Chapter 84 of Shrouded Destiny (SD) is out for Squires!
Added 2024-10-07 04:18:03 +0000 UTCA far humbler chapter, but still over my og word limit. For some reason, this one gave me plenty of trouble to write despite being smaller. Don't be shy with the critique.
You can read the previous chapters in my collection.
Comments
Ah I remember now. I’d say poor Balon for thinking that he still had a child left to save…but fuck that guy. The Greyjoys really are their own worst enemies.
Based_Bass
2024-10-07 21:55:50 +0000 UTCJon hasn't arrived. It's just that the people under him have started emulating his methods. Skulls.
Gladiusx
2024-10-07 19:34:58 +0000 UTCAsha died when the Redwyne heir (her husband) caught her fucking her boytoy, and he killed her. It's the first Paxter PoV.
Gladiusx
2024-10-07 19:34:10 +0000 UTCFantastic chapter as usual. How did Asha die again? Anders might have his own designs on humbling and usurping the Martells but he’s not wrong about them being inept. Can’t wait till he finds out Aegon is fake. That the Martells tied Dorne to a false cause. Gods that is going to be epic.
Based_Bass
2024-10-07 16:29:50 +0000 UTCWhen the “filler” chapter is one of your best. I feel so bad for Garlan man, poor guy.
pangoid
2024-10-07 15:14:02 +0000 UTCGood filler chapter. But... Moar! More blood for the Blood God! More skulls for the Skull Throne! Oops...that's another fandom altogether. Anticipating Eddard "I will pull down your wall, slaughter your citizenry, and raise princes" Stark, Jon "I do know something" Snow, and Shireen "I am my fathers daughter" Baratheon. Also, the sacking of Oldtown, meeting between Robb and "Aegon", and the reaction of everyone to the end of House "We have a storied history of creating nothing" Greyjoy.
Omar Syed
2024-10-07 09:20:40 +0000 UTConly problem I see in this chapter is that there's no Jon pov
Zombie45
2024-10-07 08:18:52 +0000 UTCsomwhow I still want Renly to die by Tommen's hand
Abhishek Kumar
2024-10-07 06:54:33 +0000 UTCI’m sooo excited for whatever happens to Hightower. Jon is so close! And I also just want him to reunite with his family. He literally ran away from them once he came to this reality.
ND518
2024-10-07 05:50:36 +0000 UTCLmao I wonder how many of the smallfolk would believe the king’s lies when the Redwynes suddenly became vegetarians and left their plates full! At this point it may serve them better to just kill Baelor themselves and get the heck out of the North. I hope Garlan gets justice for his sister and her ladies. Who knows if he’ll stop at just blaming the bastard of House Wyl though… Jon has pretty much arrived right? All those skulls appearing overnight? Oh he’s CLOSE! 😭
Happy
2024-10-07 05:07:25 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter
Ulquiorra Schiffer
2024-10-07 04:18:38 +0000 UTC
