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Dire Contingency

The 33rd entry in the Pinwheel series starts now.

A faction of rogue special forces agents attempt to establish themselves on Hades, where they seek to form a breakaway civilization in opposition to the Coalition. With help months away, the only person who is in a position to oppose them is an old veteran of the Kerguela war.

https://snekguy.com/stories/pinwheel/dire-contingency/

Featured artwork by RLazyguy: https://x.com/RLazyguy

Dire Contingency

Comments

All checks and edits to Dire Contingency have been completed, I should be able to make the ebooks for DC and Rule of Three on Monday and handle the release early in the week.

Snekguy

All chapters have been run through Grammarly, just a couple more small checks to do, gotta think of some chapter titles, then I can make the ebook!

Snekguy

Another 11 chapters finalized. 15 more to go.

Snekguy

Ten more chapters finalized.

Snekguy

The Prologue and the first 10 chapters have been run through Grammarly and finalized.

Snekguy

26,000 words, and done! The proofreading and editing phase is finished, next up are the Grammarly passes, then I can make the ebook. Aiming to be done next week.

Snekguy

Another 20,000 words edited, up to Chapter 45. I did not intend for Day 69 to be the sex scene, I swear.

Snekguy

34,000 words edited, up to Chapter 43. 91% complete.

Snekguy

Another 10k down.

Snekguy

Another 10,000 words edited, also made some small tweaks to the Crow fight to involve some side characters more.

Snekguy

Edited up to Chapter 38, added 900 words of new content. I thought it would be cooler and make more sense if Roach and Crow were forced to exit the elevator and do a space walk. I’ve passed 80% completion.

Snekguy

1800 words of new content for the Ursa scene, from ‘As he watched another salvo of mortars pass overhead’. Resuming editing now.

Snekguy

5000 words edited, some reworked dialogue, and I've started replacing a section of the scene with new content with the goal of making the Ursa more intimidating. I'll add a link to the new content when it's done.

Snekguy

Got a little sidetracked with art projects today, more to show soon! Did some more editing on the Ursa scene.

Snekguy

Progress in terms of word count will slow down a bit here as I do a little reworking to the Ursa scene. Goals are: -Give side characters who kind of disappeared in this scene more mentions and things to do, notably Bishop and Flatline's team. -Have some interactions between Song and Reggie, and generally make Song more involved in the fight. -Rework Song's dialogue to make it a bit less ranty and more in-character.

Snekguy

Another 10,000 words, doing some edits to the Ursa scene to make sure all the important characters are included and to clean it up a little.

Snekguy

Another 10k down, up to “Friendlies! Friendlies!” Just a heads up, I will be taking a couple of days off to celebrate my birthday.

Snekguy

13k edited today, up to “Shame Amy isn’t here to tell me to take a number,”

Snekguy

Another 10k, up to Chapter 34. Overall progress is 74%.

Snekguy

12,000 words edited, up to “Well, this is horseshit,”

Snekguy

Another 10k edited, up to “He knows that if he loses this section, he loses the ship,”

Snekguy

Another 20,000 words edited, up to ‘DAY 56 – HADES ORBIT – FLATLINE’

Snekguy

Another 10,000 words edited, overall progress is 64%.

Snekguy

12,000 words edited today, also rewrote a short section that I wasn't happy with. Gotten a little behind on my editing thanks to the deluge of art projects, but I'm getting back on track now.

Snekguy

10,000 words edited, up to “You’re restoring my limbs?”

Snekguy

10,000 words edited, and fixed a small continuity error, up to DAY 53. Overall progress is 60%.

Snekguy

20,000 words edited, up to ‘They wandered through the featureless corridors for a while’

Snekguy

22,000 words edited, passed the halfway point. Up to Chapter 25.

Snekguy

30,000 words edited, up to Chapter 23.

