Rig Runner
Added 2017-07-06 07:48:41 +0000 UTCHere's the first 2500 words of a new thing I'm working on, I'm supposed to be resuming work on Grave Goods tomorrow but I want to work on this too when I have time, just because it's been scratching at the inside of my skull for weeks.
Comments
Finished! Ebook coming soon, though some people expressed interest in helping me proofread so I'll wait a little bit to hear back from them before I upload that.
Snekguy
2017-08-08 01:36:52 +0000 UTCI'm so glad you guys liked the ending! The first 40,000 words are proofread and chaptered, all the way up to the start of chapter 9. It's probably a two day job, I'm trying out a new, more thorough editing process and I've never tried to read one of these all the way through in one sitting before, I've been at it for six hours straight. Also tell me what you guys think of the new scene change indicator, I figure that will make them less jarring in the Ebooks or on websites where they change the formatting.
Snekguy
2017-08-06 21:37:16 +0000 UTCGreat setting on this one. Every time you expand on the Pinwheel universe, I end up liking it more and more!
2017-08-06 16:21:26 +0000 UTCHell of a story. Keep up the stellar work man
SketchyWarrior
2017-08-06 04:18:19 +0000 UTCToday's forecast: A 100% chance of feels.
SketchyWarrior
2017-08-06 00:45:34 +0000 UTC3000 word update, finished! I'll be chaptering, proofreading and editing this over the next couple of days, I really want to improve that aspect of my writing process.
Snekguy
2017-08-05 23:34:03 +0000 UTC2000 word update
Snekguy
2017-08-04 19:47:10 +0000 UTCOoo the plot thickens.
2017-08-04 01:54:57 +0000 UTCWell shit...the situation just got a lot more complex.
SketchyWarrior
2017-08-04 01:49:52 +0000 UTC2600 word update
Snekguy
2017-08-04 01:02:49 +0000 UTC2000 word update, thanks for the feedback guys, very helpful! Glad you're liking the pillow talk, it can be a bit daunting to try to switch things up when you have such an established formula.
Snekguy
2017-08-03 01:39:52 +0000 UTCI dig it for your intended purpose - and I feel like this is a more relatable reaction to alien cat people. The fear-boner or whatever is real, but he still knows it's coming from kind of a fucked up place - just acknowledging this (even if he figures out he's somewhat cool with it) makes the whole schtick feel better from an immersion standpoint for someone not super into power dynamics in their sex life.
Sorfin7
2017-08-02 05:50:40 +0000 UTCI feel it works well for the characters. It helps deepen the mood and push the plot and interactions forward, only making me enjoy it more and more. Especially because it allows for more play between Erikson and Nazka....which only helps push her up the Best Girl list
SketchyWarrior
2017-08-02 00:11:58 +0000 UTC2000 word update. I'm trying something new with this scene, trying to break up the individual sex acts with some pillow talk in order to make it feel less formulaic, is that working or is it just interrupting the flow?
Snekguy
2017-08-01 23:42:10 +0000 UTCI can't wait to see how this one ends, seems like there's a couple of directions it could go.
2017-08-01 00:53:28 +0000 UTC2000 word update
Snekguy
2017-07-31 23:06:10 +0000 UTC1000 word update, was a bit busy today
Snekguy
2017-07-31 04:18:29 +0000 UTC2000 word update
Snekguy
2017-07-30 08:12:14 +0000 UTC2500 word update
Snekguy
2017-07-29 03:23:41 +0000 UTCThey only up the badass/coolness factor.
SketchyWarrior
2017-07-28 04:21:37 +0000 UTC2000 word update, thanks for the encouragement! Glad you guys are enjoying this entry so much, hopefully I can get some character art done. Also I'll probably retcon Nazka to have an eyepatch when I do the editing pass, because eyepatches are awesome.
Snekguy
2017-07-28 04:14:22 +0000 UTCI'm absolutely obsessed with your work and I don't think I could get enough of it. I love everything you do and it keeps getting better and better, keep up the good work!
