Mystique Soldier Ch.23
Added 2022-06-09 02:49:50 +0000 UTCChapter 23- Back to America
Comments
I was so looking forward to someone giving him the girlfriend speech but kinda hoping all the older women in his life are a part of the discussion just to add more spice to it instead of something awkward
Gerald
2022-07-09 00:34:51 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter
Gilgamos
2022-06-13 10:42:25 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter
Gilgamos
2022-06-13 09:46:30 +0000 UTCYeh I realized too late that I've been completely ignoring Sara's character....by this time, the hints of what she is should've already been clear, had I stuck to my original plans. But I focused more on improving story's pace than side characters and bungled her plot up. This vacation gives a good chance to salvage it tho so I'm manhandling her into it lol. Still, hope you enjoyed the rest!
Robs511
2022-06-12 16:01:02 +0000 UTCThe bit with Sara caught me off guard, it seemed to come out of nowhere. I love the advancement in his relationship tho
Ilay Hyams
2022-06-10 07:11:21 +0000 UTC