Snekguy

Getting a tad overwhelmed with the workload, so not a lot of editing progress today, but a new Empire species sheet, a suite of Jakkari vehicles, and the Rule of Three cover are all making great progress. We have also scheduled the next audiobook to start recording in September.

Snekguy

20k words edited, up to Chapter 20.

Snekguy

Another 5000 words, progress on editing was a bit slow today because production has started on some artwork for the Jakkari vehicles and technology. Updates on that soon!

Snekguy

Another 16k down, up to CHAPTER 18.

Snekguy

Another 20k done, up to DAY 35. Overall editing progress is 35%.

Snekguy

Another 20k down, up to DAY 28.

Snekguy

Another 20k, up to DAY 24 – HADES OUTSKIRTS

Snekguy

Another 10k today, progress on the cover is coming along too. https://snekguy.com/wp-content/uploads/2025/08/Barbosa-477x1024.jpg

Snekguy

Another 10k, and a lot of progress on the cover!

Snekguy

Another 15k down, up to Day 21.

Snekguy

Another chapter down, up to Chapter 9. Made some edits to Rivera’s ever-changing rank.

Snekguy

Was working a little late yesterday and forgot to post the update, another 20k edited today.

Snekguy

Another 20k words edited, up to DAY 11.

Snekguy

16,000 words edited. Lost a little time, as work has begun on the next Empire species! Stay tuned.

Snekguy

Another 20,000 words edited. I’ve decided on how to structure the chapters and scene transitions, and I’ve made some small adjustments to characters’ ranks. Also fixed an issue where someone was using IR to see through a metal door, which is impossible!

Snekguy

Okay, starting editing today, the first 20,000 words are done. Changed Smiley's name so that he's not rising from the dead, and made some small alterations to the Hoff implant scene for realism.

Snekguy

1100 word update, new content at “What’s your business on Hades?” Finished! Final word count is 494,656. Not quite as long as Autumn War, but it's up there. Editing is estimated to take 25 days, but I'm going to take a couple of days off to wrap up some other projects. Some secret stuff I've been working on behind the scenes is ready to go.

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at “It’s odd seeing the sword I brought here become such a symbol for the Hadeans,”

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at ‘There had been a ceremony honoring the dead’

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at “Very nice work, Commander,”

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at “I will see what I can do about that,”

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at “There is nothing to forgive,”

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at “I take it there wasn’t a lot of cuddling in Rask packs,”

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at “You’re not that big,”

Snekguy

1500 word update, new content at “I will always be careful,” Been working later and later all week, hoping to get back to a more regular schedule on Monday after my day off. Should have some new art to show in the week too!

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at “Put it back!”

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at 'Like a sandship cresting the dunes'

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at ‘She moved a little closer’

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at ‘She began to peel off the black suit’

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at “You hungry yet?”

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at “It was certainly a way to prove my loyalty beyond a doubt,”

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at “I had much help.”

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at “You want advice from me?”

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at ‘The kiss could not drag on for long’

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at “It is a welcome change of pace,”

Snekguy

Making all the art posts on the different sites and socials ate up most of the workday so I'm gonna call it there for today.

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at “I think the honored elders will forgive me for breaking taboo,”

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at “You said that it was a yes or no question.”

Snekguy

1500 word update, was very busy with art stuff again. New content at “I hope they will not be offended if I share the alcohol,”

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at “Size and physical prowess has little to do with strength of will,”

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at ‘Petrova felt like she was going into battle.’

Snekguy

It’s sooo good to see everyone finally able to relax, after all that tension that was ever present just a few updates ago. They deserve the quiet.

Dreadcrown_of_Swarms

2000 word update, new content at “In your defense, he could be very irritating,”

Snekguy

Unfortunately I have been very busy with several art projects today and haven't had time to write a full update. I'm going to try to get everything wrapped up over the weekend so I can resume updating on Monday. Rest assured it's all stuff you'll be able to see soon.

