the direwolf on his own turf in winter. If you do give Jon a castle will you be designing it yourself? Or using a Canon castle? At this point I think Jon should end up becoming a high lord in the Reach with command of the Iron islands by claiming of the iron price
Ambrose Young
2024-10-21 15:39:30 +0000 UTCOh my man you have astounded me more with this chapter! Jon Snow reminds me of an ancient Celtic warlord protecting his home. I assume the next battle for Winterfell will be in the next couple of chapters? Again curious what lands and castle is Jon going to receive as a noble? How much wealth has Jon accumulated from the Ironborn so far? And if he kills Hightower and Redwyne how much wealth will he get from them? Will he put a bastard in Desmera Redwyne to rule the arbor? I know he has a thing against that in the show but this Jon has the ruthlessness of the King of Winter and we know what they did to their enemies female kin. Nice to see young Faegon having some trouble from Garlan Tyreel
Ambrose Young
2024-10-21 15:31:39 +0000 UTCYou have done an amazing job with Garlan and Ned. It's hard to decide between them and Jon who I want to see most!!
jake holcombe
2024-10-21 14:44:56 +0000 UTCTwo of my favorite viewpoints in the same chapter? Excellent!
jake holcombe
2024-10-21 14:43:20 +0000 UTCLove Garlan’s vengeance, as sad as it was to read, he was ready and content to die, but now he has to live.
Aithoron
2024-10-21 12:23:32 +0000 UTCThe royal fleet burning Planky Town and attacking Dorne!!!! YAS!!! They pulled the wolf's tail and got bitten!!! Doran isn't playing the game of thrones, he's playing the game of stupid. DON'T MESS WITH THE NORTH! 😁😁😁 Awesome chapter! This fic makes Monday mornings less painful. Love it!
whoopsiedaisie
2024-10-21 11:51:28 +0000 UTCAha Ned, Tommen, and Shireen are back in style! Also go Garlan. Also are we sure Rickon isn’t a dragon? He’s really just tryna hoard anything he can get his hands on.
Based_Bass
2024-10-21 06:07:13 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter
Ulquiorra Schiffer
2024-10-21 05:58:32 +0000 UTCThis one was amazing, I can't wait for Jon to fight hightower, Aegon's reaction to the attack on Dorne, and for him to meet either Robb or Ned. Please tell me we get to see Aegons POV next chapter 🙏
Jacob Hall
2024-10-21 05:55:19 +0000 UTCThat’s interesting. Are you saying he’s less concerned about parentage than following a “good” king? I ask because, while I can’t remember exactly how Varys described getting Aegon out of Westeros to Barristan, I have to imagine that he’ll begin to question Aegons story. It would be tough for Barristan not to with the Starks blatantly attacking Aegon’s ally (on top of Robb denouncing him as well)
Rick Malone
2024-10-21 05:52:51 +0000 UTCI found it so ironic that Aegon dismissed whether Cersei’s kids were bastards or not… since it doesn’t matter since her kids have armies 😭
Happy
2024-10-21 05:49:19 +0000 UTC“The Red God no longer answered her calls, but her skills remained, for they were her own.” When I tell you I gasped… Melisandre is a menace! Rickon’s chicken has stolen my heart. I need him to make another appearance! I’m convinced that if Val had witnessed the meeting between Aegon and co. She would’ve turned around and back beyond the wall. These southerners are NUTS! I’m super suspicious of Renly… like what is he up to? GARLAN! Im so happy!! I need him to go to Lys and start another rebellion. 😭 Also the attack on Plankytown had me cackling! Please I need to see what’s happening over there!
Happy
2024-10-21 05:46:08 +0000 UTCBarristan doesn't doubt the cause, though. He dislikes the methods Aegon is forced to use and the odds.
Gladiusx
2024-10-21 05:45:29 +0000 UTCWith everything that House Stark is doing this generation. No house or Kingdom or free City or anything is going to rouse the direwolf for at least another 8,000 years.
Kage_at_Fap
2024-10-21 05:45:14 +0000 UTCHell yes! Garlan the Grim with an audacious move to avenge the bodacious babes of the Reach 💯
Nicholas Fiend
2024-10-21 05:42:24 +0000 UTCAwesome chapter. The Garlan portion continues to be some of my favorite, and I can’t wait to see the next part of his journey. I wonder if this latest news starts putting real doubt in people’s minds about Aegon. The actions taken in sunspear and planky town are pretty unequivocal in what they imply. I think if and when Ser Barristan begins to doubt, then Aegon has some serious problems.
Rick Malone
2024-10-21 05:41:34 +0000 UTC
