SI2: Pleasure Land - p. 86 (new one)
Added 2025-03-05 12:00:02 +0000 UTCThis is right after the foam party, when Betty & Grant met Riko and Rita for the first time in the hotel!
Comments
p56 to p86 !!! Why did you skip 30 numbers?
Mjerona
2025-05-22 18:43:21 +0000 UTCHi! Thanks for the comment. I'll fix it. Usually the process is like that: I draw the page, then I come up with text (write it myself), then sometimes I ask AI to proofread it. Before AI I just left it with a lot of mistakes. Before printing the book professional editor edit everything. I don't remember about that part in the text, maybe I decided to fix the story a bit after all the edits. Usually, if you see some mistakes it's either "pure me", or some typos I couldn't notice.
Tarusov
2025-03-06 11:13:28 +0000 UTCThanks, Romeo!
Tarusov
2025-03-06 11:08:42 +0000 UTCNot nitpicking (I love this comic) but it looks like there are two small typos in this page (1) "of course no!" should be "not!", and (2) "They such a ..." should be "They are such a ..." Just out of curiosity, what is your process for the text. Do other people help write it or proofread it? When in the process does that happen?
Edward
2025-03-05 18:28:42 +0000 UTCI really love the little details in your comics, like the tan lines from his shorts and her bikini bottom!
Romeo
2025-03-05 12:44:15 +0000 UTC