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at “And that’s why we’re not splitting tonight’s bill,”

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at ‘She followed him to his office’

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at ‘“Rivera, you must admit’

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at “I do not think that now is the time for internal conflict,”

Snekguy

Oh that’s a great idea Reed! I’m sure it won’t ever backfire! :D …I hope my sarcasm is obvious.

Dreadcrown_of_Swarms

2000 word update, new content at “It is not a sign of weakness,”

Snekguy

2400 word update, new content at “Thank you, but that will not be necessary,

Snekguy

1500 word update, new content at “I wanted it to be a surprise,” Was a little busy today, the artwork for the next Pinwheel species is on the way! Check the website for a little sneak preview.

Snekguy

2100 word update, new content at “The situation seems more stable now,”

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at “I can think of none more qualified.”

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at “Can we avert a famine?”

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at ‘The doors of the ruined car’

Snekguy

well deserved, hope you enjoy!

Tredecian

I am taking the weekend off to play Deltarune and will resume work on Monday.

Snekguy

Well fought Petrova. The real roach is dead. And what a way to go. Look on the bright side Barbosa, now your outsides match your insides! Black, charred, disgusting and soon to be absolutely nothing! At the very least your rancid ass melting down and reaching terminal velocity will look like a wonderful shooting star to the people you butchered. Good riddance, and I hope it HURT.

Dreadcrown_of_Swarms

2000 word update, new content at “We should really have extended the pauldron to better cover that area,”

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at 'He passed the knife between his mechanical hands'

Snekguy

Alright Petrova, time to finally clean this repulsive shitstain off of Hades. This deluded psycho has stunk up the planet enough. Peel his ass like a grape!

Dreadcrown_of_Swarms

2000 word update, new content at 'The car began to rise'

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at ‘Ruza growled as the suit’s hand began to close.’

Snekguy

2600 word update, new content at 'The transport barreled down the street'

Snekguy

Ruza's AMR is my favorite main character

Sparky

2000 word update, new content at “Where would he go?”

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at 'It would be a tough nut to crack for any attacker'

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at “Property damage in three, two,”

Snekguy

LETS FREAKING GO!!

Dreadcrown_of_Swarms

2000 word update, new content at “Give me the blade!”

Snekguy

The audacity of Crow to act outraged and defiant after justice is served. What a pathetic, disgusting waste of a human. Good riddance you pos. Your ability to write hatable assholes is… well, inspiring is the correct word in this context, but God I hate you for it XD

Dreadcrown_of_Swarms

2300 word update, new content at ‘This is Staff Sergeant Fuller. We are under attack’

Snekguy

DAMMIT SNEKGUY, stop making these pricks effective! Poor Lily :(

Dreadcrown_of_Swarms

2200 word update, new content at “We have to do something!”

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at “Pull back!”

Snekguy

I can’t wait for Roach and Crow to get skewered. They’re at the top of the war crime list, time for them to get obliterated. We’re rooting for ya, Lily!

Dreadcrown_of_Swarms

2000 word update, new content at “It is the most defensible position,”

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at “Direct hit!”

Snekguy

1500 word update, new content at “You are unbelievable,” Ended up being extremely busy today, so the update is late and shorter than usual. I’m managing multiple art projects right now, one of which is concept art for several new species slated to be introduced soon, and I’m happy to say a lot of progress was made there. The final concept art for the Jakkari is now underway, ETA a couple of weeks, and the pitch for another new species has been finalized. Sneak preview: https://snekguy.com/wp-content/uploads/2025/05/araxie.jpg

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at “Well, that worked!”

Snekguy

WHAT AN ENDING TO SONG!!! XD Bravo good sir, bravo! Damn that was satisfying! Welp, one prick down, three to go!

Dreadcrown_of_Swarms

2000 word update, new content at “Is that you, Petrova?”

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at “How are we even supposed to get near that thing?”

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at “Aw shit!”

