Chapter 79 of Shrouded Destiny (SD) is out for Squires!
Added 2024-09-02 04:34:56 +0000 UTCI'm not happy with this chapter. It gave me trouble, and I finally decided to face a topic that I avoided in the first PoV. Might go to rewrite it entirely later. Let me know what you think. A disclaimer, I'm not descending into endless angst or anything like that, just trying to wrap up things that I left hanging. We're entering the last phase of the fic.
You can read the previous chapters in the collection.
Comments
I haven't decided yet. I will keep juggling two fics at once, but the next one will definitely be put to a poll, out of my fleshed out plot bunnies that I do want to write. The schedule would possibly be put to a vote as well. . Also, I'm not going to add dragons to the SD, I've went out of my way to steer clear of them already for a reason x).
Gladiusx
2024-09-02 23:27:50 +0000 UTCWith this fic ending perhaps by the end of the year, will CoF get weekly updates? Also just to throw this out there, both the Cannibal and Sheep Stealer are alive at the end of the Dance, so you can give Jon an adult dragon if you want to.
Zombie45
2024-09-02 09:46:07 +0000 UTCIt was a good chapter, and a necessary conversation since Val has become real good at reading Jons moods, also if Myrcella knows the Jons deepest secrets then it would be strange, unfair? that Val would be in the dark, i will never be against more Jon & Val heart to hearts, i liked it. I thought the previous chapter where Myrcella finds out a bit huh?, or like you really putting the fingers on the scales or rushing a plot point but having re-read that part i see you added more to Myrcellas reaction which was necessary because it is just unbelievable information, like yes, is he a madman? did he receive visions? they did find him in a strange state underneath the godswood with unexplicable magic symptoms, im glad you fleshed that part out. Now i feel kind of bad thinking that reckless spoiled dumbass Arya faced her consequences, i mean she really is gone, shes truly gone oh mercy.
Daniel Persson
2024-09-02 09:05:48 +0000 UTC
