Chapter 83 of Shrouded Destiny (SD) is out for Squires!
Added 2024-09-30 05:31:34 +0000 UTCAnother long chapter, another battle (cause we didn't have enough fighting as of yet). But this one was not one I wanted to skip, even if I used unreliable narrator to turn it into an absolute mess. So yeah... people die and yet another plot threat is finally finished.
You can read the previous chapters in the collection.
Comments
Fixed, the whole fight was far messier in my head, and I had to untangle many things slowly.
Gladiusx
2024-10-01 01:41:31 +0000 UTCDamn Jon is really going to parade balon around. It would be hilarious if he can get baelor as well.
Trevor macDonald
2024-09-30 22:03:35 +0000 UTCWell now I may have missed it but didn't really see any description of Jon vs. Victarion? Also will Jin keep all the ships as he defeated the Iron born so paid the ironprice? Also cool idea from Sauron but Jon should use Balon Greyjoy as his banner. And then blood eagle him after he gets to Winterfell
Ambrose Young
2024-09-30 20:09:04 +0000 UTCWhat a nice chapter, i'm glad we got the whole battle in one swing like that, it was bloody, it was hard and it was really well written.
Kana
2024-09-30 09:24:25 +0000 UTCVal, 2024s wife of the year
Archimedes
2024-09-30 09:20:37 +0000 UTCFinally! Jon "The Knower" Snow. In all his death bringing and blood covered gory glory! I thank thee not Gladiusx for making us wait for the next chapter in Jon's magnificent march of murdering mewling mongrels. I am appreciative, however, for the mouthful from the meal of murderous mayhem you have given us thus far. And now for some odd reason I'm wanting to know what Eddard "I WILL end you" Stark is going to do...
Omar Syed
2024-09-30 08:22:53 +0000 UTCWhat a great chapter! Im still laughing at Val taking her revenge. Desmera’s reputation has just taken a sharp dive. And she was no one’s darling before this incident. Jon def takes after Ned with all the little strays he picks up. Balon about to go on a world tour!! Him and Desmera will both be experiencing embarrassment on a new level I fear. The battle was insanely bloody, at least we’ll get trees from it. And skull mountain is getting renovated. If Rickon had another special dream, I wonder what he thinks of Ned with a baby.. let’s hope he doesn’t spread rumors about another brother in the East. Omg all those ships left by the dead pirates! I know someone who could have used a fleet many chapters ago LMAO!
Happy
2024-09-30 06:13:36 +0000 UTCVal is some woman lmao
Yeno Memevig
2024-09-30 06:13:18 +0000 UTCWell now that was one hell of a battle! Can't wait for next sunday.
Kage_at_Fap
2024-09-30 05:48:08 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter
Ulquiorra Schiffer
2024-09-30 05:33:37 +0000 UTC