Snekguy

Caught this error, boss. “That’s the drone,” Barbosa surmised. “I guess they couldn’t house it inside the hull. Maybe it needs to…see, or something. I have no idea how they even got it to communicate with UN tech in the first place.” Excited to for the penultimate battle!

Dreadcrown_of_Swarms

2000 word update, new content at “What the hell do we do?” Also made a simple Ursa mockup to help me visualize it: https://snekguy.com/wp-content/uploads/2025/05/ursa.png

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at “I almost forgot what fighting with orbital superiority feels like!”

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at 'There was little that the defenders could do'

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at 'The convoy rolled through the narrow city streets'

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at “That should tie them up for a while,”

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at ‘Lily fired the smoke launchers’

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at “Do it,” Brenner replied with a nod.’

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at ‘She’d had everything backwards’

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at ‘She turned her eyes to the Rask as he strode forward’

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at “Showoff,”

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at “Ladies first,”

Snekguy

1600 word update, new content at ‘Still keeping low, he moved over to Sandman.’ A little short today, but I’ve been working on multiple art projects and have run short on time. I have a lot of cool stuff to show off soon.

Snekguy

2200 word update, new content at “This is our chance,”

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at ‘Like an insect scaling a wall’

Snekguy

Unfortunately I'm suffering from a bout of food poisoning and have been indisposed today. I will hopefully be able to resume work tomorrow.

Snekguy

2200 word update, new content at ‘The air was still filled with the sound of gunfire’

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at ‘It lunged at its target’

Snekguy

A real gamer has entered the chat.

The Glimmering Warlock

2000 word update, new content at 'The Marine and the PCE vanished into a cloud of dust'

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at ‘When he emerged, he was inside the base’

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at “She’ll be here,”

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at “I may be on my last legs, but I’m still the jaguar,”

Snekguy

God I cannot WAIT for Barbosa to get his stupid cocky shit pushed in. You BETTER make it satisfying!

Dreadcrown_of_Swarms

3000 word update, new content at 'Barbosa waded in'

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at “Pull up a feed. I want to see this.”

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at “The bridge is right down his hallway,”

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at “Give them some cover!”

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at “On my mark,”

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at “Time to shut up,”

Snekguy

2200 word update, new content at “The hazard pay is very attractive,”

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at ‘Give him some money’

Snekguy

Got wrapped up planning today and ran out of time for an update. The next sequence involves four different action scenes happening at the same time from multiple perspectives, so figuring out where to place the various scenes without it becoming impossible to follow has been a bit of a bitch. Got it worked out, so I should be good to go ahead with it tomorrow.

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at “Five minutes,”

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at “I contacted Barbosa,”

Snekguy

2200 word update, new content at ‘Petrova climbed the creaking steps’

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at “Both target sites have an almost identical layout,”

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at “Pick up the pace, honey.”

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at “I wouldn’t want to be boring,”

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at “You’re pretty cute when you’re flustered,”

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at “Let’s see what kind of weapon you’ve been smuggling.”

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at ‘Her tongue coiled and stroked’

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at “I’m sure that’s exactly the way he sees it,”

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at “Comms are back up,”

Snekguy

3200 word update, new content at “You’ll just have to trust my people,”

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at “We have a plan,”

Snekguy

2600 word update, new content at ‘I think Petrova might know where it is.’

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at “Fuck, I might as well tell you,”

Snekguy

2500 word update, new content at “That is not my intention,”

Snekguy

2500 word update, new content at “I’ll give you one thing,”

Snekguy

2300 word update, new content at “Fucking hell!”

Snekguy

2500 word update, new content at “Don’t you try anything,”

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at “There are tricks for moving through terrain like this,”

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at “As am I,”

Snekguy

2700 word update, new content at “I dunno, it feels kind of personal,”

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at “There is no cause for fear,”

Snekguy

2700 word update, new content at ‘I guess it’s just a matter of course’ Thanks for your patience, I’m feeling better today.