AnimeFem
2017-07-27 22:40:03 +0000 UTCYou're one of my favorite erotica writers, mainly because you don't focus mainly on porn like most erotica writers do. You've created a fun universe with cool characters and great action, plus your stories have little to no grammatical errors. Keep it up!
Jonathan Billings
2017-07-27 05:12:25 +0000 UTCAmigo, your stories just keep kicking ass and this one has an interesting dynamic to it
SketchyWarrior
2017-07-27 02:52:50 +0000 UTCThat's high praise! I'll stay the course then, thanks for your enthusiasm guys! 2600 word update.
Snekguy
2017-07-27 01:25:38 +0000 UTCGotta say, this is definitely one of my favorites in the Pinwheel universe so far!
2017-07-26 20:43:08 +0000 UTCTLDR: Moar plz.
Sorfin7
2017-07-26 20:11:48 +0000 UTCI'd never say no to more of this story - I think the relationship dynamic is the most interesting one out of all of your works. The give and take is fantastic, and it emphasizes the oddity of Borlean-Human relations in what I think is a more interesting manner than the some of the other stories (I love them all - I just particularly like this one =). I also really like the growth that you've included already...
Sorfin7
2017-07-26 20:11:37 +0000 UTCHow are you guys liking this one so far? I feel like I might have some pacing issues, I've written a LOT of porn for this one because it's my jam, not sure if that's good or bad. Do you guys think it has enough plot and character development so far or should I go back and add some more?
Snekguy
2017-07-26 16:03:05 +0000 UTC2000 word update
Snekguy
2017-07-26 03:48:58 +0000 UTC2000 word update
Snekguy
2017-07-25 03:19:29 +0000 UTC2000 word update
Snekguy
2017-07-24 06:06:54 +0000 UTCNot unless you want a 600lb alien stepping on your toes!
Snekguy
2017-07-24 02:02:12 +0000 UTCWould it be a good idea to try and teach a Borealean how to slow dance?
SketchyWarrior
2017-07-24 01:29:21 +0000 UTC2000 word update
Snekguy
2017-07-23 07:12:14 +0000 UTCFor some reason that update didn't post, let's try that again. 2000 word update.
Snekguy
2017-07-22 12:28:07 +0000 UTC2000 word update
Snekguy
2017-07-20 05:49:29 +0000 UTC3000 word update
Snekguy
2017-07-19 05:37:03 +0000 UTC1500 word update, was a little rushed today so I'll edit this update tomorrow
Snekguy
2017-07-18 10:16:49 +0000 UTC4000 word update
Snekguy
2017-07-17 03:48:06 +0000 UTC4000 word update. Sorry I missed the update yesterday, I was super busy. Here's a double update to make up for it.
Snekguy
2017-07-16 02:06:02 +0000 UTC3000 word update
Snekguy
2017-07-14 03:58:45 +0000 UTCYep we've moved to /trash/ now.
Snekguy
2017-07-13 00:08:20 +0000 UTC2000 word update
Snekguy
2017-07-13 00:07:54 +0000 UTCRIP /d/ thread. Is the general on another board now?
Aaron Harker
2017-07-13 00:02:57 +0000 UTCWew lad, this is gonna get good
SketchyWarrior
2017-07-11 00:50:22 +0000 UTC2000 word update
Snekguy
2017-07-11 00:22:45 +0000 UTC2000 word update
Snekguy
2017-07-09 08:35:10 +0000 UTC2000 word update
Snekguy
2017-07-07 08:50:45 +0000 UTCWe've moved to /trash/ now.
Snekguy
2017-07-07 02:09:50 +0000 UTCCan't wait for another update, got me on the edge of my seat! Can't wait to see where this goes.
AnimeFem
2017-07-06 17:23:18 +0000 UTCI'm liking this story so far, good work!
Silverroses76
2017-07-06 15:00:49 +0000 UTCTag your shit! (Also where are you posting now that efg is banned)
Shiny Umbreon
2017-07-06 08:16:26 +0000 UTC
