Demon Gate
Added 2018-05-20 22:32:40 +0000 UTCHere's a new story that I'm working on, in which a farm boy falls in love with an Oni.
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The final 10,000 words are edited. I'll do the Ebook and upload it to all the various websites tomorrow.
Snekguy
2018-06-15 16:51:51 +0000 UTCAnother 20,000 words of editing are done, chapters 5-7.
Snekguy
2018-06-14 21:45:34 +0000 UTCGlad to hear you guys enjoyed this one! The first 20,000 words are edited, chapters 1-5.
Snekguy
2018-06-13 21:59:57 +0000 UTCWould love to see a continuation of this story in the future. Great story.
2018-06-13 05:19:21 +0000 UTCAwesome story man. Really inspired
Jack Fables
2018-06-13 00:23:39 +0000 UTCNice man,
SketchyWarrior
2018-06-13 00:04:31 +0000 UTCThat was a really sweet ending. A really sweet story overall. I liked it!
Ezekiel Paul
2018-06-12 22:15:01 +0000 UTC2000 word update, finished! I did an extra update today because I want to play the new Jurassic Park game obsessively tomorrow. I hope you guys enjoyed this one. I'll start the editing process soon and make an Ebook for you guys once it's all polished up.
Snekguy
2018-06-12 01:39:56 +0000 UTC2000 word update
Snekguy
2018-06-11 19:05:33 +0000 UTC2000 word update
Snekguy
2018-06-11 00:44:17 +0000 UTC2000 word update
Snekguy
2018-06-09 22:26:09 +0000 UTC2000 word update, sorry the updates have been getting later and later, this heat wave is killing me.
Snekguy
2018-06-09 01:34:01 +0000 UTC2000 word update
Snekguy
2018-06-07 23:35:13 +0000 UTC2000 word update
Snekguy
2018-06-06 23:06:16 +0000 UTC2000 word update
Snekguy
2018-06-06 00:39:06 +0000 UTC2000 word update
Snekguy
2018-06-05 00:08:02 +0000 UTC2000 word update
Snekguy
2018-06-03 21:19:25 +0000 UTC2000 word update
Snekguy
2018-06-02 23:15:04 +0000 UTC2000 word update
Snekguy
2018-06-01 20:08:14 +0000 UTCGood catch, fixed.
Snekguy
2018-05-31 21:31:17 +0000 UTC2000 word update
Snekguy
2018-05-31 21:31:03 +0000 UTCHey, on line 606, there's a line of dialogue that goes "I won't be bite". I think you meant to say I won't bite.
Jonathan Billings
2018-05-31 04:31:32 +0000 UTCGreat story, keep it up!!
Jack Fables
2018-05-30 22:18:29 +0000 UTC2500 word update
Snekguy
2018-05-30 20:25:49 +0000 UTCI'm really liking this one so far. Great setting and learning a bit more about Japanese culture. Good times
Jonathan Billings
2018-05-30 14:09:50 +0000 UTC2000 word update
Snekguy
2018-05-30 00:43:24 +0000 UTC2000 word update
Snekguy
2018-05-28 23:50:15 +0000 UTCOh, another story from You. Let's start reading! :)
Lev
2018-05-28 18:49:15 +0000 UTC2000 word update
Snekguy
2018-05-27 22:13:38 +0000 UTC2000 word update
Snekguy
2018-05-26 20:41:03 +0000 UTCThanks for the catch, fixed.
Snekguy
2018-05-25 23:55:17 +0000 UTC2000 word update
Snekguy
2018-05-25 23:47:54 +0000 UTCLine 289: "gravelly and course". You want coarse there.
Kalik Long
2018-05-25 21:56:29 +0000 UTC2000 word update
Snekguy
2018-05-24 22:49:55 +0000 UTCGlad you're enjoying it, the setting is a lot of fun with this one.
Snekguy
2018-05-24 03:37:37 +0000 UTCHere's a haiku: Love your big red boobs I am tall enough to ride Oni lemme smash -Satou
Snekguy
2018-05-24 03:37:05 +0000 UTCOni, let me ride.
SketchyWarrior
2018-05-24 00:04:42 +0000 UTC2500 word update
Snekguy
2018-05-23 22:04:24 +0000 UTCEnjoying it so far. The setting is a great change of pace and very welcome. You paint a vivid word picture.
BadTouch
2018-05-23 12:26:41 +0000 UTC2000 word update
Snekguy
2018-05-22 19:42:13 +0000 UTCGotcha, I'll revise that.
Snekguy
2018-05-22 03:20:24 +0000 UTCThis might be a bit of a nitpick, but the use of the word "universe" in the context of line 98 seems a little... out of place in the established setting.
Zathas
2018-05-21 23:55:01 +0000 UTC3500 word update
Snekguy
2018-05-21 21:34:12 +0000 UTCI haven't even opened this yet, and I'm already excited.
Kalik Long
2018-05-21 09:49:08 +0000 UTCOh boi
SketchyWarrior
2018-05-21 02:28:28 +0000 UTCExcellent!!!!
Jack Fables
2018-05-21 01:10:04 +0000 UTCoh. oh yes
ZBL
2018-05-20 23:17:03 +0000 UTC