Snekguy

Unfortunately I am pretty sick today and will need to take a day or two off. I'll keep you updated.

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at “Is there somewhere I can get some air?”

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at “I’d never even seen an alien until Ruza moved here,”

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at “Well, look who finally came out of their room!”

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at “My guys will do it,”

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at “This isn’t about careers!”

Snekguy

"Rivera replied sternly" looks like it's meant to be Brenner, not Rivera.

Arctrooper209

2000 word update, new content at “You killed two, though?”

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at “None of our people are scheduled for patrol,”

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at “What was the plan?”

Snekguy

2500 word update, new content at “In some ways, that is worse,”

Snekguy

Unfortunately I ran into some issues today and ended up deleting about 800 words that I wasn't happy with. I'm back on track, but with only about 600 usable words, which is too small for an update. I'll add it to tomorrow's update and pick it up there.

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at 'Petrova bit her lip as she concentrated'

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at “We can minimize the risks,”

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at “We stick around like a bad rash,”

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at “If he shows you, do you promise to shut up?”

Snekguy

2200 word update, new content at ‘I’d still like him removed’

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at “Can we really just sit around here waiting out Barbosa?”

Snekguy

Reading this update reminded me of in college I took a class on WWII and one of the readings talked about how the bond between soldiers was pretty tenuous. When the war was over, a lot of soldiers found they didn't really like some of their squadmates. Behaviors that you shrugged off before became more annoying, some guy's shitty opinions you can no longer tolerate, or you just plain didn't have anything in common. Once you're no longer depending on each other for survival that illusion of friendship starts to break down. Seems like that's partly what Petrova is going through. I mean, technically they're still in a war, but I can see it being different enough to cause this type of problem.

Arctrooper209

2000 word update, new content at “Perhaps you are right,”

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at “We need manpower,”

Snekguy

2222 word update, new content at “We’ll draw them into an ambush,”

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at ‘They fanned out into the desert’

Snekguy

1500 word update, had to run some errands today and ran out of time. New content at “I dunno how your species survived this long,”

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at 'The walls of the passenger compartment'

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at ‘There was a click as the battery was wired back up’

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at “I speak from experience,”

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at ‘Amy left the room’

Snekguy

2200 word update, new content at “Better wear some gloves next time you go in there,”

Snekguy

2200 word update, new content at ‘Petrova awoke suddenly’

Snekguy

2200 word update, new content at “I admire your confidence,”

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at “We see if the communications gear works,”

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at ‘Petrova sat in darkness’ Went back and extended that last section from yesterday, as it was a little rushed.

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at “You want to lay a snare?”

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at “There’s one thing I share in common with Barbosa,”

Snekguy

I mean, that’s probably why Ruza is so gung-ho about fighting back. Hell, he says it himself. People like Barbosa and the Matriarch will always put themselves before others, yet always claim to have the moral high ground. Right up until they burn the world around them when they can’t get what they want. Just giant, spoiled, evil children. And yes, aliens are VERY hot.

Dreadcrown_of_Swarms

I’m sure Barbosa would hate this comparison but he’s very similar to the deposed Rask Matriarch. Both view their race as superior, both motivate their followers by promising a future where they’re on top, and both are clinging so desperately to their ideology that they would rather burn everything to the ground than acknowledge the changing reality around them. Honestly, now that I’m thinking about it, that’s kind of a theme throughout the Pinwheel series: that people need to adapt and be open to change, or they will ultimately fail. Also that aliens are hot.

Arctrooper209

Man, I love how complex Vos has become, he’s such an interesting character. Always just bordering on going too far, arguably sometimes doing so, but always trying to do the right thing. It’s refreshing to see the “the ends justify the means” character written so compellingly, as opposed to the usual super evil villain pretending to be moral. Kudos!

