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Zenith of Sorcery Chapter 12: Final Verdict

The next chapter is here:

https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/71045/zenith-of-sorcery/chapter/1670357/12-final-verdict

https://www.fictionpress.com/s/3368346/12/Zenith-of-Sorcery

I almost made it before midnight this time. Almost.

Anyway, I think this is a good chapter. I hope you like it.

Comments

Should be fixed now.

Domagoj Kurmaic

Typo: "The next test will is also the last one," -will

Andrew Browne

It is, and yet I need more.

Mr R

But writing is hard!

Domagoj Kurmaic

I was wrong. I need more!

Mr R

This is a satisfying chapter.

Mr R

Lol yeah it was good 😊

Faa Diallo

I owe much of the story to cultivation novels, so I hope the story doesn't come off as mean-spirited towards them. They're a big part of the inspiration. But I think it's okay to poke at the tropes every now and then and laugh. :)

Domagoj Kurmaic

Lol I reread the end of last chapter and lol I love the dig at cultivation novels.

Faa Diallo

Thanks for the chapter. You did a good job giving the children some character with first impressions and I'm sure they'll continue to be fleshed out as well as we go along now that he's committed to being Great Teacher Marcus. I also like that he's a little bit petty sometimes. Going out of his way to learn that voice projection spell just because he didn't like the idea that Gaius knew a spell that he didn't. Threatening to summon the snake again when they got cheeky with him. It makes him more relatable. BTW, when he sent to kids to solve the puzzle spheres he said "One house! Go go go!". You probably meant "One hour!".

DiabolicalGenius

A very comfortable and insightful chapter to read. I'd wish there was more but I'm very happy about what is.

Tim Deral

Thank you for the chapter and congrats on getting to bed early! ✨

Monotropa


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