Purple Heart Remastered
Added 2018-12-22 23:34:34 +0000 UTCHere's the first 20k words of Purple Heart re-edited, from Chapter 1 to 'They walked down the tunnel, Moralez trailing a short distance behind Azi'.
Much like Fineprint, this one needs a lot of work, but I feel like I'm able to make some very substantial improvements. Azi's sex scene has a lot of additions especially and I've made some small corrections to the lore to make sure that everything lines up with later stories.
I also added tags for those of you who might not have read this one before.
Progress report: we only have three stories left to edit after this one, and then I can get back to producing new content again.
Comments
Finished, the Pastebin has been updated with the latest edit.
Snekguy
2018-12-28 18:28:32 +0000 UTC10k words today, with some very extensive rewrites to Kaisha's sex scene. From 'It was night by the time they arrived' to 'I want you at least twice more before the night is through'
Snekguy
2018-12-27 19:14:38 +0000 UTCAnother 15k, from 'Try taking a step,' to 'It was night by the time they arrived'
Snekguy
2018-12-24 19:53:22 +0000 UTCAnother 15k, from 'They walked down the tunnel' to 'Try taking a step'
Snekguy
2018-12-23 22:36:52 +0000 UTCGood job looking forward to reading it!
Sharktogonapus
2018-12-23 20:19:17 +0000 UTCThis story is probably the one in most need of tagging.
Ezekiel Paul
2018-12-23 07:35:42 +0000 UTCI am happy to let everyone know that I have completed the story The Warrior of Silence. I have sent it to you so that it can be put up for everyone to read on Patreon. It's huge almost in size of Black Velvet. It will probably be my largest story I ever wrote. Happy Holidays to everyone. :)
CMed
2018-12-23 04:40:18 +0000 UTC
