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Goetic Justice 2

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Here's the first 3000 words of Goetic Justice 2. 

After doing a lot of research, I have decided that the Freemasons are better suited to my needs than the Illuminati, due to their connections to ancient Solomonic lore, so let's hope that the local Masonic lodge doesn't off me for writing slanderous libel. 

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And we're finished! I'll work on the Ebook tomorrow.

Snekguy

Another 25k is edited, chapters 8 to 10.

Snekguy

I'm glad to hear that you enjoyed it!

Snekguy

The next 30,000 words are edited, from chapter 5 to chapter 8.

Snekguy

Honestly, wasn't looking forward to this story in the beginning.. but as I read, I ended up enjoying this story more then I anticipated. I was expecting another borelean story, or something different. But, as I read on I found myself hooked, reading update after update finding myself actually excited to read the storyline and see the plot play out more then the sex scenes at times! Enjoyed every word, worth every second. You have yet again made another masterpiece! I cannot wait for what else you have up your sleeve, this time I wont be quick to doubt.

AnimeFem

The first 40,000 words are edited, up to chapter 5.

Snekguy

Nice work man.

SketchyWarrior

It was awesome. Really well done! Any ideas on what's coming up next?

-Vulp-

Oh yeah I should throw that in.

Snekguy

I enjoyed it immensely, but what about the payment for GAAP. It should be mentioned to close up that story arc.

Nekronom

2500 word update, finished! This is the longest story I've written so far, edging ahead of Queen of Jarilo at 115,000 words. It will probably take me about five days to edit it. I hope you guys enjoyed reading it, and that it was a worthy sequel!

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I uh, I hope that the Masons aren't tracking his phone's GPS signal.

Cibervader

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I was going to make a wise crack about wondering how they would get their energy back, but then that last scene happened and now am become the sad man.

Cibervader

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Looking pretty good so far, this action segment seems well executed.

Cibervader

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Let's just say I'll be watching the Bourne Identity tomorrow for research purposes.

Snekguy

I hope that we get to see Ryan John Wick some fools with his new skills now.

Cibervader

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Things are beginning to heat up, and not in the usual way.

Cibervader

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2000 word update. Sorry this one is later than usual, a migraine took me out for most of the day.

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A little shy of 2000 words today, ran out time researching Angels, it was way more complex than I anticipated. On a positive note I now have a ton of new ideas.

Snekguy

For that they could have potentially used Sabnock #43, who can 'build high towers, castles and cities, and furnish them with armour'. Or perhaps Seere #70, who can 'carry or re-carry anything wherever you would have it go, or where you would have it from.' (It's a really good point actually, I should put those in the story)

Snekguy

How did they bring all the fancy furnishings? SUVs, too. Did demons recreate everything, like with his body? But then how did they get the Ark there? Unless the Ark is a lie...?

Curly

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Believe it or not the Kofe sex scene is still going. 20,000 words and counting.

Snekguy

Snek plz

Oseve

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Honestly, I think I like the bigger chunks of each story at a time better than the 2k back and forth, though I imagine it's probably good for you to not have your head stuck in grinding out one story at a time for a change.

Ezekiel Paul

I love it

Nekronom

4000 word update, did a double one today since I'll probably be too busy tomorrow.

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I'm glad you enjoyed it! I have plans to bring Riya back for a third installment of Outpost at some point in the near future.

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Good work. Read your outpost series. Hoping riya makes a comeback at one point.

Anil Nair

1700 word update, I'm a little shy of the mark today due to IRL interferences.

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Thanks for the input guys, it sounds like the best option is probably to do what I think works best and then perhaps provide an edited version when it's all done. I'll get another update done tomorrow.

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SNEK PLZ

Oseve

It's also worth considering that your catalog is full and varied enough that anyone who doesn't like a particular story arc can still find plenty of stories that they do enjoy.

J Pendragon

Sorry to be a broken record but you should do what you want despite my own opinion. Especially since im probably in the minority and most wont care or be for the orgy. Rather have you write the story you like!

Silverroses76

I am pro-multi lovers. They are demons, their values are different from humanity's. I definitely believe Ryan would desire monogamy, and maybe Nahash would find it an intriguing concept, but 100% this "you feel good but it's rape but it's hot and she'd be okay with it" is right up my alley.

Oseve

I am pro-seeing this and other sex scenes through. Let him fuck his way through the Goetica, I say.

Ezekiel Paul

How do you guys feel about the sex scenes in GJ2? I know that some people are super hardcore into monogamy and any deviation from an established couple puts them off, and since this is a sequel we're already starting off with an established relationship. But on the other hand, demons are closely associated with sexuality and it would be a shame not to be able to explore any aspects of that going forward. Of course Nahash is the love interest, and that will remain the case, but how do you guys feel about me putting Ryan in different sexual situations that might not include her, or only include her in a passive context? I can write it either way without making any changes to the plot, that's fine, but I'd like to know your feelings before I proceed. For example I can see this group sex scene through, or I can do a fake-out and have Nahash appear to break it up.

Snekguy

Stopping right before the best part, you're as cruel as the daemons you write about.

Oseve

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4500 word update, did a double feature today because I want to work on some Kofe tomorrow.

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This proves that there is a God, and he probably is really grumpy with us for jacking it to demons. Oh well!

Oseve

If'n you haven't, you should really watch 'The Man Who Would Be King'. Freemasonry at its finest!

Scott Morrison


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