Demise of a Cheerleader - Chapter 1
Added 2021-02-19 02:10:21 +0000 UTCI've had many folks ask me to turn my single short scene "Demise of a Cheerleader" into a fully realized story. So, I decided I'd give it a shot. I'm not sure exactly how I feel about it yet. I do love Suzy though. She's pitch dark character and I really enjoyed getting in her head. I don't foresee a happy ending with this one. Let me know what you all think.
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Welcome Adriano! It's a pleasure to have you. Word, Wordpad, OpenOffice, Libre will all open RTF files. If you are on a MAC, Pages will open them with no issue. I'll be happy to upload or send you another format if you need me to, just let me know.
2022-08-22 21:08:03 +0000 UTCHello, I'm new to your page and I'm already hooked up. One small question, if I may: could you please upload the files in other formats as well? Or maybe suggest me an APP to open RTFs? 😅😅 Thanks!
Adriano Ziffer
2022-08-22 06:52:01 +0000 UTCIt's interesting you bring it up. I originally thought about writing it from Alyssa's point of view. When I went back and read the original short, Suzy brings the spark to the story, and I thought it would be hotter and more interesting to explore her character and motivations. I'm glad you approve and I think it'll make it hotter in the long run.
2021-02-20 14:44:13 +0000 UTCVery good start. I like seeing it from the feeder's perspective, and I think it would be cool to see at least most of the story written from suzy's cold, calculating stare as she utilizes every new insecurity and humiliation Alyssa gains against her.
Ryan Caday
2021-02-20 04:44:51 +0000 UTCI'm so glad to hear it! I'm looking forward to exploring these characters and having some fun with them.
2021-02-20 01:08:41 +0000 UTCI’m loving this!
Heyson
2021-02-19 17:59:23 +0000 UTCI am liking it so far, even has a little intrigue.
Bradley Hall
2021-02-19 05:17:35 +0000 UTC
