Chapter 97: Illusory
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A new chapter is here! Sorry I'm late... again... and that I don't have any new worldbuilding... again...
Anyway here is some fanart of the angel that appeared in the previous chapter. I already added it into the fanart page on my wordpress but I don't know how many people saw it so I figured I would also put it here.
Enjoy.
Comments
Thanks. Added to the list.
Domagoj Kurmaic
2019-03-24 10:55:38 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter! Here are some typos I spotted: How can I be sure you won’t just take advantage of the truce of build up your forces and dishonor it a few days later? => [to] build up how to covey it to others => [convey] Don’t tell me actually think => [you] actually think a bunch of people that escape from the time loop into the real world => [escaped]
Adrien Matricon
2019-03-23 21:31:15 +0000 UTCReally? I thought this chapter put an end to the possibility that Zorian could convince all the involved parties to erase their memories. Quatach-Ichl especially. I think it's more likely that Zorian is looking for way to make Zack think they all died / had their memories erased. That's what he is testing with Spear of Resolve in the last section.
wanderer117
2019-03-19 19:19:42 +0000 UTCA very interesting chapter, I look forward to seeing the next few chapters and it's really interesting to see the climax built up to. So far it looks like your foreshadowing Zorian faking his death in some way shape or form and making all the others erase their memories of the time loop. If Zorian does end up faking his death, hopefully he does it in a epic way or through saving Zach's life. In order to make Zach less questioning.
2019-03-19 12:33:53 +0000 UTCThanks. Also, it's not your fault but I hate it how patreon (and other sites) makes copying text from comments on their site a real pain in the ass. Formatting is completely lost, so even if the original commenter placed it in neat groups and paragraphs like you did, when I copy-pase it into an editing folder it ends up condensed into a one giant, unwieldy paragraph. Anyway. Just complaining for the sake of complaining...
Domagoj Kurmaic
2019-03-18 18:44:08 +0000 UTCThis chapter was incredibly bittersweet; I'm scared of what Zorian and the group stand to lose in this conflict.
JDG
2019-03-18 05:37:37 +0000 UTCLoved it. The end of the chapter especially brought a smile to my face. I noticed a few typos [Tree dragon mages…] he lamented should be [Three dragon mages…] he lamented When I say I can get Oganj and his group work with me, should be When I say I can get Oganj and his group to work with me, If the primordial is released and lays waste to out surroundings, Should be If the primordial is released and lays waste to our surroundings, Even if the truth holds, we still must Should be Even if the truce holds, we still must
wanderer117
2019-03-18 03:56:59 +0000 UTCNovelty!! :D
Adurna
2019-03-18 03:13:36 +0000 UTCThank you!
Andrew
2019-03-18 02:37:31 +0000 UTCspider date!!!! spider daughter!!!!!
Heireau
2019-03-18 02:18:07 +0000 UTCThanks for the chapter :D
Daniel I Beer
2019-03-18 02:08:01 +0000 UTCthanks for the chapter
Corwin Amber
2019-03-18 01:51:19 +0000 UTC