Neopolitan WIP
Added 2021-03-09 17:53:52 +0000 UTCHey everyone I'm here with the WIP for March's 5th place winner Neopolitan!
For Neo I'm still considering what kind of pose to go with for her, but I have decided her main image will be her having eaten team RWBY. I did about 5 or 6 different sketches and so far this pose and angle are the one I like most. I think this one shows off her small stature and enormous belly well, but I will continue brainstorming. It also lets me have some room for team RWBY's comments on their situation.
Regardless I will have Neo all done Monday the 15th after the mid-month update that same day.
But before that I'll have 3 patron sketches to share on Thursday the 11th!
This is a work in progress so some elements of the compositions are subject to change.
Enjoy!
Comments
That's a fair suggestion Lyxert, I'll consider it down the road. I want to see how this one year cool down goes for at least a few months before I consider any tweaks.
MetalForever
2021-03-10 08:37:03 +0000 UTCBesides, the final product will be amazing either way!
Magnus Canis
2021-03-10 08:36:55 +0000 UTCYou do what you want! I’m just happy you’re considering it.
Magnus Canis
2021-03-10 08:36:32 +0000 UTCThat's true, Neo is rather short and with all four in there her tummy might be larger than I have now. An as for any alts, there might be a smooth belly version / stuffing one at this time but I'll need to focus on the main image before I get to that :3
MetalForever
2021-03-10 08:35:32 +0000 UTCI'm still considering what kind of alts to do, but if there are ones stuffing is most likely.
MetalForever
2021-03-10 08:32:24 +0000 UTCDef agree with the choice of positioning, both for freedom to add RWBY's comments and for how well it shows off the whole "serving" of the ice-cream girl XD. Posing's great too - how the hell is it that even as a wireframe concept Neo's pose radiates smugness? Also noticed those scribbles behind her feet - guessing she disarmed them(?) Only thing I can't be sure on commenting for is wondering how big the final belly will be - can't quite judge "depth" from just the wireframes alone, but I think Neo's smaller than even Ruby (the shortest of the bunch), so squeezing down all four into there might make for an even bigger tum. though again, I can't really tell how wide it'd be from the front without shadows and texture, so most of the mass might be bulging towards the screen to obfuscate the true size - basically the short version's I can't tell for sure ^_^; Hope this doesn't come across as rambling; tend to have trouble truncating stuff. Only other thing to wonder on is if there's any chance of a post-digestion alt or not ^_^
MrMetroid
2021-03-10 04:05:52 +0000 UTCYeah I agree the year cooldown should be reserved for the top 3 and maybe the 4&t5th slots are like a 2-3 months cool down
Sarah F
2021-03-10 02:39:01 +0000 UTCYea metal does what they want heh
Lanturn
2021-03-10 02:03:55 +0000 UTCAssuming the same theme is gone with, yeah ^_^; Speaking of next times; it might be a bit late to say, but I kinda feel like the yearlong cooldown's a bit imbalanced for 4-5th place. For 1-3rd place, the long cooldown's offset by getting dedicated comic strips - runner-ups getting concept sketches is offset by being re-eligible for the poll on a way shorter cooldown (a month, i think?); for 4-5th, I think 6-8 months might have fit better than the same cooldown a full comic gets(?). That said, that's just me - not gonna assume what does and doesn't work for Metal's side of things ^_^;
MrMetroid
2021-03-10 01:58:55 +0000 UTC*pets head* yea no worries things happen oh well will just wait for next time
Lanturn
2021-03-09 22:15:01 +0000 UTCHonestly figured that meant RWBY characters had a good shot to be that popular - again, didn't know 2B and Bulma were gonna be in this time. Also didn't realize a yearlong cooldown was gonna be put on anyone in the top-5 from this month onward - thought that was only gonna be for the comic-strip winners; again, my own fault. Don't need any help kicking myself there T_T
MrMetroid
2021-03-09 21:25:11 +0000 UTCYea you should’ve waited since metal just did team RWBY
Lanturn
2021-03-09 20:40:11 +0000 UTCYeah, I was bemoaning that same thing myself when I saw she was up against freaking Bulma and 2B - woulda saved suggesting her for later if I'd known that'd happen. ^_^;
MrMetroid
2021-03-09 20:06:14 +0000 UTCPersonal opinion but I feel like something like that should’ve been saved for a 3 panel comic but still looks nice heh too bad she didn’t get more oh well you win some you lose some
Lanturn
2021-03-09 18:03:30 +0000 UTCThis is perfect for Neo, Metal! May I ask if there’ll be stuffing alts of this? I’d love to see her get stuffed by the team in both meanings of the word!
Magnus Canis
2021-03-09 17:58:02 +0000 UTC
