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SI2: Pleasure Land - p. 86 (new one)

This is right after the foam party, when Betty & Grant met Riko and Rita for the first time in the hotel!

SI2: Pleasure Land - p. 86 (new one)

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p56 to p86 !!! Why did you skip 30 numbers?

Mjerona

Hi! Thanks for the comment. I'll fix it. Usually the process is like that: I draw the page, then I come up with text (write it myself), then sometimes I ask AI to proofread it. Before AI I just left it with a lot of mistakes. Before printing the book professional editor edit everything. I don't remember about that part in the text, maybe I decided to fix the story a bit after all the edits. Usually, if you see some mistakes it's either "pure me", or some typos I couldn't notice.

Tarusov

Thanks, Romeo!

Tarusov

Not nitpicking (I love this comic) but it looks like there are two small typos in this page (1) "of course no!" should be "not!", and (2) "They such a ..." should be "They are such a ..." Just out of curiosity, what is your process for the text. Do other people help write it or proofread it? When in the process does that happen?

Edward

I really love the little details in your comics, like the tan lines from his shorts and her bikini bottom!

Romeo


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