Chapter 78 of Shrouded Destiny (SD) is out for Squires!
Added 2024-08-26 04:56:07 +0000 UTCAnother very long and very eventful chapter. It's also suitably late. I'm dead tired, so forgive me any mistakes. Lots of people die in a suitable ASOIAF fashion, so enjoy (or try and poke me with a pitchfork or something).
You can read the previous chapters in the collection.
Comments
Regarding Shireen, she’s literally the Stark/Lannister’s navel force right now. Her and Robb were single handedly carrying their victories for a long time. Getting the royal marriage is due to Joffrey’s crazy but she’s been earning the praises she’s gotten.
ND518
2024-08-26 21:40:39 +0000 UTCOutstanding performance on this one. I've read so many fanfics over the years that I'm hardly surprised any longer, but you've managed it in the most pleasant ways. In CoF by the way as well. Writing looks crisp as always. I think we're all looking forward to how Jon will satiate his bloodlust now. I think Shireen is getting a lot more goodwill than she would've gotten realistically, but it's your story and I'm not really vexed, it's just that her struggle seems less tangible then that of Jon to my eyes who had to carve out his destiny with his own bloodied hands. Anyways, before I start to ramble on even further wishing you the best and eagerly waiting for more (CoF as well!)
suspicious
2024-08-26 19:54:46 +0000 UTCYou killed Arya... you killed... !!! I congratulate you for having the balls- nevermind, you're worse than Hitler!!!
Senseo
2024-08-26 18:28:53 +0000 UTCYeah I think Jon may go a little Theon Stark happy on the Reavers after this and now the worst of the Free Folk tendencies can come to bear
Ambrose Young
2024-08-26 13:50:21 +0000 UTCJust now finished the chapter! Myrcella is officially a Stark after this chapter! She knows even the deepest secrets of her family. I feel for the hard choices she has to make and I swear I see some of Tywin Lannister when she’s deciding what’s best for everyone. The reunion between Rickon and Jon was wonderful. But I feel terrible for Rickon. He really tried to get help for Arya but she was way too defiant for her own good. I had the thought that maybe Melisandre would be able to resurrect Arya but I don’t think it’s happening. I think killing Arya will make Jon reluctant to take any hostages so Desmera Redwyne I’d hold on to my head if I were you!
Happy
2024-08-26 11:37:54 +0000 UTCWelp Jon is going to put the fear of the Old Gods in quite a few people. If not just about everyone.
Alex Woll
2024-08-26 11:03:32 +0000 UTC
