Chapter 32 of Convergence of Fates (CoF) is out for Squires!
Added 2024-07-19 07:43:00 +0000 UTCSo, upon some feedback, I decided to cut down on my sweeping PoV style of storytelling. Doubly so that its purpose was fulfilled in establishing all the characters that I wanted to set-up. So from now on, it will be the main one-two PoVs, with the occasional interlude every now and then.
Let me know if you like it or not.
It's all in all a long chapter. Could have cut it out a few hours ago and post way earlier, but I wanted to get the school year intro outta the way, and do it with a bang.
That being said, you can read the previous chapters in the collection.
Comments
Your writing style is more than fine. Do the style of writing you find to be best suited to how you want your stories to be told.
Dhruv Bhatt
2024-07-20 08:49:14 +0000 UTCI will delve into rituals themselves--not into big detail, but loosely at the branch of magic. All I will say is that there will be trade-offs, and all rituals are one big magically charged trade-off. Besides, Harry's growth curve in the summer literally skyrocketed because he got to spread his wings and test his mettle against different styles of magic, different schools of fighting, and much more.
Gladiusx
2024-07-19 19:24:54 +0000 UTCHopefully the ritual stuff isn't too OP, if he's inferior somehow to a genuine 13 year old it'll be pretty disappointing. I do like the change of there being less POVs, I enjoy reading about Harry and the main plot the most, the stuff with the Malfoy's I was a lot less interested in. Good chapter :)
gigamans
2024-07-19 12:04:34 +0000 UTC