Dreadcrown_of_Swarms

2200 word update, new content at “Harlequin and I have devised a little something,”

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at ‘They made their way through the winding tunnels of the asteroid base’

Snekguy

The upcoming operation has required some extensive planning, which ate up most of the workday. I should now be in a good place to resume writing tomorrow.

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at ‘Vos marched down the hallway’

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at “You are safe, and that is all that matters,”

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at “The enemy is routed, and the city is back under control,”

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at “Where do we go now, LC?”

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at 'It was a longer walk than Nick had been expecting'

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at “At this point, I think they’re capable of anything.”

Snekguy

Yknow, I hate the blatant hypocrisy of rogue SWAR, they’re all about “human supremacy” but then act just as brutally and monstrously as the Betelgeusians they claim to be better than. It’s disgusting, they’re no better than the roaches. I can’t wait till they all get what’s coming to them.

Dreadcrown_of_Swarms

2000 word update, new content at “Be brave,”

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at “I’ll be back,”

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at 'Barbosa watched the little group of insurgents walk away'

Snekguy

Yeah, I’m gonna need Barbosa’s head on a platter. Credit where it’s due Snek, you sure as hell know how to make hateable scumbags.

Dreadcrown_of_Swarms

2500 word update, new content at ‘The PCE followed suit’

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at 'Rivera looked like he wanted to argue'

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at “The clamor of battle is bringing back memories I thought forgotten,”

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at ‘He braced himself and exhaled a breath’

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at “We must be swift,”

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at “It’s just like a game of Carrier Command,”

Snekguy

Things are taking a turn now. Petrova’s finally started to realize Barbosa’s not the man she thinks he is. Perhaps he never was. Question is, what is she gonna do about it?

Dreadcrown_of_Swarms

2000 word update, new content at “She wouldn’t do that,”

Snekguy

2400 word update, new content at ‘The troopers continued on’

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at 'Before they could ask more questions'

Snekguy

Shout outs to Tom, only 1 day away from retirement. Hate to see it

The Glimmering Warlock

2000 word update, new content at “That’s our Doc,”

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at “I’ll have Astrid forward the targets to our fighters,”

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at “That’s reassuring to hear, Commander.”

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at “I don’t think you should go,”

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at “LC, we have a situation,”

Snekguy

I had a nice rest over the holidays, and we’re getting back to the regularly scheduled programming now. 2000 word update, new content at “Well, we’d better get going,”

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at ‘Petrova hurried’

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at ‘As they made their way down the windswept street’

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at “We’ve taken unexpected losses,”

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at 'The six Marines had taken off their helmets'

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at “Don’t see many animals on Hades,”

Snekguy

2200 word update, new content at ‘Nick felt his heartbeat quicken’ There’s a small error that’s been introduced, I need to go back and give Rivera a field promotion so he can command more men. Bear with me until I have time to correct that.

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at ‘A cloaked figure made his way between the rusted industrial machinery’

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at “Thank you, ma’am,”

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at “The greenhouses aren’t going to be enough,”

Snekguy

2500 word update, new content at “Amy, I want you to start preparing contingencies,”

Snekguy

Just a small update. The PC is all finished and working, all software is installed, and I’m once again fully operational. I did some writing today, but I didn’t have time for a full update, so I’ll carry it over into tomorrow and do an extra large one. I’ll be resuming my usual schedule now.

Snekguy

That part I was waiting for came in today, and the build is nearly finished. Might need one more day potentially, but I feel like I should be good to resume updates tomorrow.

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at “You have an interesting accent,”

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at ‘The sounds and smells of the bar’ Off-schedule Sunday update today. I encountered a snag with my upgrade and have to wait a couple of days for a replacement part to arrive. During that time I will be working on my laptop. I had hoped to get it all wrapped up over the weekend, but I’ll need to take another random day off in the week whenever it arrives to complete the build. Doing some extra work today to make up for any missed updates.

