[NSFW] Haley's 40-point event script.
Added 2023-04-11 00:27:37 +0000 UTCI put them in pdf since the Patreon post is a bit hard to read for long text.
If you have any suggestions after reading this, please let me know.
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yeah, I completely agree with you that 'answer the phone' sounds more natural, will definitely change it. Also thank you for feedback.
2023-04-11 13:36:38 +0000 UTClooks pretty good, I was only able to read maybe halfway and I only have one thing I think needs changing. the options for, 'pick the phone' and the things of that ilk should probably be replaced with 'answer the phone'. Haley could definitely still say 'you picked up the call really fast' as that sounds like someone talking. anyway looks great im excited to see the game! dont overwork yourself
Pickle_chin_ahh_boy
2023-04-11 04:03:59 +0000 UTC
