Chapter 86: A New World

It should. Though it's another one that I already fixed, by now. Someone had already reported it, I just didn't get around to fixing it up until now.

Domagoj Kurmaic

Found this ". How am I supposed know to seek you out for favours" Shoudn't it be "How am I supposed to know"?

Dark Prophet

Spoiler alert for anyone who hasn't read it yet, you have been warned :) I was thinking about the whole issue with them getting out, and the morality of it all. With Ilsa being one of the people with temporary markers, and her talking about the True Creation bit in this chapter, it gives some foreshadowing into them maybe just making real bodies for themselves when they do get outside. This kind of brings in the morality of their options though. If they get out and replace their younger selves, they are technically destroying a person and taking their place, but in a way, we're constantly doing that anyways, and it would be no different than Zack who originally entered the loop and would be going back to his original body. On the flip side, going into a new body would prevent that from happening, but would that honestly be better? Would two people suddenly existing in the world and all the confusion and split emotions that it would bring be better? You compound that with potentially a group of them doing that...

David Wild

Yeah. Added to the list.

Domagoj Kurmaic

Thanks for the chapter! I might have found a typo: in "afraid that he and Zach were trying to make use of them as much as possible without discarding them" you probably meant "before" instead of "without"

Adrien Matricon

Nice chapter! Found this "He had pretty much been a cripple the last time [the] she had seen him." Pointless note: at your current rate of just over 7600 words per chapter, if the story goes for another 17 chapters, you'll beat the bible (King James) by word count. It's already longer than LOTR.

I've been reading since 2014 and it's been every three weeks quite consistently since even before then. As much as I'd like a faster update schedule, I don't know how likely it would be---though if Domagoj wants to do it, he would certainly get more financial support from me per chapter as an incentive. ;)

JDG

Gah, so hilarious. I love how you slowed the pace a little, giving characters time to dwell on this new situation.

JDG

A great chapter! I can't wait until the next one.

ClearMadness

Thanks! Greatly heightened anticipation now that the end is nearing :)

Adurna

Thank you!

Andrew

I love the story and look forward to it every time a new chapter is posted. A question for you though, are you considering updating the story more often, say every two weeks or something like that? Asking for a friend.

Thanks for the chapter. And as for the question at the end who would want to be the person to tell someone with a giant magically enhanced Hydra that they couldn’t keep it.

Brian Griffith

Thanks for the chapter

Daniel I Beer

Thanks for the Chapter!!!