Snekguy

3000 word update, new content at 'Petrova flicked her wrist' Just a heads up, I will be taking a rare two-day weekend, as I'm finally upgrading my PC. I've had this thing almost as long as I've been writing, which is kind of wild. I'm hoping to have it all up and running again by Monday.

Snekguy

2200 word update, new content at “As long as I have medicine to give, it will be free,”

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at 'When I came to Hades'

Snekguy

Shout outs to Tiny, brother I got a sinking feeling he's only a few days away from retirement

The Glimmering Warlock

2300 word update, new content at “Always figured there would be more people on a carrier like this,”

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at “I will exercise caution,”

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at “We’re having beef today,”

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at “Pass me the cauterizer,”

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at 'He heard footsteps as Reed came running'

Snekguy

2300 word update, new content at “Get the hell out of here,”

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at ‘As they moved along the industrial corridor’

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at ‘Something rose above the background noise’

Snekguy

Love to hear it, dude. Tell your guys hello from me!

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at “Go! Now!”

Snekguy

im so excited for the completion of this story. within my unit is held bated breath for this next entry. we all fell in love with your universe while deployed. keep up the great work we love what you are doing

Sprink

2800 word update, new content at “Keep moving back and reinforce the flanks!”

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at ‘Reed and Rivera donned hardhats’

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at “It’s all over the damned intranet,”

Snekguy

2100 word update, new content at “Well, it’s inside the system now,”

Snekguy

2300 word update, new content at 'The tension in the air could have been cut with a knife'

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at ‘Hoff activated his GPR module’

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at “I can make that happen,”

Snekguy

2300 word update, new content at ‘More nodding from the crowd’

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at “Your Commander assured me that martial law wasn’t on the table,”

Snekguy

I like the middle option- and i am currently reading rule of three. I don't know how much feedback you get from your stories, but the seductive aliens (polars and Araxie) are by far the favorite- and you've written a seductive bug (endo the line). In a species specifically crafted to be attractive to humans. I also wasn't kidding about that 'collector' caste of Jarilians. A select few 'princess' bugs that leave the hive, gather 'DNA' from other species and bring it back to their queen. Its an idea. I can already see Chitin covered Jessica rabbits flirting with battle hardened marines and Borealans. Its an idea.

mraanonymous

I appreciate the offer but I don't do public commissions, sorry. Revisiting the shorts and turning them into a fully fledged story would be fun, but I have a lot of stories to get through. I do however have plenty of stories planned for Jarilo that I hope to get to in time. One of them was part of the last poll, which features a Jarilan Replete leaving the hive to become a chef so she can feed other species the way she feeds her colony. Another features a person who is very down on his luck moving to Jarilo to start a new life and falling in love with a Jarilan there. We also have the recent story Rule of Three which prominently features a Jarilan Worker.

Snekguy

I wasn't kidding about your rates for commissions.

mraanonymous

I would very much like to see that- as i said before. What would it take to bring your focus back to that? If its a commission, what are your rates? If its interest, you could do another story on Jarilo. Fully exploring how a human-insecto society would actually function- including how its a mostly female/ very horny population. Maybe even do another competition short story between a polar and a 'mating' cast of Jalirians. A special cast specifically designed to 'gather' DNA of other species and introduce it to the hive. I guarantee you, people would crave that.

mraanonymous

Hi there, thanks for the support! Endo the Line isn't really a full story, it's two shorts that I wrote to accompany some fanart that was submitted. Those two sections are all there is currently, sorry. Maybe I could expand it in the future though.

Snekguy

Hey, question: Where can i read your entire story 'endo the line'? I see a part 1 and 2 on your website, but in the former it just stops once they hit the bar. In part 2 your story jumps to the waterfall. Is there a middle section that show's the lead up to the waterfall? I would very much like to see it.

mraanonymous

2000 word update, new content at “We need to show everyone that these people aren’t untouchable,”

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at ‘He wasn’t sure how to respond’

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at ‘Hold onto me tightly’

Snekguy

God I hate these SWAR bastards. They all deserve a coil burn straight to the groin and a slug in the chest.

Dreadcrown_of_Swarms

2500 word update, new content at “What’s happening down there, Hoff? Report!”

Snekguy

3500 word update, new content at ‘He spun around’

Snekguy

3300 word update, new content at ‘When they reached their destination’

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at “You must move like a sandspider,”

Snekguy

4500 word update, new content at ‘They knew where Amy worked’

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at “We know very little about their capabilities,”

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at “Sounds like a plan,”

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at “I know that, moron,”

Snekguy

2700 word update, new content at “What are you going to do?”

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at “Yeah, I’m thinking alright,”

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at “We intend to free your comrades,”

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at ‘It took a couple more days’

Snekguy

I missed this one somehow..

Lord Frostdraken the Deranged

2000 word update, new content at “A friend of the workers is a friend of mine,”

Snekguy

2400 word update, new content at “Wherever he is, I hope he’s alright,”

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at “Tell me, do you know where the term decimation comes from?”

Snekguy

2200 word update, new content at ‘A PDF trooper raised a hand to stop Hoff’

Snekguy

2500 word update, new content at “A single Rask, too?”

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at “How does it feel?”

Snekguy

4500 word update, new content at ‘When he arrived home’

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at ‘That seemed to get a reaction from them’

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at “What else is there to do around here?”

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at ‘Ruza left them alone’

Snekguy

2700 word update, new content at “I’m sure those garrisons have cells and drunk tanks,”

Snekguy

2600 word update, new content at 'He shed his jacket and rolled his shoulders'

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at “There’s 62 Scorpii,”

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at “Here’s hoping we won’t need to,”

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at ‘Barbosa strode into the hangar’ I switched the location to the hangar because the mess hall wasn’t large enough.

Snekguy

Ominous

Lord Frostdraken the Deranged

2000 word update, new content at “So be it,”

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at “Keep your eyes open,”

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at 'They drew closer to the station'

Snekguy

God I hope Vos makes it through this, he’s had such great development.

Dreadcrown_of_Swarms

2000 word update, new content at “You let me worry about that,”

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at “Hold him still, Smiley,”

Snekguy

2000 word update, new content at “I’ve always had a great deal of respect for you,”

Snekguy

Good shit so far. Im excited to see where this goes

Lord Frostdraken the Deranged

2000 word update, new content at ‘They descended a flight of steps’

Snekguy

Man so cool to see how much Vos has come around, it makes his previous actions seem more like he wanted to do everything he could, butt eventually he was convinced of alien allies, noice

Noximilien l'Horloger

2000 word update, new content at “Next round is on me.”

Snekguy

Quite ironic that hes now trying to do what he stopped like 30 years ago, seperate from the UN

Noximilien l'Horloger

I mean besides the valabarans and the jarilans they either dont have the numbers or techonology, its quite unfair to expect species in the medieval stage to supply their own weapons and ships, though there will always be people who have to vent their problems unto others

Noximilien l'Horloger

2800 word update, new content at ‘Barbosa slammed a fist on his table’

Snekguy

3800 words, new content at “We can’t do anything about the big ones!”

Snekguy

3000 words, new content at 'Barbosa had adopted a stylized jaguar skull as his symbol'

Snekguy

Honestly it’s a easy to make conclusions, humans need to be able to stand on their own and most of the species that are part of the Coalition. Don’t offer much other then bodies for the front (except the Brokers) the only species that jives the most with humans would be The Valbarans. they definitely went about the wrong way though.

Indexo's Vault

Interesting

Doomslayer69

Oh man, time for some good ol fashioned close quarters firefights. I love the action, thanks for the good work Snekguy!

Lord Frostdraken the Deranged

Hu, I'll be honest I thought the faction would be bigger than it sounds.

White Neko Knight

Trying to start their own civilization huh. Let's see 👀 what happens

NS

Woot

Giggles fun time


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